Ok: max 18 lines. keep it real. I drop first.
Ok: max 18 lines. keep it real. I drop first.
checkin in .....................u drop first ! ! ! ! !
Child prodigy in child pornography
filmed in bed givin head for all to see.
did i hear you say child, beg your pardon?
I'm a man you in fuckin kindergarten
prodigy means you lean toward first at the top
then why tellin me to be first one to drop?
cuz you scared, unprepared, with weaknesses bared
your rhymes are broke, you better go get em repaired.
but that's cool, you got no need to panic
just bring em to me, I'm the lyric mechanic
but you ain't got a real job so you got no cash
some day you'd like to become trailor trash
but you ain't there yet, child, so stay in the gutter
and take you're weak-ass shit right back home to your mother.
Child prodigy in child pornography
filmed in bed givin head for all to see.
did i hear you say child, beg your pardon?
I'm a man; you in fuckin kindergarten
prodigy means you lean toward first at the top
then why tellin me to be first one to drop?
cuz you scared, unprepared, with weaknesses bared
your rhymes are broke, you better go get em repaired.
but that's cool, you got no need to panic
just bring em to me, I'm the lyric mechanic
but you ain't got a real job so you got no cash
some day you'd like to become trailor trash
but you ain't there yet, child, so stay in the gutter
and take you're weak-ass shit right back home to your mother.
sorry to post that twice. my computer is shitty!!
aight check it
I need to help you fix ur name on this microphone
yea i made u dirty, but you didn't make the endzone
you wish ur rhymes were complex, but they were really weak
Your confused in this battle, like u brought a snowboard to the beach
like bill you get beseached, i knock u so ur not greater
someone must have not cold you kid, i'm the master-debator
I'm the lover your the hater, cause you always fail to flow
Ur calling me the child, but battlin me's a no no
and at least a gotta home, and who you calling white trash
kid you'll be serving my fries one day, so u can kiss my ass
I never miss a pass, and always make my threes
no i'm not ready just yet dawg, get up off your knees
i meant told not cold my bad guys . . . . .. sorry
uppin............................................. .........................
uppin............................................. ...............
aint it a rule u cant feed off other peoples rymes, well child lost anyway cus he fed real weak and u sayin master-debator would be killed by any who would feed off your lines so, u lost but woulda been killed if it was a blind spit or dirty went first. and u wouldnt' be on a computer if u didnt have a home.
and dirty dis line was, tight" cuz you scared, unprepared, with weaknesses bared
your rhymes are broke, you better go get em repaired.
but that's cool, you got no need to panic
just bring em to me, I'm the lyric mechanic
but you ain't got a real job so you got no cash" good multi and good metaphor
vote- dirtyendzone
both flows weren't that great. dity u had an ok flow and scheme, sum punches that were weak, sum personals. Child u had an ok flow and structure, probly lil better punches, and personals. vote-child
Reason: his punches hit a lil harder, even though the lines were mad simple. both of u needed to spit harder too.
fav line only from child-should of been worded differently, but the punch was ok.you wish ur rhymes were complex, but they were really weak
Your confused in this battle, like u brought a snowboard to the beach
vote on my battle in the sig.
thanks, peace
uppin. please vote on this!!........................
Dirty got this one, he was much, much more personal in his punches, and in my mind his punches were better overall. The rules weren't fully stated in the beg. but the no feedin usually is a rule around here. Since it wasn't stated, its cool, as long as its not alot of it. Should come up with ur own shit anywayz. This vote wasn't biased towards that at all. Creativity was about a tie... i think you can both use ur minds a little more and come up with more witty punches. and also work more ideas into one verse.
vote- dirty
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Structure: Tie
Multies: Tie
Respect: Dirty
Flow: Dirty
VOTE: Dirty
Uppin. Drop a link and i'll hit yours up with a vote for sure
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