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    The don and his inner Fear

    The don
    I been living a long time,
    Rose up tha ladder from the streetz of grime,
    Young male engulfed in the life of crime,
    Even ma girl left me, she no longer wanted to be mine.
    I lost all shit,
    Got hit,
    I still notice the bullet hole...in my kit.
    Tryed crime now i've gone legit.
    Tha dons fear may spread from every american to every brit.
    But he's a lone man, ponderining his thoughts while he sits.
    And trys to convey them when he spits....

    It's a lonely place out there,
    Bullet riddled bodies lyin everywhere,
    We still ryde by without a ounce of care,
    But the close ones can't believe they stand and stare.

    The inner Fear
    Hey don what ya say,
    i was petrified when i saw that body today,
    I know ya hearts turned stone, no longer ya wanna play,
    But don fear God sometimes ya need ta pray,
    Cause ya enemies see ya clearly,
    No longer fear makes them flee,
    ya going old, not anymore a lone mercenary,
    Pray ta God they don't catch ya lonely,
    Or ya'all die and ya money going ta charity,
    See the clarity and see me,
    Am your other side, am the tellin ya truthfully,
    You no longer hard ya turned into a cheap floozy.

    It's a lonely place out there,
    Bullet riddled bodies lyin everywhere,
    We still ryde by without a ounce of care,
    But the close ones can't believe they stand and stare.

    The don
    Listen to me,
    me enemys still fear me,
    they can't sit and take a bacardi,
    when they see my bullets fly quickly,
    Get ya easily,
    buzilly,
    Quizilly i ask,
    Is it time you take off that mask,
    Take a drink from that flask,
    Cause ya fear me, that look told me at last.
    Dog, understan we blast,
    Destroy ya present, future and even ya past.

    It's a lonely place out there,
    Bullet riddled bodies lyin everywhere,
    We still ryde by without a ounce of care,
    But the close ones can't believe they stand and stare.

    Song of the new soldiers-Pakaveli Ft Datboip

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    Last edited by P. Mortuus; October 5th, 2005 at 12:44 PM
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    good shit, i respected it. i jus hope u is from da hood, cus if u aint u jus perpitratin. u had good structure and u touched on some good topics and u wer consistent. keep spittin nigga.

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    thanks for the encouragements, i appreciate it. Carry on with the feed. uppin' for more feeds.
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    Uppin' for more feeds
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    nice rhyerms

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    U r a fag but thats a good song

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    AHa, Bloodz ya got personal shit gainst me cause i bought out a lil diss rhyme for ya, get over it, time moves on, But really thanks for the preciation, yea u to mcbadboy,
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    ANy don out there with a inner fear, huh dogs
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    You need to leave 2 links to 2 open mics that you left decent feedback on or this gets closed, Thanks.

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    leave feed on that one

    this was an ok piece... could've been used to its potential more but it eaw ok

    i liked the topic and it flowed well multies could use a boost tho
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    Poetry

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    Originally Posted by Vamp.
    this is perhaps the gayest thread...ALIVE....

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    not bad dat shit was prety good i liked ur structure ad\nd your rrhyming i conected with ur lyrics its aiiiiii keep it up

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    fucking die

    your name is fucking disgraceful

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    Cave Canem, U just some hater and Paka don't reply in disses to haterz like u, Know what, u make me laugh, talkin bout controversial comments LMAO
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    uppin'
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    Credz i added the two links aight
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