A link in the chain

I am together joined, an inviolable unbreakable unit
provin’ brothers banding bring chastity undeluded
denuded collusion infuses our bond of brotherhood
common good could be understandably misunderstood
should one take time and open eyes they will realize
jointed lives define the kind of life that we idealize
close ties sensationalize the intimacy of our crew
only few pursue to subdue and accrue the true view
do you want to be wholly sole or a soul in a whole
know vile and cold is moving without a common goal
behold the powers of numbers that number blunders
conceal n cover confused lucidity when minds wander
singly, honor is stuttered showing like light through shutters
loud as mutters, strong as butter acting sublime like cutters
enshrouding feelings leading to bleeding pain not belonging
longing to be cohesively released to be pieced for connecting
rejecting the road of being alone to be cloned and composed
counters counter con’s and produce pro’s leaving misdiagnosed
suppose you got wove into a group to be considered intertwined
would you find that being a link in the chain is not utterly sublime?


Links- http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=154244
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=154071

common you guys are sleeping again. im not that wack. well i least i don't think so.

You Got Some Skill Twin Dont Worry Sleepers Have To Wake Up Eventually

uppin this

Not Bad Man...Pretty Nice Piece i thought...you had nice vocab usage which i thought did good for this piece!...flow was very nice as well in this, one of the things i liked the most about it...Structure in this was pretty decent i thought very good...But overall man I thought this was a nice piece...I liked the read...it was worth checking out...and sorry for such the short feedback, I just got home from work and checked my thread and saw you left a link so i thought i would return the favor before i forgot!:)

Great use of vocab .. A few of the word were hard for me to understand, But the flow of the piece brought it back together for me .. The word usage brought a great structure to the piece .. meta's were decent
( singly, honor is stuttered showing like light through shutters
loud as mutters, strong as butter acting sublime like cutters )....Best line
Over all every thing was there ??? Hall of fame ??? I still dont understand how that all works but great piece every aspect of rap was there ..
Newtestament* .... OHH' & thanks for the feed back on my piece.....

has woken up and saw this my 2ed read om of the day

it was a nice peiace
the vocab was good as well as the flow bein consistent

ur structure was cool too


good drop

thanks for all of the great feedback. wow. feel free to nominate it. thanks guys.

The bump cause wall sleepin on dude......Good shit fam. Vocab was unbelivable.
I really see a lot of improvement. Its easy for people to use a lot of complex vocab but it takes skill to really say something with those word. Good piece

man that was tyte

this line here: close ties sensationalize the intimacy of our crew/
only few pursue to subdue and accrue the true view.

that was good. keep it up. peace man i'm out

thanks yall upp