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Ok 3-6 asked me for some feed on his battle and here it is...
We should all give feed on each others battles, leave links
First of all, I disagree with Stubby on this battle, I thought it was close and you might even have won. Frankly, your verse wasn't your best and I've seen better from you. I did like the emulate his avvy and retire line, that was probably your best. For your quotes, i would just suggest quotation marks as it doesnt mess with the flow as much, but thats just my opinion. I liked how you incorporate wit and creativity too. Bass treble line wasnt too bad either. Overall not so bad. I thought you won. Maybe I'm biased.
Allevyate Vs. Lyrically abusive...
I really enjoyed your opener, it was really good, your next bar took a nice shot at Pandoras box i thought that was a nice punch, next bar with the spit heavenly/ ticket to hell verse was nice too. I wasnt feeling the charlie brown/ vietnam/tall tree line, and the bar that followed it with the him havin more wins but you have a better percentage line i wasnt feeling either, it was kinda a little bit of self glorification and you went out a lil weak, The first six lines were great though. I read his stuff and i dont know how he is beating you to tell you the truth, not being biased or anything... all he really had was an opener and closer, all the rest of his stuff was pretty weak. I mean L.A. had to bars with punchs about the poll bar....was really lame, Its really sorry if you lose this battle cause anyone should see that you won this clearly. Bottom line in this battle from my point of view is you had six great lines and then you lost your touch, but your material was alot better than his.
^^Thanks for the feed, and I know my last six lines sucked I was really rushin at the end to tell you the truth cause i had 5 minutes left, not to make excuses.
About a battle with Lyrical Violaters, Stubby really wants to do it, so what do you guys think?
yeah i really would i dont know if im allowed to post in here but im just tellin yall, dude yall are my fav crew besides my own, i dont like any of the other crews, but i just want to do this so i can put my members on levels, this isnt a hate battle i just think its a good experience for both crews, so pick 3 people in your crew includin leaders if they wish, to go up against 3 of my members
Ya, lets battle them, I already merked Playmo, even though the battle isnt over its too clear, MC Merc isnt nothin, there crew is weak, Stubby might be the only decent lyricist they have. Lets go ahead and battle them, im down to battle but its a 3 on 3 so i guess alley and Kwik you guys need another person, im down for the battle but its your decision who is chosen for it.
Allevyate: thanks 4 tha feedback on my open mic. i DO have a beat to use for it (track 5 on Dr. Dre 2001 [insturmental version]), and if i ever go audio (i'm not for now) i'll do it again in there. thanx again.
about Zone, I like him, so far... i say we give him a chance (after he drops his 10 lines, duh).
and MC canadian... ooo, i dunno. stucture gets a little so-so in some places, wit those short-as-hell lines in there. i think MAYBE, but slim chance. let's see a battle of his.
Wassup everybody this is Street Legend................Im just checkin to see whats goin on. I got a battle open wit dipset...lol....funny man. Im expectin a easy win unless he pre-wrote his shit but still he weak regardless......Holla.
and about battlin Lyrical Violators... dear god, those fools fuckin suck ass! if you need someone at the LAST SECOND, go head n sign me up fo' it... but only if you don't have enough at the last minute. ok? (i mean i CAN battle... but i only do it once in a LONG time, or if i HAVE to.)
yo man, if we gonna start a crew maybe we should make a crew website and shit,and we can get each other msn and we'll battle each other and we woul like practice and shit.
I opened this thread to gauge interest. This is for poetry and open mic heads (I’d like more poetry).I don’t care If you’re in a crew already. This would be more of a second fam, than an RB “crew”. I don’t care If you’re really ill or just average, you are welcome to join.
I want the focal point to be reading and replying to each other’s work, as well as working together on pieces regularly. Like I said, this is more of a fam, and about elevating in the craft of writing, in general than just another crew. This will be a democracy, and arrogance or thinking you’re better than others are not qualities of people who will be accepted, no matter how “ill” you think you are. We are all equal, and here to write and have fun. Lets do that.
If you’re interested, drop a link and your AIM name, and I will contact you. If I invited you, no need to drop a link.
