10-15 lines
no c/dr/h votes
no biting,feeding
due by 6pm after check in
KO WARNING'S
Da_Killa_Kid
10-15 lines
no c/dr/h votes
no biting,feeding
due by 6pm after check in
its 250 posts to vote though
Hey, soz for free postin da kid but this herb is meant to battlin me 2 but wont set it up...
Peace
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***VOTE ON THIS PLZ...I WILL RETURN FAV.***
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this is my check in but he aint even online right now and i got shit to do so ill drop either tonight or tomorrow.
ayo ill vote if all ya ppl'z drop ya verses in
Here it goes. Its my first time spitting so bear with me here...
See a battle against me is like a sick man against cancer
Your futures been determined so your life doesn’t really matter
You’re a young kid; you got few decades to go
Dis respect me then ill be the one responsible for that one punch KO
I do admire your work
YES!!! I was the one to challenge you jerk
Respect was given
That’s because you’re spitting hot verses for a kid who is only eleven
You got silly dreams; you think you will make dividends
Wake up you stupid kid cause here is where your dreams end
Idiotic thoughts of a kid who is really not that serious
Battling against a man who has ENIGMATIC THOUGHTS OF GENIUS...
Aight, thats my first time spitting. Tell me Killa Kid if it has potential. Now everyone drop a line or so and tell me how did i do.
This bitch Pmed me for a battle, so i'll handle em a bit,
but shit it aint easy to tell your son that he's a bitch,
he may have thought that the lyrics he put down were fine,
but he's full of shit...I told this bitch to stop eatin his rhymes,
ass whoopins in past took me to the top of the hill,
ill piss hot lyrics down wind and hit you right in the grill,
I even warned you when you pleaded...find a rook to touch,
now ya shook as fuck and stuck cause you dropped the buck,
im to quick to snuff, rush to get a whiff of my dust,
Cause KO got it.....and he aint even tryin to get up,
i let em have it exstatic to catch a loss from the kid,
^^^future tense, past tense nigga you already did,
Kila Kid took this pretty easy I think...Good verse from him...KO WARNING'S not a bad first spit from you...try and come more creative and original....Direct ya punches/personals/and metas more atr ya opponent than at jus a general person...Killa Kid you had some nice punches and metas...good flow to..I like this line
"This bitch Pmed me for a battle, so i'll handle em a bit,
but shit it aint easy to tell your son that he's a bitch,"
Good creative opener
Please drop an honest vote here...thanks guys http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=116562
A few achievements here and there
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^^help this site out and drop votes for other's.
dont be a HYPOCRYTE asking for Honest Votes
then not dropping HONEST votes.
Im just trying to get people to VOTE more Often.
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aight. i thought that Killa Kid took this One. He had Better Flow
and Disses. Punches made Me Laugh A little, but over-all the
battle was Mildly Boring to be Honest. No Offense. Both of you
could prolly spit alot Better. I liked Killa's Ryme Scheme Much Better.
the Vocab Goes to Killa aswell as the Complexity. Over-all I liked Killa's
verse better due to his flow and Punch, they Were Much Btter then
KO'S. Ko, try using lines that will make People laugh about your Oppenent
more, while Using Multies. More of them. Just A little advice.
vote-da killa kid.
NOT SURE IF I HAVE 250 posts, but i'm sure my vote Should
Be Valid. Maybe.
RETURN THE FUCKING FAVOR PLEASE. THERE ARE TO MANY
HYPOCRYTES ON R.B! I TOOK THE TIME, PLEASE DROP A VOTE
MINE TOO. I HATE SLEEPERS. LoL.
Me_____VERSES_____INFINIT SKILLZ
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=115148
Me____VERSES______D’CYPLE
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...68#post1206468
Me_____VERSES_____UBEN. SONNED
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...32#post1206532
Me______VERSES_____SUNSHINE
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=115900
Lets go people hit this up 250 votes make em count.
VOTE people..come on now..im a first timer here..give me my dues....
Uppin this shit yo number 2 or some shit. anyway get em in.
eh, one sided battle,
The killa kid's verse wasnt great, but it shows he wasnt rying and he could have came better than this, weak punches,no metas or multis, a few decent disses, but overall you need to work on some of your stuff 6/10
ko wrning, this really showed that it was your first battle because it was kinda weak. You needed more punches and also, the few punches you did have was weak.You need to work on that, try to throw personals, and also fix your structure.
your verse should look like this;
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not the way you had it,
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that makes it hard for the reader to really get the feel of your verse, but you'll get better in time. peace.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...=113306&page=2
^^re-do your vote killa kid, it was DQ'd for not enough feedback...thanks..
Uppin #3................................................ ..................................................
I fo'got to leave a link, this battle is so old, but it never got closed, so hit this up with an opinion/vote
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...t=kry-o-gene-x
thanks in advance
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