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Thread: What is life

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    Life through my eyes....What is life?

    What is life,
    Indulgence for the riches or a struggle for poor against strife,
    What is life,
    Where the rich after every month change their wife,
    Or where the poor are forced to die or yield a knife,
    God, tell me what is life?

    Is it a place where we see deaths everyday,
    Mothers scared to send their children out to play ,
    God on the ground i lay,
    towards you i pray,
    And ask, please God show them the way,
    what is life?

    Is it where wars are commended,
    or used for own wills and said it was for their people to be defended,
    Is it, where young children are always offended,
    Told their colours aren't right, to go and get them mended,
    God, i ask you is this the life towards us you lended,
    What is life?

    I ask you on and on,
    Why has life turned to a place to party and sing one two a song,
    Except, we as people still can't take it in when we hear our death gong,
    Death is the worst nightmare for everyone,
    Including people from america all the way to hong kong,
    What is life?

    Lastly God i plead,
    when i die, don't go to hard on my sins,
    After all, once i'm 6 feet deep my soul will fly to the sky, and the responsibility of peace will be left on my next of kins,
    I plead,
    You count God the one two a good deed,
    We as people have done,
    And try and heal,
    the initail death stun,
    Teach people not to steal,
    God give graicousness to us, so that with that with the poor we can enjoy our last meal.
    what is life?

    Life is like a women who stays with you but then decieves, while death is like a women who will eternally except you.......

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    Come on Dogs, uppin for some feed
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    DATBOIP
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    damn thats hot man.
    no need for confession of your sins by goin to church now eh?
    lol
    nah i keed, that was some tight shit.
    i liked the first verse tho, shit was fa real mayne.
    keep commin with tha OM's, you got baby!
    flawless...

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    Thanks for the feed, Encourages rhymers to write more, at 17 we need this enouragement.
    Keep the feeds comin'
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    uppin'
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    Twin You Have A Graphic Ass Mind Poetic Prolific Yet At The Same Time Svage And Street And I See All Those Elements In Your Writting I Think This Was A Great Read And Stay Up Man
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    Yo thanks for tha compliments, keep the feeds comin'
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    i fa sho, we gon make a colab.
    flawless baby!
    keep tha OM's commin...

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    What life, anyone three to tell me
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    COme on, need more feeds, where y'all
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    when u rap i get an intrest in it

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    when u rap i get an intrest in it
    What do you mean, a lil brief .Dog
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