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reality check
soon to be audio to just a moment by nas
Taking baby steps as an adult in this situation
wish my head could rest through this assult im facin
it hard living flawed with concrete commitment in me
ground need breakin’ and my minds the tool it seems
but foolishly I’d rather speak then achieve my dreams
keep things like my shoes clean, stead of quite screams
silent nightmares haunt me, like the ghost of the coming
night terrors kill philosophy, and still I conquer nothing
the blood is bubbling and it’s evident a change is due
but im stuck standing with glued shoes so nothings new
so we take a deep breath an inhale what we were given
stay livin sinin’ in mental prisons with no ambition
our only course of action is to remorse on the past
and understand a mans life like this simply cant last
so imma take my high school degree and be great
create a decree to make the flag salute me, with no hate
no devastation, no limitations, or regulations
simply a mutual respect for us to be placed in
cuz I seen too many held back instead of escapin’
while contemplation leaves us evading regulation
the nations a glass house, we cant face the reflection
this is a session of recession our attentions in detention
development is arrested, who’d guess were suppressed
oppressed and our defense is silence to further wreck mess
so it’s you I address with a message to take a stand
a presage, to rise above liars and live like a man
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good topic, good emotion, good structure, solid vocab, GOOD imagery, solid rhymes. you're elavating man, i can see it with every piece you drop.
silent nightmares haunt me, like the ghost of the coming
night terrors kill philosophy, and still I conquer nothing
^^dope, my fave lines in the piece.^^
Glad to have you as a teammate in the tag league, we will murder some people. lol.
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thanks fam, nice to get kudos from someone as cool as you
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You need to stop going around telling people to follow the rules in there open mic. Cause it just makes you look bad cause all you are doing is freeposting then i have to delete the post. It doesnt make my job any easier.
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This was dope man, i aint posted on this site for a while but i remember some of your old pieces and youve improved a lot.
The emotion in the piece was great it would sound good over that nas beat you was just talking about your goals and what you think is fucked up with the world so i was really feeling it.
Your vocab is good so is your wordplay, the flow wasnt that good but your vocab and emotion in your pieces make them stand out.
When i say the flow wasnt great i just meant you dont match up a lot of your syllables but thats cool cause your vocab and wordplay really help your verses, this was dope nothing i could hate on.
Can you reply to my new thread please:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=205329
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thank you guys...means a lot.
credz sorry man, i honestly was just trying to help.. you could have pm'ed me telling me this. cuz what you did is basically the same thing you told me not to do, unless you would like to leave me some feed. but yeah i wont say anything now, just report it.
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