10-16 lines. i will go first. drop as fast as you can so we can get it done with. you check in and then i will drop on my check.
neuromancer
dirtyendzone
10-16 lines. i will go first. drop as fast as you can so we can get it done with. you check in and then i will drop on my check.
check in 1 2......................................
Man, who the fuck is neuromancer?
That’s the question, here’s the answer.
His spoken word is just absurd, and his punches are obscured
I hope he gets that clap all cured. It’s hit it’s brain, his verse is blurred.
Any rhyme he spit is easily turned. his dick is red cuz he got burned
His Ma had clap, he shoulda learned. He just can't rap, so be concerned.
I clock him with a right and he start seein double
I Pop him with the left and he bust like a bubble
He see dirty comin, without a hubble; he know he in trouble
I poke out his eyes, the blood makes a puddle.
If this is a war, he’s my bitch hussein, An easy target, I can’t complain.
I fuck him up so insane when he walk he need to use a cane.
I’m like a weapon of mass demise, When I spit this shit he shields his eyes.
Pulverized, his skin fries, bitch ass cries, I ain’t surprised.
This battles getting “merky,” I can’t see fuckin thing.
Crucify this turkey and crown me the rightful king.
good luck
Hit this: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111280
I deal in text pest, read ya verse and now my goal ain't so big
...When all i'm really here to do is erase the contents of ya sig!
Dig ya grave for you...but i ain't got any ill conceived intentions
'cuz if there's a will there's a way......
...............................for ya family to inerhit your possessions!
Pillage ya village raw...plant ya vietnamese face in crop bedding
until you have more rice marks on ya cheeks........
...........................then if you were coming from your wedding!
Beheading this fag, posting first is the only time ya have me topped
This battle stopped? even ya rules state, upon check in you're dropped!
Obvious i won this battle, tried to click the link to hit fag harder
What a surpirse it was........
............................To see you had a Child Prodigy for a father!
Why even bother? Beatin' a punk kids brains in who got no savvy
'Cuz i want to be immortalized..
...............................like when you put Child Prodigy in ya avy!
Why did i even battle you? This dirtyendzone pussy's defenseless
Be damn sure you'd be tastin' defeat....
........................................If Neuro hadn't beat you senseless!
Uppin(1) If you drop a link, I'll hit it up......
Uppin(2) If you drop a link, I'll hit it up.......
Dirty End zone won...I can't be fucked to explain so FUCK the Admins,...............................
nuer- your rhymes were streched, and didn't have any real punches in there besides that your never on top thing, but that wasn't really much of a punch.
dirty- yours flowed better cus it wasn't streched and i could notice the multi's u put in.
good vocab besides rhymin wit "cane" one of those times, das never cool. punches hit better cus u actually had some.
vote- dirty
UPPIN(3) Seriously. Vote and drop a link. I will hit it up.
Uppin... quit sleepin! drop a link with your vote and I'll give feedback!
neuro decent but u streched too much dirty got this one hit me up son fire and thabest poll it up
lame post. at least vote if you want some love. uppin
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=121923
^ vote please <<<<<~pz~
Dirtyendzone- it was a Good verse. Ya had a nice flow. Nice mutlies, Ya punches were better then his....So pretty much ya get my honesty vote.
Neuromancer- What kind of name is that(lol), Anyways ur rhymes were streched. You didnt have any good punches really. the only good punches you had was prolly at the end. The rest didnt sound good.......but it was a close battle tho
vote- dirtyendzone
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