Inactive...

*Joins in the hug*

:wtf:

Ok 3-6 asked me for some feed on his battle and here it is...
We should all give feed on each others battles, leave links

First of all, I disagree with Stubby on this battle, I thought it was close and you might even have won. Frankly, your verse wasn't your best and I've seen better from you. I did like the emulate his avvy and retire line, that was probably your best. For your quotes, i would just suggest quotation marks as it doesnt mess with the flow as much, but thats just my opinion. I liked how you incorporate wit and creativity too. Bass treble line wasnt too bad either. Overall not so bad. I thought you won. Maybe I'm biased.

Allevyate Vs. Lyrically abusive...
I really enjoyed your opener, it was really good, your next bar took a nice shot at Pandoras box i thought that was a nice punch, next bar with the spit heavenly/ ticket to hell verse was nice too. I wasnt feeling the charlie brown/ vietnam/tall tree line, and the bar that followed it with the him havin more wins but you have a better percentage line i wasnt feeling either, it was kinda a little bit of self glorification and you went out a lil weak, The first six lines were great though. I read his stuff and i dont know how he is beating you to tell you the truth, not being biased or anything... all he really had was an opener and closer, all the rest of his stuff was pretty weak. I mean L.A. had to bars with punchs about the poll bar....was really lame, Its really sorry if you lose this battle cause anyone should see that you won this clearly. Bottom line in this battle from my point of view is you had six great lines and then you lost your touch, but your material was alot better than his.

^^Thanks for the feed, and I know my last six lines sucked I was really rushin at the end to tell you the truth cause i had 5 minutes left, not to make excuses.

About a battle with Lyrical Violaters, Stubby really wants to do it, so what do you guys think?

yeah i really would i dont know if im allowed to post in here but im just tellin yall, dude yall are my fav crew besides my own, i dont like any of the other crews, but i just want to do this so i can put my members on levels, this isnt a hate battle i just think its a good experience for both crews, so pick 3 people in your crew includin leaders if they wish, to go up against 3 of my members

Ya, lets battle them, I already merked Playmo, even though the battle isnt over its too clear, MC Merc isnt nothin, there crew is weak, Stubby might be the only decent lyricist they have. Lets go ahead and battle them, im down to battle but its a 3 on 3 so i guess alley and Kwik you guys need another person, im down for the battle but its your decision who is chosen for it.

Allevyate: thanks 4 tha feedback on my open mic. i DO have a beat to use for it (track 5 on Dr. Dre 2001 [insturmental version]), and if i ever go audio (i'm not for now) i'll do it again in there. thanx again.

about Zone, I like him, so far... i say we give him a chance (after he drops his 10 lines, duh).

and MC canadian... ooo, i dunno. stucture gets a little so-so in some places, wit those short-as-hell lines in there. i think MAYBE, but slim chance. let's see a battle of his.

Wassup everybody this is Street Legend................Im just checkin to see whats goin on. I got a battle open wit dipset...lol....funny man. Im expectin a easy win unless he pre-wrote his shit but still he weak regardless......Holla.

and about battlin Lyrical Violators... dear god, those fools fuckin suck ass! if you need someone at the LAST SECOND, go head n sign me up fo' it... but only if you don't have enough at the last minute. ok? (i mean i CAN battle... but i only do it once in a LONG time, or if i HAVE to.)

yo man, if we gonna start a crew maybe we should make a crew website and shit,and we can get each other msn and we'll battle each other and we woul like practice and shit.

I opened this thread to gauge interest. This is for poetry and open mic heads (I’d like more poetry).I don’t care If you’re in a crew already. This would be more of a second fam, than an RB “crew”. I don’t care If you’re really ill or just average, you are welcome to join.

I want the focal point to be reading and replying to each other’s work, as well as working together on pieces regularly. Like I said, this is more of a fam, and about elevating in the craft of writing, in general than just another crew. This will be a democracy, and arrogance or thinking you’re better than others are not qualities of people who will be accepted, no matter how “ill” you think you are. We are all equal, and here to write and have fun. Lets do that.

If you’re interested, drop a link and your AIM name, and I will contact you. If I invited you, no need to drop a link.

Roster:
Bigg E Z
Danny Ocean
Forlorn
Illunatic
Junio
LM
Perpetual
R. Corey
Refugi
Topic
T West
Wicked

My Last Three Pieces:
...Breath
Life After Lust w/ R. Corey
On A Naked Tree w/ Langston Hughes

My Aim: Euthanasias Kiss

-W1

Kandy, how old is you?

if you can make a website that would be dope