aight.....
10 lines
house rules
verses due tomorrow night at 12 est
blind spits
KO WARNING's
~Yo What Up~
aight.....
10 lines
house rules
verses due tomorrow night at 12 est
blind spits
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Dont make me bust out with fucking white ass jokes
But shit I don’t mind murdering the dude from queers ass folks
Eminem wanna be, he must be ashamed
Your walking on footsteps that has already been claimed.
you got skills I aint going to hate
But whats the point when you posted 30 – 8?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!
30 wins against your own crew 8 losses cause ur crew abandoned you
no one is here to help you now so what are you going to do?!?!?!?!?!?!??!!?!?
Thinking you hard picking up battle with virgins
Yah 'im a virgin in RB but that dont mean ur fucking.
CHECKIN IN......
ill key somethin up later tonight......
i got a more important battle to do first........
dont take so long...deadline is midnight...eastern time...so that would be 9 over in the west coast...
aight.......this victory is dedicated to jeremy salo.........check it out.......yo, yo.......
ive just started to begin, but its obvious im gonna win
and how do you expect me to lose to a guy.....
....who hasnt even figured out how to check in
ur to thin, fuckin twig, comin on this site actin like your big
but ud think hed some some sort of social life....
....but hes still to afraid to imput a sig
for a pig like u whos 18, ur wack and basically unseen
i mean just read ur shit, cause after i started....
...I was positive it had to be Halloween
yea im mean, but at the start you were movin wit grace
and he knows no ones even gonna read his shit.....
....so hes forced to implant his own faces
ur a disgrace, u dumb bitch, its obvious why ur runnin
and listen up, and dont say that i didnt warn ya....
.....but it is damn obvious that a ko is comin
blah......whateva.......
lets get some votes up in dis bitch........
Uppin # 1 !!!!!!!!!!
Leave A Link And Ill Return The Favor Bitches!!!!!!!!!!!!
UPPIN # 2 !!!!!!!!!!
cmon everybody.......dont sleep on this..........
leave a link and ill return the favor.........
ok here it is:
Warnings- your punches were weak man, you didnt hit him hard enough or direct enough. The end didnt make much sense to me either. flow was ok i s'pose.
Spastic - Nice flow, punches were ok, more direct, made sense too lol, alltogether a better spit.
Vote - Spastic
Return fav on my link please both
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:::S M O K E~~~D A W G:::
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***VOTE ON THIS PLZ...I WILL RETURN FAV.***
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Yo check it out
Both verses were kinda weak. Neither punches hit very well
Spastic, Your verse was structured better but you drag your shit out too much. You could be better if you just get to the point
K.O, You said you were a virgin but that doesn't mean you are gonna get pity votes.
You need some structure, vocab, better punches and metas. Don't give up, just listen to your peers.
Vote: spastic lyricist
^^thanx for the feedback........
UPPIN # 3 !!!!!!!!!!!
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holy shit, i cant believe how bad this getting slept on.......
UPPIN FOR THE FIRST DAMN VOTE!!!!!!!!
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aight my vote goes to spastic for the better verse
he had the better verse and the best line in the battle in thius one:
he had the better punches and the better personals alsoive just started to begin, but its obvious im gonna win
and how do you expect me to lose to a guy.....
....who hasnt even figured out how to check in
the flow was good and also the structure was good
the opener weas good and the closer was ok
the other guy was wack
just work on some things and u will be ok
my vote goes to spastic
hit up the first battle in my sig and ill come back and poll
Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.
-ILLunatic
Last edited by ILLunatic; February 29th, 2004 at 11:16 PM
Ok this is how i saw it go down,
KO- U didnt have the best punches, none of them hit that hars, or at lest hard enough to grade on, but i did like how near the end u went in the personal area about spastic, about his crew and shit, but ur whole verse sounded kinda choppy through the whole thing.
Now SPASTIC or Yo wut up- Ur verse was better than KO's, meaning u got my vote, but heres my explanation, u seem like u have more and better all around skill, ur verse was kinda choppy as well, but it proly sounds better when saying, same with u KO. I also like how through ur whole verse u knew u had the whole battle in hand, meaning u had more confidence, and skills.
So my vote is: Spastic Lyricist or Yo wut up
^^^thanx for the vote......
UPPIN FOR THE LAST TIME!!!!!!!!!!!
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wow....spastic took this hands down....yo man.....ya intro waz sickkkkkkkkkkkkkk
goood shyt with dat.....KO- leave this site.......plze dawg....no hate tho...but bounce!!!
ite
very one-sided battle...spastic- u didnt have 2 try.....
punches- spastic
humnour- spastic- opener....once again- sickkk
flow- spastic
structure- spastic- professional standard.....lol
vote- spastic....one sided.....
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=115933
^^u know wat to do......thnx....n uppin 4 yall!
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