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Untouchables
Untouchable...Who's untouchable....U, you aint untouchable, who told you that, U just gullible. No ones untouchable in this world, Ya know......
U reckon ya on the throne, think ya untouchable,
then why do ya moan, if ya think ya untouchable,
hear ya carry on ta drone, an' think ya untouchable,
So why can i hear that painful groan, ya aint reallllyy untouchable.
We walk and talk and brawl and ball on the streets,
where everyday a thug his end meets,
Can't ya see the cause of all tho heatz.....Driving me crazy,
Danger surrounding whoever got a past that's shady,
Top rappers though got nothin' ta fear,
Eminem, G-unit, Don't woryy Dr. Dre got the security near,
But everyone else ya onna die tonight, so take ya last pack of beer,
And wait for the death angel fright, Stay close to the ones that near.
U reckon ya on the throne, think ya untouchable,
then why do ya moan, if ya think ya untouchable,
hear ya carry on ta drone, an' think ya untouchable,
So why can i hear that painful groan, ya aint reallllyy untouchable.
Yea, aint no stoppin' this, cause we poppin' this, and ya betta watch ya back,
Don't trust ya homiez even they can attack,
Never lack....Ya defences,
Always keep by ya side....ya best apprentice,
And i really should mention this,
Snoop got his,
Get ya security, don't go taking tha piss,
One shot can go homie but the second aint gonna miss....yeahh.
U reckon ya on the throne, think ya untouchable,
then why do ya moan, if ya think ya untouchable,
hear ya carry on ta drone, an' think ya untouchable,
So why can i hear that painful groan, ya aint reallllyy untouchable.
Now ya lying on the pavement dead,
I had told ya ta stay in bed,
but instead...Ya went out rydin',
Followed the path of the none law abiding,
Told ya ta keep ya nose outta others business,
But ya snitched it all to the police afta takin a guiness,
See the consquences, now ya just finished,
Ya names gone as well, U just lying there diminished....Yeahhh.
Message to y'all:
Learn from this tale, next time ya walk on the streetz, know theres someone there who's stronger,
Next time ya talk all hard, know theres someone there who can talk a lot harder.
Respect ya life, cause ya aint getting a second chance, One strike and ya gone, so remember this song and keep in ya heart, that no ones untouchable.......
Brothers and Cash
Don and his inner fear
What's Life?
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Uppin' where are ya dogs?
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uppin' for more feeds ma dogs
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like your style
man ill give you an award
like it
we gotta battle one day!!!!!!!!!!!
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You need to leave 2 links to 2 open mics that you left decent feedback on or this gets closed, Thanks.
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topic wasnt very good, flow was really the only decent part on this piece..... up ya multies and vocab and topic chossing skillz... and drop another 1... and get the smiley face outta it.. makes it look noob as fuck
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Uppin' for feeds, where are ya dogs
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uppin for feeds, i wann know ya honest opinions
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any feedz, need more decent comments Yo
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yo ur shit was tight I was really feelin it
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Thanks, Dog. Give me a link to ya OM, i'll check it out.
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nice song man you could go far with this. would go good with the i aint mad atcha' instrumental or do for love.
good lookin out.
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good shit yo
definitely feelin' the hook. most of the verses were hot, but a couple places you had lines with syllables that were so far off, I couldn't really see how it would sound right.
also i wasn't really all about the last verse that much.
vocab was tight, and shit was pretty straight tho...keep up the good work mane.
one.
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yea thanks for the pointers Dog. Give a link and i'll check your rhyme and leave feed.
