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hey... sorry to sway but com
i cant believe you started 0-2 after
that unbelievable preseason, lol
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Verses Due Friday 12 EST
Battles Close Late sunday
Must Vote on 3 battles
regular rules, check in
hey... sorry to sway but com
i cant believe you started 0-2 after
that unbelievable preseason, lol
in.
can I get an extension till saturday night? I got a lot on today and will be out till well after midnight
both get extension till saturday - Mystery
is it possible we could make it until like sunday afternoon, say 5ish? I'll be out of town all of saturday and a lot of sunday and don't have much time to write today either.
man if you knew that... you shoulda had a verse ready today. What were you gonna do if he didn't need an extension? But Sunday is really pushin it battles close monday morning. But yeah go ahead n drop sunday or as soon as you can but just know this battle isn't going to have alot of votes.
5/10 minute key
I'm first to admit I've got slacker so I gotta leave this prick battered
But how can I write like I care... about a bitch that doesn't matter?
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Ahem..
Yeah we've both lost twice, my zest will best what you write
I'll add a one to your two.. like we're testing a mic
So don't invest in your life coz no ones wack as Datruth
MY losses were upsets while YOUR battles were proof
I'll easily rattle this gook.. got nothing to lose to text geeks
Coz we could both lose this battle, I'll still make it to next week
So kid get out the league, your showing fatigue and I resent this
You're hanging on by your teeth, and MM made me your dentist
So don't try to prevent it, from now I'm denting who challenge me
Bitch fuck a world of pain.. I'm blowing up your whole galaxy
Your shits a tragedy, this kid needs help with what he's wrote
So everyone vote Com.. and let the Truth be told
Sorry for the lateness, just got back from out of town
I saw a pic of ya child n' after talkin' with nieces
it looks like a million bucks...
... couldn't cure those foul diseases
N' dawg, I also hear ya have a knack for doin' whores
You have a gift...
... but it sure ain't that ugly child of yours!
Claimin' ya thug? Nah, you ain't a real man
You've made lots of people pass away...
... the orange ball in their hands
We both got robbed last week, but now it's time to be quiet
Cuz it's all gravy, like this fat fucks' excuse for a diet
Your a dumbfuck, but see my rap skills have soared,
for two cents I'll give ya a piece of my mind...
... and all of yours
You think your all that, when ya rap ya want clappin'
So go toot your own horn...
... it'd block the noises of you rappin'
Ya shoulda tried harder cuz I've been known to kill
So know that I'm rolling...
... Com down mountains, valleys, and hills
I saw a pic of ya child n' after talkin' with nieces
it looks like a million bucks...
... couldn't cure those foul diseases
N' dawg, I also hear ya have a knack for doin' whores
You have a gift...
... but it sure ain't that ugly child of yours!
We both got robbed last week, but now it's time to be quiet
Cuz it's all gravy, like this fat fucks' excuse for a diet
vs
So don't invest in your life coz no ones wack as Datruth
MY losses were upsets while YOUR battles were proof
I'll easily rattle this gook.. got nothing to lose to text geeks
Coz we could both lose this battle, I'll still make it to next week
v/ Datrus even though what he did was kinda messed up imo
I saw a pic of ya child n' after talkin' with nieces
it looks like a million bucks...
... couldn't cure those foul diseases
^Lol.Nice.
N' dawg, I also hear ya have a knack for doin' whores
You have a gift...
... but it sure ain't that ugly child of yours!
^Sorta Off A Bit,But Aiight.
Claimin' ya thug? Nah, you ain't a real man
You've made lots of people pass away...
... the orange ball in their hands
^Ummm Okay..But Nothing really.
We both got robbed last week, but now it's time to be quiet
Cuz it's all gravy, like this fat fucks' excuse for a diet
^Lol.aiight.
Your a dumbfuck, but see my rap skills have soared,
for two cents I'll give ya a piece of my mind...
... and all of yours
^Good.
You think your all that, when ya rap ya want clappin'
So go toot your own horn...
... it'd block the noises of you rappin'
^Lol.Str8
Ya shoulda tried harder cuz I've been known to kill
So know that I'm rolling...
... Com down mountains, valleys, and hills
^Okay.
Vs.
I'm first to admit I've got slacker so I gotta leave this prick battered
But how can I write like I care... about a bitch that doesn't matter?
^No.
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.
.
.
Ahem..
Yeah we've both lost twice, my zest will best what you write
I'll add a one to your two.. like we're testing a mic
^Good.
So don't invest in your life coz no ones wack as Datruth
MY losses were upsets while YOUR battles were proof
^UMMmkay.But Nothing Really.
I'll easily rattle this gook.. got nothing to lose to text geeks
Coz we could both lose this battle, I'll still make it to next week
^Statement.
So kid get out the league, your showing fatigue and I resent this
You're hanging on by your teeth, and MM made me your dentist
^Nice.
So don't try to prevent it, from now I'm denting who challenge me
Bitch fuck a world of pain.. I'm blowing up your whole galaxy
^nice.
Your shits a tragedy, this kid needs help with what he's wrote
So everyone vote Com.. and let the Truth be told
^Statement.
