64 Lines

The Good Stuff- Credz

Hanging High- Wicked

I originally called this "No-ones iller" but on second thoughts that title is wank. I got the idea for this piece from an old track by Eminem, Swifty, Bizarre and Fuzz. It's basically made up of a load od verses and half-verses i wrote over time and pasted together to make 64 lines. The audio version of this (with me sounding gruff as fuck) is available for your listening torture through the link in my sig.


Don't be fooled by the jocks that i knock
I rock, i'm still certified to drop
Hot shots better than you, a veteran crew
Til we collapse, our faces turned steadily blue
Its heavy, its true, the mic and i are intertwined
Enter minds? My rhymes have entered mine
My vision is red, i walk with pricision and tred
On any and all obsticles, crush 'em in my mandibles
The ripsaw opens up crevasses and pitfalls
Hits all, the verbal results are shit drawers
The contact, slaps back fakers and wack raps
On track, locomotive crush flat your speech flaps
Who needs gats? Fuck a weapon all i need is aggression
Two fists, i move swift, broken flesh is a lesson
I'm guessin', you think murder is the final solution
But i'm stressin', humiliation in the form of a bruising
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I'm the human horror film, resurrection insurrection
No disrespect son, on my radar detection
Are you blushing? Embarassed at the words that i'm cussin'?
Or bluffing? Just another herb who's discussing
The most under of the underground, freaking the sound
Mayhem bound, knock contenders down in the first round
Plus these, PYT's got me making enemies
Who displeased this young seed recieves striptease
Forever present, i make you forever repentant
For your lazy slack wackness, terror comes with my entrance
I'm forever more clever, use my voice to roar better
And spit the storm weather, the one you saw wetter
Apply a plier squeeze to acquire a quiet fee
In society with a higher steez, riot police freeze
A messiahty? Or better yet a UK illity
Johnny 6-feet, aint nobody iller than me
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So call an ambulance, this is a bloodbath ambience
Part one of this track was with Keezy and Ambient
I collect vets to wreck your wet set
Disrespect you and the city you rep
I sling words like rocks from David to Goliath
Strike your temple, your eardrums, ask who's the highest
The flyest, white guy since that offspring song
Don't get it twisted like a blonde bitch, the whole thing wrong
Bring bong, jack daniels and coke to mix
If we're standing, attack at the slightest diss
But for now i'm scheming on the lightest bitch
With gold words like i flipped a hidden midas switch
And i might just trip, fall flat and pass the fuck out
But i will take those rats in the class they took out
Attrack dykes, excite hype from day to late night
And i got what it takes to rock the mic right
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I'm just throwing record players like i'm flipping the beat
Make arse cheeks clentch so hard they put a rip in the seat
I haven't heard this many lyrics dropped in ages
Hit emcees with lasers, tasers and razors
You'd better bring a long stick if you wanna prod vets
And swing harder than the golden state projects
You cowards talk shit and hide behind your crew first
I give a fuck, i find beef addictive like truth hurts
There's a morale to this tale like an aesop fable
You know 6 rock's able and my mind is unstable
Leave 'em fosselised like mossquitos in amber
Even in mexico leave chico's camramba'd
Who's the only emcee with props in the UK
Who can move like Jet-Li and make the room sway?
I'm hanging plaques on my wall like an art exhibit
But for now i'll let the next man kick it
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done, thanks for reading.

Very Nice! i loved reading this peice for a certain reason.
the content was so precise, it was as if it could have been brought to a higher perspective. you know what im sayin?
anyways,
very detailed imagery throughout this peice. you showed you could hold a scheme to a monotone level. you understand what im sayin?
overall, i thought this was creative to a certain aspect, and held great content and imagery throughout this whole peice.
im nominating this for OM of the week. nice work, and an incredible read.
8.9/10.
keep writing dude. be strong and stay strong.


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=154671

Return....Thanx.

that was some tight shit johnny
keep it up
peace

Nice man, I liked this....I read this kinda at a fast pace and it flowed great for me that way and i liked it lol...Flow was good overall!...Had nice multies in this which help support the fast pace flow for me, i dunno if thats what you were going for but thats how i got it and i thought it was good!...Vocab was nice in this, didnt over do it like some peoples...Overall though man this was a nice piece, i liked it a lot...Thanks for the feedback on my piece. I would leave longer feedback but Im kinda short on time cause My ride is soon here and i figured i might as well leave some now cause i will probably forget later lol..But Thanks man! Nice Piece :)

verses vocab never missed the flow, the multis sinked in all the words to where you didnt have to stop and read over to catch the flow again, the fact that you can do 64 lines and still not drop the flow is pretty incredible for a text, overall the shit was cool cause it was wat it was:meaning you never steered off topic and you did the verse for wat its worth and didnt try to make this a "deep peice" just cause you had so many lines to add stuff like that in, tight verse, 9/10...

Yup S'hup Johnnnny? Ain't seen you for a while :p

Word to what the guy up above said about the multis keeping it flowing nice, content was more audioish suited I'd say..but I reckon you should make it audio if you haven't already.

Was this that long one you were writing months and months ago? LOL

Keep it coming mangggg.

shit was on fire like micheal jacksons hair at pepsi commercials...the multis were superb...i remember this kat from a while back...anyways nice piece...keep that hot shit coming...one