|In Her Honor| (~Nash~ & *Quest*)

|In Her Honor|

It's alot of things she showed me in life and I love her for that...

I must admit mommy raised me right....
She like my guardian angel....heavens pathway to the pearly white,
So I'm writin these lines to show my love to her,
Yea, ya lil boy grown to man now, on this green earth,
When daddy wasn't there, u was my backbone,
Neva leavin' me behind...our family had a happy home,
Backed me up when I felt down....
Lord knows how I would feel if I neva saw ya pretty face around,
And in ya honor I do things that they say man can't do,
And betta yet, I walk a thousand miles through glass just fo' u,
The enter feelings, u came to comfort and I love u fo that,
If I had the money, I would give u the world just to get u back,
My hunger to do this fo u, is like a diein' soldier tryna live,
Holdin on strong, even that I knew I wasn't a perfect kid....
It might just seem simplistic....
But these words I just spit got more meanin' then bein' complex an gifted,

Grasp Life, Hold it as you know it, then realize the women who die...

...God shows me angels, but my eyes search for the light,
Since the day I saw her die was the day I'd lost my eyesight,
My eyes get tight, like they're under sunlight and can't close,
Simple be the life I Lived, and here's the lyrics I chose...

Simplicity becomes reality but my mind stays stranded...
The mentality of a 12 year old but my heart keeps me branded,
Feelin' simple, but my words come out jibberishly slurred...
In Her honor I lay down my mic so fast, my motion gets blurred,
I've detoured...but I've gone the wrong way, money...lust...drugs,
I've gone from living in a high life, to 'Saltin' people with slugs...
Visions become incisions as my mind cuts me ever so deep...
But still, I miss her and find myself writing of her in my sleep,
Winnings impossible, as I've already lost...but the cost...
Hearts feelin' so cold that warm is compared to Jack Frost...
Rise with me, I'll disgust you with my stories like larva of flies,
I'd give her life back in a heartbeat, just to crush me to size...
Listen...Listen...here we go, in her honor...my life cries...

Car crash, sound clash...big nash tries to make the death a bash,
Take her away from this place and give her better...winners sash..
In Her Honor. She deserves better than that, throw down the matt...
...And wrestle for better tricks to come out of this hat...

Here we go...end me now...says I, please come with me...
Invision the death through that winsheild...if only you'd see,
My spirit dies, and for this woman I'm corrupted by lies...
But then for peace, in her honor, I think of where she's at now,
...And I think of it through her eyes...

But she was there for so little time, And I thank her for that...

*~Big Nash~* - Normal and Gray
Johnny Quest - Dark Slate Gray

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Rise...

Raise it up...

Good work guys, this was a heartfelt take on a decent topic which kept me reading until the end. The length was just right and your styles blended nicely. The imagery was strong throughout, you guys could be a couple of heavyweight topical heads in the near future. Slightly stronger vocab and some multi's were the only lacking point i could see.

Good collab, i'll be checking for your next one.

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Originally Posted by Johnny 6-feet

Good work guys, this was a heartfelt take on a decent topic which kept me reading until the end. The length was just right and your styles blended nicely. The imagery was strong throughout, you guys could be a couple of heavyweight topical heads in the near future. Slightly stronger vocab and some multi's were the only lacking point i could see.

Good collab, i'll be checking for your next one.

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Thanx for the feed back uppin it

dope OM the topic was creative and verses and flow went well together heartfelt and meaningful piece ya'll came up with nice vocab and rhyming there was a few things i didn't like bout this piece but they are nothing major so i won't go into much detail about them but overall you 2 collab great together ya'll should get together and collab again real soon great job

Thanks Ya'll...Much appreciated 6-feet,

~Rise

Dope piece from yall here.I really liked how both of yall approched this topic cuz it had my eyes open.To start off the storyline was great cuz it kept my eyes open to read this piece.And as we go down the piece I really started feeling the Imagry and emotion in the piece.The emotion in this piece was real deep and I really like that.And the Imagry from both of yall in this piece was good too.And the structure was real good and the use of yalls vocabulary was good to.I really enjoyed reading this piece and I hope to see more from yall soon.

^Thank you sir...

big big om, liked it alot, very different and original, liked the creativity and the flow was very nice, one of my more enjoyable reads on the om page for a while now,

keep doing ur things

word....that for the feed....rise

Rise...Good Feed, all very positive...thanks, would enjoy more please?

rise for feed

Really nice peace.
Nash had the metaphores and wordplay down.
Structre was hot.
Flow was a master work.
JQ had a great peice as well.
Kick ass flow followed by great wordplay metapgores and strucre (DONE BY BIG NASH)
both keep it up.
You should hit up my crew for gfx and topical heads.
And nash when you gonna do your drop for our collab?



~Sin

thanx fo the feed rise