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Peices The Puzzle
Peices To The Puzzle-{Straight Flow}
by: Vizualyze
U Dont Know What Im Comin Afta With
Ill Blast U Snitch
Craft A Glitch Wit Massassistic Pacifists
Even If You Could Mass A Fix
Im Back Wit Six
Collapse Through Scripts In 2 Minutes If I Have To Spit
Snap Ya Limbs Then Snatch A Clip
Clab Ya Wrist Till The Index Taps An Twists'
Ya Shattered Like Passive Clicks
Survival Is What Practice Is, Ask A Kid
Maybe Ill Hang U Half An Limp When Past A Bridge
I Grab Ya Shins
Drop, Then See That Ya Lived
Breath When U Hit
Then Scream Till You Sick
In Agony That Only Seemed Like U Gripped
Seen Through And Flipped
Only The Scenes That You Skipped
Remain A Mystery But The Fiens Crack You Quick
Ya Tactics Shift, I ask Of It And Gash Ya Wit
This Tracks A Risk
Lookit All The Bumps U Asked To Hit
If I Reaped U In Text
Theres A Reason To Quest
Cuz I Speed Throught The Demons And Beat You Again
Have Ya Bleed Through The Chest
Verbal Proof Your A Weak Dude I Left
And Soon Ma Speech Is Abreast
Cuz I'll Speak Out Ma Clef, Suffocate And Beat You To Death
Prac Sleeps Through The Tests
Seekin Ya Friends
Then We'll See How It Ends
Me Breathin Or Them
I'll Disclose Ya Death Like The Charter Of Rights
The Farther I Sight Wit Those Whose Left
The Harder I Fight
The Starter Of Flight
Before Cavemen Had Thought About Light
Before All Mamals Were Brought To Life
Before God Had Talked Of Christ
Before The Earth Was Soft As Ice
I Sought To Wrought Twice
Survivals A Life Long Tactic Never Forgotten Or Tried
Harmony Was An Instinct That Brought Harm For Me
Picture The Hard To Dream
Then Venture Too Far, Too Deep
Hardly Germs Were Starting To Breath
After Developing Arms And Teeth
Everything Was In Place Before They Barred A Cheif
Although Humble, Powers A Struggle
All Those Opposed Got Louder And Doubled In Size
The Lower Grumbled Wit Pride, They Stumbled Wit Lies
Genisis Was The End Of Us, All But I Was In Trouble And Died
Thunders Arised, But I Devised A Plan Wit Ma Fam That Would Rumble The Skies
Wit Stilts And Shards, All Those Who Loved And Lived It Hard
Were A Gift Remarked Wit A Reward To Build An Ark
40 Days And Nights, Raining Still In Dark
Confinement Only Had Me Spill The Hark
Ma Skills A Mark And I Havent Lifted Ma Whisp Pen Since Then
The Inventory Of All The Time Ive Spent In
Constantly Spitting Again Since I Beat Ya
The Same Mind That Led The People Safely Out Of Eygpt
200 BC, I Was Still Leading
Still Preaching, A Prophet With Out A Kill Reading
Still Bleeding, F*ck The Shrill Greating
It Was Frequent For Humanity To Regroup In Wars Over Expedients
For Thrills And Bill Fieniants
When The Talk Of Gain Stopped And Strained
I Walked The Plains Of Abraham To Save A Man
In Robes and Sandles From This Spot TO Spain
Bleedin Constantly But Not A Drop Had Drained
1000 Years Then Topped Again, I Rocked The Same
And Wrong Decision, I Was Caught To Blame
I Walked Through Flame And Being Undead Only Cheats Ma Walk To Fame
I Never Wanted To prop Ma Name
But Bein The Worst Before The First Had Me Dropped Ashamed
So Ive Fought And Slain All Those Who've Crossed Ma Game
All Responsibility And Life Has Been Fought Ma Way
I'm The Way You've All Prayed To Be, Never To Be Layed To Sleep
Flowin Like Prayers And Dreams
More Dangerous Than Amateurs Wit Laza Beams
Im The Son Of All Time, Its Your Life Or Mine
I Decide,
I'm In Ma Prime
So U Can Take My Eyez, But I Can Make Ya Blind
The Magna Carta That Could Take ya Fartha
Than Any Other Self-Proclaimed Martyr
Supremecy Of Every Padrix Kind,
Located Inbetween The Matrix And Time
Connecting Every And All, And Yet After All This Time
Im Still Undefined
Links
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...98#post5200498
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...10#post5200510
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iight..
can we get some feed?
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yeah...i see your get'n a hang of da style lol seems pretty forced in places with the multis but nice attempt at majority of them, vocabulary is complex in minor places and then you fell off in some cases, so try to space them out in some cases
Ex:
Plain N' simple, i'll let my blades graze ya temple, homie your too short to pop like asain pimples
Fame exempts you, like nobody's crazed to get you, get kilt wita post, i don't need to A.I.M. to rip you
I'll claim and tempt you, bang then hang ya mentals, delirious, so ima crack ya floo like fissures
Pain dismiss you, gangs deranged with issues, im serious ima show you i don't play w/ Cizzors
Broader with mines, ya whole crews sorta in binds, but i'll work around House like i got chores to assign
Adore'n my rhymes, step up foo there's more to define, you couldn't be D.O.P.E even if you snorted our lines
^^ unforced ya feel me
add more wordplay to it also but pretty much a decent drop homie
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dayum that song form was tie as fuc 4 starters.,,,vocab did tend to verge on the verge of insanity at times.
flom was ridiculous so i was feelin that ish on all tips.....
rhymes got a bit Boring t'wrd the end. but b4 that shit was entertainin so props on that ish couz ish was delivered on-point
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Yeah the flow on this piece was better than the mountain piece you did. for parts it was more refined then others and your vocabulary was good at times as well though at others just didn't fit in as smoothly as it could have..na mean i liked most of it though, but your imagery wasn't optimum it was aightish and i didn't much like the storyline/concept as it seemed more of a freestyle rant with clever/broad vocabulary which i reckon you should improve pn..if your not gonna go for a one themd piece useexisting issues or historic issues in on or 2 lines to give the piece an intellectual edge...overall this can be improved by putting more meaning into it. Stay up^.
-Pak
If possible a few comments:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=311797
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thankz
yea it was more of a freestyle..just with a title...
uppin
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