Overall/-Pretty Bland Battle,Buthad Its Nice Lines...I Have to Go With DatrusHurtz On Thsi one,Cuz Com Came In with Filler an 2 Statements..But I Mos Def Like tHe Dentist Line..That was Dope.But Trus Got this For Being More Consistant.
V/=DaTrusHurtz.
DaTrus killed this.
I read both verses, coms was good..like always, but DaTrus whole style had me wanting to read the next line to see what else you were gunna ripp on.
V.DaTrusHurtz
Yeah we've both lost twice, my zest will best what you write
I'll add a one to your two.. like we're testing a mic
So kid get out the league, your showing fatigue and I resent this
You're hanging on by your teeth, and MM made me your dentist
So don't try to prevent it, from now I'm denting who challenge me
Bitch fuck a world of pain.. I'm blowing up your whole galaxy
^this was sick.
ur closer was wack shit tho.
v
I saw a pic of ya child n' after talkin' with nieces
it looks like a million bucks...
... couldn't cure those foul diseases
N' dawg, I also hear ya have a knack for doin' whores
You have a gift...
... but it sure ain't that ugly child of yours!
Claimin' ya thug? Nah, you ain't a real man
You've made lots of people pass away...
... the orange ball in their hands
We both got robbed last week, but now it's time to be quiet
Cuz it's all gravy, like this fat fucks' excuse for a diet
I'm first to admit I've got slacker so I gotta leave this prick battered
But how can I write like I care... about a bitch that doesn't matter?
lol nah...kinda basic, im not saying basic cant be good but here no
Yeah we've both lost twice, my zest will best what you write
I'll add a one to your two.. like we're testing a mic
not bad
So don't invest in your life coz no ones wack as Datruth
MY losses were upsets while YOUR battles were proof
lolol
I'll easily rattle this gook.. got nothing to lose to text geeks
Coz we could both lose this battle, I'll still make it to next week
okayish, not that hard, whats a gook? or did you mean goon?
So kid get out the league, your showing fatigue and I resent this
You're hanging on by your teeth, and MM made me your dentist
hah
So don't try to prevent it, from now I'm denting who challenge me
Bitch fuck a world of pain.. I'm blowing up your whole galaxy
im not a fan of these type of punches, kinda like the make a hotel outa ur shit line by vaskez, but its not bad
Your shits a tragedy, this kid needs help with what he's wrote
So everyone vote Com.. and let the Truth be told
nah
vs
I saw a pic of ya child n' after talkin' with nieces
it looks like a million bucks...
... couldn't cure those foul diseases
nice flip okay punch
N' dawg, I also hear ya have a knack for doin' whores
You have a gift...
... but it sure ain't that ugly child of yours!
lmao not bad
Claimin' ya thug? Nah, you ain't a real man
You've made lots of people pass away...
... the orange ball in their hands
haha, whats with this new style?
We both got robbed last week, but now it's time to be quiet
Cuz it's all gravy, like this fat fucks' excuse for a diet
haha again, i get what ur tyin to say but theres somethin about it that just isn't right and i dont want to esxplain it
Your a dumbfuck, but see my rap skills have soared,
for two cents I'll give ya a piece of my mind...
... and all of yours
lol ok
You think your all that, when ya rap ya want clappin'
So go toot your own horn...
... it'd block the noises of you rappin'
nah
Ya shoulda tried harder cuz I've been known to kill
So know that I'm rolling...
... Com down mountains, valleys, and hills
nah
V/DTH
I saw a pic of ya child n' after talkin' with nieces
it looks like a million bucks...
... couldn't cure those foul diseases
N' dawg, I also hear ya have a knack for doin' whores
You have a gift...
... but it sure ain't that ugly child of yours!
We both got robbed last week, but now it's time to be quiet
Cuz it's all gravy, like this fat fucks' excuse for a diet
vs
So don't invest in your life coz no ones wack as Datruth
MY losses were upsets while YOUR battles were proof
I'll easily rattle this gook.. got nothing to lose to text geeks
Coz we could both lose this battle, I'll still make it to next week
rofl ..V. DTH
So don't invest in your life coz no ones wack as Datruth
MY losses were upsets while YOUR battles were proof
So kid get out the league, your showing fatigue and I resent this
You're hanging on by your teeth, and MM made me your dentist
So don't try to prevent it, from now I'm denting who challenge me
Bitch fuck a world of pain.. I'm blowing up your whole galaxy
vs.
I saw a pic of ya child n' after talkin' with nieces
it looks like a million bucks...
... couldn't cure those foul diseases
N' dawg, I also hear ya have a knack for doin' whores
You have a gift...
... but it sure ain't that ugly child of yours!
We both got robbed last week, but now it's time to be quiet
Cuz it's all gravy, like this fat fucks' excuse for a diet
Your a dumbfuck, but see my rap skills have soared,
for two cents I'll give ya a piece of my mind...
... and all of yours
You think your all that, when ya rap ya want clappin'
So go toot your own horn...
... it'd block the noises of you rappin'
wow @ this battle. i seriously thought com would come way harder, but i stand corrected. the battle was good, but datrus got this easy. the concepts were better and the punches were wayy harder. see, com had the concepts, but they weren't hittin that hard. good job and good luck to both.
v/ dth
omfg.. really really. sign me the FUCK out.. this is ridiculous.,