Ehh both verses sucked. But i think it was clear who won.
Scriptious had better punches in my opinion. he has 1 while cypha had none. Work on structure and flow to both. Both need to work on punches and personals.
V/Scriptious
Ehh both verses sucked. But i think it was clear who won.
Scriptious had better punches in my opinion. he has 1 while cypha had none. Work on structure and flow to both. Both need to work on punches and personals.
V/Scriptious
Vote- Cypha
Script, that was whack no offence. structure was whack. flow fell off at points. punches were not thrown.
Cypha- that was ok. you used personals. dont use shit lines. you had the hype in ur verse, threw punches.
vote- cypha
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WTF?
K Cypha came witty and had some good multis and punches. It wasa actually not a bad verse, but never explain your punches, newbie.
Scriptious had an okay verse, but it wasn't personal at all and wasn't very witty.
Vote: K Cypha
vote-cypha
neither really had anything that good, but cypha's was better
boo at this
weak battle yall...
this could have been good but both were lacking...
Scriptious had a nice rhyme scheme...structure wasn't too good tho..and had no punches....forced wordplay with the "planets" "Planned hits"....nothing was too good in this verse...sorry
K cypha...had decent rhymes too, and structure was better...but holy fuck did you ever play off of his verse? damn seriously, that should be an auto dq...but since ur not dq'd then I won't look at it like that...the "full of shit" line was kinda played...and nothing else really stood out....but you still attempted more punches...soooo
V/ K Cypha
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Scrip - lines were kinda stretched and alot of your lines didnt even rhyme to me like planets and kids...down and amount.....punches werent great, some were ight, some just didnt connect. No good personals in the verse.
cyph - wasnt bad, some lines were ight, some were kinda played out like the diapa line..but yours did hit harder, more easy to read and some personals were attempted...but dont explain ya punches.
votin cyph as he had a better attempt..
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wohhhh lol..10 mins is all it took..i got 5 votes anyway..why are all use voting?
blap blap bang
Nah i think votin doesnt end till Sunday man
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Smoka, this is a joke right? Cause before I drop my punch, his notes die..
..so whys it necessary to deliver big blows..
..as all I need to do is fart on cyph
---Not a good opener at all...
All your hopes wiped, thinking you’ll beat me? Your in another world kid..
..i wonder why though? Is it where I hurl him..
..so he burns through other planets?(Planned-hits)
---Eh...Not bad I guesse...Didnt rhyme very good.
Manage Script? Let me explain to you, theres no way you can handle this..
..sorta like millionaires fucking younger ones..
..then having a heart attack hit
---No. Wack
With wack tactics why believe you’ll match this, as my strikes put you out..
..leaving your lines damaged in tattered marks..
..as I smoulder you with brute clouts
No no no..
Your fucked now! But whats funny, i beat on you with the least amount..
..cause your not worth the time nor effort..
..so in 10 mins ill leave you down
Eh...not bad I gueese.
Ok you came fairly wack. Dont use that structure. Uhh closer and planet lines were decent. Rest werent good at all. Try to come with more wit.
You didn't read the battle's rules... cuz when you signed in it
ya spat in EIGHTEEN minutes... without a line limit!
---Not bad....Flowed nicely.
So i'll spit as many lines as you... but by ya verse, i'd say that's fi'ty*...
i can't see how many lines you got, cuz ya structure is so SHITTY!
---No consdearing you used the same structure as him right below.
And i'm so whitty, that my post'll have ya throat tied in knots
Ya verse is 'square', and has no 'edge'...
...... yet ya can't Take ya thoughts Outside the box!*
---I dont like it when people break into 3 line bars but strictly as a punch it decent.
I bet you pre-write and bite... that you read off a 'Script'...
Too bad you're like a diapa... always full of shit!
---Amazingly played punch. Im guessing the script thing is probably pretty played aswell.
dumb bitch, open ya eyes... i'm wreckin ya, see?
wit this verse, i'll bring ya score to a negative three!
---No.
You had one hypocrital line...Box and limit lines where coo....but the rest were kinda below coo...like minus good. You flowed nicer with the rhyme scheme though so...
Vote/k cypha
Vote: Scriptious
Reason: Better punches, even though both were lacking in these. But Scriptious also had better flow which gave him the win in my eyes.
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not too great a battle....
i dunno y ppl are voting for script, his verse was shit, and K, u fed a little bit but ur verse was actually decent with some OK punches, nuthin great...
vote - K
^that's rightOriginally Posted by MCeePJ
Not quite. There's still voting allowed, and he's gettin' votes fast.
script had tight flow, ok punches, k had ok punches but crap flow, nice scheme in scriptz but overall multis came to ti down and criptz got that
vote scriptz
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Smoka, this is a joke right? Cause before I drop my punch, his notes die..
..so whys it necessary to deliver big blows..
..as all I need to do is fart on cyph
hmmm
All your hopes wiped, thinking you’ll beat me? Your in another world kid..
..i wonder why though? Is it where I hurl him..
..so he burns through other planets?(Planned-hits)
meh, your bars are too stretched, the punch comes from nowere
Manage Script? Let me explain to you, theres no way you can handle this..
..sorta like millionaires fucking younger ones..
..then having a heart attack hit
ehhh
With wack tactics why believe you’ll match this, as my strikes put you out..
..leaving your lines damaged in tattered marks..
..as I smoulder you with brute clouts
filler
Your fucked now! But whats funny, i beat on you with the least amount..
..cause your not worth the time nor effort..
..so in 10 mins ill leave you down
nah
You didn't read the battle's rules... cuz when you signed in it
ya spat in EIGHTEEN minutes... without a line limit!
meh
So i'll spit as many lines as you... but by ya verse, i'd say that's fi'ty*...
i can't see how many lines you got, cuz ya structure is so SHITTY!
meh.. fity and shitty... nice rhyming words
And i'm so whitty, that my post'll have ya throat tied in knots
Ya verse is 'square', and has no 'edge'...
...... yet ya can't Take ya thoughts Outside the box!*
decent, didnt you just bash on this structure?
I bet you pre-write and bite... that you read off a 'Script'...
Too bad you're like a diapa... always full of shit!
pretty decent
dumb bitch, open ya eyes... i'm wreckin ya, see?
wit this verse, i'll bring ya score to a negative three!
meh
i forgot whos verse is whos so..
.. i vote this second guy.... first verse wasnt good, at all.
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