10-16 lines max
no d/r
no crew votes
2 hr. to drop verse after check in..........dis is my check in.........
good luck nigga..............
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10-16 lines max
no d/r
no crew votes
2 hr. to drop verse after check in..........dis is my check in.........
good luck nigga..............
Your rapping is like shit your never going to be good at it
You Smell like dick because you been sucking and licking oh thats sick
Never going to get a date because your so ugly got a face that even a mother could hate
and i know you got A.D.D. and you fucked in the ass and get H.I.V.
and like a baby you got a small dick like slim shady
and your a homo on the street trying to think of a beat to get some money to eat
im going to cut off your head throw you in a river make the water look red
and your mom was good last night but when your dad saw use we got in a little fight
but its all right you liked it and so i fucked it
and i know you be crying saying you won this battle damn you be lying
your time to spit sorry it toke me so long i had to get off for a sec
Haha Reefer madd violent dawgy!!!!!! Hahahahah AK-Mixa Spit maynE!!
I wanna see this shit its gonna be fuckin hot!!!!!! :shoot: :banghead: AK-MIXA C'mon man!! Come on !!! Spit that shit!! REefer is a crazyy motherfuckaH!
reefer is a horse made for lyrically roping.......typing up his noose and still choking
blunt rolled up in my lungs and smoking......nigga is a Planter's peanut and roasting
reefer knows testin my rhymes a deadly weapon... he's gonna die by lethal injection
hoe can't blaze lines from hell, jus go to heaven...whackness isn't cured by medicine
reefer being catapulted by boulders and crushed......ashes to ashes and dust to dust
I'm still standing like unreligious life being untouched.....hoe wearin away like old rust
White Ts G don't even wear bandannas or Hanes....you'd be better off rippin MCaines
hoe's lines are earthly flat, simple and plain....my geographic climate isn't spit but rain
reefer wears a bra and his crew still ain't strapped...leaving Hatworld getting capped
ink flooded all RB pages covering reefer's raps..now crossed out with an x left black
yo all MC vote for one of use and tell use how good we did
uppin for votes and shit.............................................. ..................................
uppin.....................fo mo votes.............................................
Stop Uppin People Will Come And Check Ur Battle Out Soon Enuff!!
This opener straight blew reefer out of the water. Mixa's punches were much stronger. He was more personal and he had good metas.Quote:
Originally Posted by ak-mixa
Reefer's was kind of stilted, which hurt his flow. He had a few good punches, but he overplayed the gay stuff like so many others. MY VOTE: MIXA
Hit these: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show....php?p=1171531
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111280
my links were wrong
Hit these: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?p=113308
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111280
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last uppin............................................. ......................poll votes any one?....
ummm...is this battle for real?
*laughs at reefer*..
flow/structure- ak
i don't believe reefer knows what rap is... he just heard some kids at lunch one day and thought it was cool
ak's lines were real stretched, each line was almost a bar, but since this other kid can't concieve simple concepts of rap... ak gets this
punches/personals- ak
ummm.... reefer couldn't buy a punchline off a dope rapper "you gotta small dick like slim shady"... get real kid, i've heard of internet rappers being on em's dick... but knowing the size?! cmon
multis/rhyme scheme- ak
i actually liked ak's rhyme scheme....if he shortened his lines up and used multis... he would have a killer flow/structure/rhyme scheme/ etc....
reefer...... *chuckles*.... give up rap
umm overall- ak
this was cold blooded murder.....the reef has been blown out of the water
yes i agree with bane ak won this battle
Flow//structure:: ak got this one his strcuture was original and after you got used to it it flowed pretty good
punches: ak , ur opener was good and all your other rhymes were solid
personals: ak
multis: ak even though there wernt many
overall: ak you dope nigaz
wait im not black(my bad)
has that ever happened to you before when your wiggin so hard you think your black??
happens to me all the time bra
gggg unit
sorry heppedned agin
vote:ak
Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Axiom
Also plz vote on my battles since i took the time to freepost.......... i mean vote sorry
actually really vote on my battles or ill be straight tripping while i kick ol schule
aaaaaahhhhhh suck my dick u suck and u should battle me............... ok bye
Ugh...
Reefer: U got destroyed. I hated ur verse. I didn't like ur concepts and ur flow was off. Structure was weak. Come with better punches and please get better mtas. Keep elevatin'.
ak mixa: Ur verse was aight. Not ur best, but yuo gave good effort and I liked some of the things u had to say. We gonna have to battle sometime. Work on harder hittin' punches and flow. Keep elevatin'.
Vote: ak mixa
*Vote on my battles and I'l return the favor later.*
man ak fix yur struc...its getting bad...
it fucks up yur wordplay...so elavate...
u won this my man...u had punchlines...
weak ones but they hit decent enough...
reefer hit blah...semi decent but weak...
both had whack struc...lack of personals
even if they were attempted...they were,
mis directed and came off semi bland...
both need to work on flow and sense of,
originality and creativness...but overall...
imma vote for ak-mixa...for a better battle,
oriented verse...hit my battles up mainne...
Break it down. ..
Reefer
Your rapping is like shit your never going to be good at it
You Smell like dick because you been sucking and licking oh thats sick
^ uhhh not the strongest opener . . .
Never going to get a date because your so ugly got a face that even a mother could hate
^ LoL pretty jokez
and i know you got A.D.D. and you fucked in the ass and get H.I.V.
and like a baby you got a small dick like slim shady
^ what the fuck.. to many "likes" not feelin that
and your a homo on the street trying to think of a beat to get some money to eat
^ o.k kinda creative
im going to cut off your head throw you in a river make the water look red
^ heh... basic... not bad
and your mom was good last night but when your dad saw use we got in a little fight
^ hehe... thats expected
but its all right you liked it and so i fucked it
^ wtf? Your creative and crazy
and i know you be crying saying you won this battle damn you be lying
^ hehe ok closer... kinda funny
AK-MiXa
reefer is a horse made for lyrically roping.......typing up his noose and still choking
blunt rolled up in my lungs and smoking......nigga is a Planter's peanut and roasting
^ hehe pretty good opener
reefer knows testin my rhymes a deadly weapon... he's gonna die by lethal injection
hoe can't blaze lines from hell, jus go to heaven...whackness isn't cured by medicine
^ Ohh dirty... good creativity
reefer being catapulted by boulders and crushed......ashes to ashes and dust to dust
I'm still standing like unreligious life being untouched.....hoe wearin away like old rust
^ Not bad.... not good either
White Ts G don't even wear bandannas or Hanes....you'd be better off rippin MCaines
hoe's lines are earthly flat, simple and plain....my geographic climate isn't spit but rain
haha that was good... creative stuff amigo!
reefer wears a bra and his crew still ain't strapped...leaving Hatworld getting capped
ink flooded all RB pages covering reefer's raps..now crossed out with an x left black
^ Pretty dark and destructive closer.. i liked it... quite abstract!
Both sides had good flow and structure.. REefer was kinda played and didn't really wow me at all. Ak-mixa had some good abstract creativity which I liked so he takes this one.
Vote - Ak-MixA