Roster:
Bigg E Z
Danny Ocean
Forlorn
Illunatic
Junio
LM
Perpetual
R. Corey
Refugi
Topic
T West
Wicked
My Last Three Pieces:
...Breath
Life After Lust w/ R. Corey
On A Naked Tree w/ Langston Hughes
My Aim: Euthanasias Kiss
-W1
Kandy, how old is you?
if you can make a website that would be dope
I'm not exactly active that much anymore.Quote:
Originally Posted by Wicked'
But I guess you can put me in, if it's aight with you.
Aye.
the website thing will be pretty complicated, but if you guys want to add each other to each others msn messanger then start droppin down your email address, and each time you see one posted in here, go add it on your contacts here is mine
crazykris14@hotmail.com
K cypha had an idea....that some of us should join the Front Lines tourney to rep our crew. Its an idea I really like, and I really wish I could join, but I can't because I'm gunna be away for a good portion of when it goes on (and so is Kwik). However, I think it would be a good idea if someone did sign up.
cantseeme_mf@hotmail.com
i'll think bout making the website.
grammatical error there... its "Kandy, how old 'are' you?
I'm 17, why'd you wanna know?
Whats good everyone....since we are talking about battling...well im about to battle some dude named "ShYtown".I hope i win, i dont know his style. But anyway...Whats good Razah, its nice to see that u still drop in and say whats up. And Kandy...Whats good with the jacuzy situation!
oh mami u know whats up :thumbup:
^ Then give me what i ask for.........please :hump:
..Dopeness
Just what O.M needs..
..Id be more than happy to be in, Wicked'
i'm in 100%. There's always plenty of room for improvement.
I know it's 'are', I purposely say is.Quote:
Originally Posted by kandy
It's how I talk, probly a chitown thing.
Anywho, ya'll lesbo's ?
cool shit
lol i knew u meant to say it like that.. i aint stupid. thats how i talk too.. thats how most black people talk silly. i was just messin with u.. now why' d u wanna know my age..? how old is you!?
PurFormIT
Fire aka Nikkelz
Oakley
Kandy
nOkShUs NóTz
Charlie...
Street Legend
Verbal Kent???? (pending)
^These are the current crew memberz. I hope you guys will continue to be as dedicated to the crew as am I. I'm in the process of getting a sig done. The objective was for a black backround and gold writing. ANy other suggestions, just post them in here. Please be detailed. As leader of this crew I will do my best to keep it up and running, and lively. So enjoy it. And support each other. We're suppose to be getting an official forum soon. I encourage everyone to also try and elevate....
Cool. I invited a few more people. We'll come up with a name after there are eight members.
-W1
yeah i will do my best to elevate as much as I can. I will also support my crew members....thats sounds like a vow...lol. And as for the sig, Im feelin the whole black background and gold letters but what about another prop...like a mic or something, or like something else to match the theme Pure Performance.
Thanx man. This is what I need. my AIM name is shortyrehab.Im not a gurl. lol its a long story.
Mics are plizzayed out.
Im' 16, and incredibly sexy.
Lets get Torontos best in this thread to drop something and maybe make a crew out of it. Just because I made this thread don't mean I gottah make the cut. Btw you don't gottah be a rapper... you can be an audio head, textcee, graphic head... poetry fiend... you name it.... dont sleep
/\ Herb .. Ayo Kandy .. Aren't you forgetting somone on that list? He's the one with 1000+ posts .. Isn't he counted into this crew? Or is he just helping this crew get established?
T-west is the only Toronto head that i know of.....
Crew startin up..
Got spots for 12 peeps..
drop 5-10 lines or a link
dope heads will be in
Leader-Generic
Co Leader-
Emcees-
^ I think that she just forgot, because i always thought he was in the crew. I might be wrong tho.....
Wassuo everybody.................I just got a win over dipset cuz he was banned for bitib Jadakiss.....lol....im mad though cuz i wanted to K.O that kid but i dunno when they gonna put the win on my record........
^ can someone vote to close my battle with Molneef. ^Congratulations Street....I saw the battle...it was tight!