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Your writtens suck, and this match has got you in a bind
Urbans got nothing to lose....when his career's on the line
your shit is played and old, probably still rockin the izzle on wizzles
But you can brush w/ death, cuz I gave that last line bristles
Urbans chances are slim so this is basically a bye
I mean he's next to none when facing his skill, eye to eye
Who the fuck is reelist? I ain't gon be bothered to try
But i'll still have Urbans teeth screaming "Where the fuck am I?"
Urbans close to dead. Hes really trying to wish a plan.
But really....Who the fuck ever heard of an Urban Fisherman?
You suck, when it comes to being wack you take the cake
& if your as real as can be.. that explains why the worlds so fake
Urbans unwanted. Even his parent have hired a hearse.
Chances are this'll be dope....or urban could drop a verse.
Good Verse Jobus
now,just becuz ya site name is green don't make you sick
cuz you just like a new shit line you get played 2 quick
now i could say you got heart to try and battle me
but the voters wouldn't ,hell even ya title disagrees
don't even know how you got in this, spitting shit like that
but we know faggots like you love to slip thru the cracks
he's a no one his own damn profile supports this line
beef thread shows you beg for feedback like a horse's behind
red means ya ass needs aid and white means you surrender
just like ya country you never described with the two genders
ya lines are made with chalk they're easily erased from this board
i ain't gotta take jokes about my rod from this broad, lawd
knows i've tried to endure this whack ass talent-less hack
that catches more damn beatings than ho laying on her backs
Jobus came dope here...
Your writtens suck, and this match has got you in a bind
Urbans got nothing to lose....when his career's on the line
I think ive heard it before But it's still funny
Urbans chances are slim so this is basically a bye
I mean he's next to none when facing his skill, eye to eye
again had a chuckle
Urbans unwanted. Even his parent have hired a hearse.
Chances are this'll be dope....or urban could drop a verse.
Laughed so bad lmao this was funny as shit very quotable
Realist you really need to up your game in punche sn wittiness
Urban dint have no quotables
and instead of lord he put lawd...
never do that again thats the one part of y our verese where i laughed
jobos won.
better punches
more consistent
flowed nice.
urban was weak
flow was ok
punches were not good.
vote- jammin
21/70Quote:
Originally Posted by Jammin' Jobus
16/70Quote:
Originally Posted by UrbanReelist
jammin jobus simply had more lines that weren't as wack.
V/Jammin' Jobus
not really all that great from either side... i think reelist took this one cause jobus was on some played shit that hardly kept my attention. not 2 say that reelists was all that captivating either. i just enjoyed reading his verse more and i think he came harder with punches and personals. some of his lines made me laugh too which jobus' failed to do at all.
Vote - Urban Reelist
This was seriously close.
Well, if only UrbanReelist worded a few of his punches better, he would've won, but yeah.
Jammin' came played, really played. Meh, only had about 2-3 bars that were good. Other than that, played, you could've at least tried to flip one of the played concepts you used, but w.e.
V/Jammin
jobus- you came with a decent verse....it was pretty played out though. Ive seen some of those concepts before, but whatever...you threw up a balanced verse. Filled with punches and good structure.
urban- your verse was okay...you had punches there, but only if they were worded better....but alas, they werent. So that made them weak punches and thats not gonna take it...work at it.
vote- jammin
This was a ok battle nothing special
Jobus had some nice personals an wordplay in his verse, kinda funny too, punches were a little played in some spots but it was still an overall decent verse, but you dropped some serious shit so I give ya props
Urban.....you had a good verse too it was close, you had some more original punches in yours an also had personals an the wordplay going, you dropped hard an you edged it out by just a little but in my opinion.
Vote: Urban
Your writtens suck, and this match has got you in a bind
Urbans got nothing to lose....when his career's on the line
medium
your shit is played and old, probably still rockin the izzle on wizzles
But you can brush w/ death, cuz I gave that last line bristles
eh
Urbans chances are slim so this is basically a bye
I mean he's next to none when facing his skill, eye to eye
could of worded better
Who the fuck is reelist? I ain't gon be bothered to try
But i'll still have Urbans teeth screaming "Where the fuck am I?"
no
Urbans close to dead. Hes really trying to wish a plan.
But really....Who the fuck ever heard of an Urban Fisherman?
wtf?
You suck, when it comes to being wack you take the cake
& if your as real as can be.. that explains why the worlds so fake
platonic...
Urbans unwanted. Even his parent have hired a hearse.
Chances are this'll be dope....or urban could drop a verse.
par
now,just becuz ya site name is green don't make you sick
cuz you just like a new shit line you get played 2 quick
bad setup..bad.
now i could say you got heart to try and battle me
but the voters wouldn't ,hell even ya title disagrees
NO
don't even know how you got in this, spitting shit like that
but we know faggots like you love to slip thru the cracks
LOL
he's a no one his own damn profile supports this line
beef thread shows you beg for feedback like a horse's behind
...
red means ya ass needs aid and white means you surrender
just like ya country you never described with the two genders
many better punches towards Canadians..
ya lines are made with chalk they're easily erased from this board
i ain't gotta take jokes about my rod from this broad, lawd
NO
knows i've tried to endure this whack ass talent-less hack
that catches more damn beatings than ho laying on her backs
didn't like period
The faggot/crack was funny but thats as far as Reelist goes...Jobe did a bit better ergo:
Vote Jammin' Jobus
Jammin' Jobus advances to Rd.2, closed.