Corrupted Visions: We Can't Stop (Feat: Masta C)

[-uski-]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=99775
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=99771
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=99537


MC-uski:
When i grab this mic i just cant stop flowin to the beat
This will all be complete.....when im showin you defeat
when the Flow runs threw me when I hold The MicroPhone
thats why I start the rhymen to this beat to Set A Tone
SO I will stand alone, Im Here reppen Corrupted Visionz
Cause i will man my throne and make damn lryical incisions
if you emptied my lungs id still be spiting with no quitin
Cause that doesnt exist to me cause ill always be ripping
It seeme like something posses me when i step the stage
Cause I leave everyone out.....i wouldnt test all the rage


Masta C:
I cant stop its like its in my blood and I just cant get it out…
Making my hand clench to the mic, I just cant sit it down…
My lips are constantly movin there is no shutting my mouth..
Even if you are taking my vocals and are cutting them out..
Cause I’ll keep spitting even if my damn lungs are empty..
Truth be told cause that is what my damn tongue is sending…
Its like lyrics are just flowing….right through my veins…
And it just soothes my pain…that’s why….I rule this game…
The hate just fuels my brain….so that I just keep spitting..
Cause when its all over…you will never…see me quitting…


This was Keyed In like 15-20 Mins Aiight people...P.€.a.c.€...

[Mistral]

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[Vis]

this was pretty tight, i was feeling flow alot

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[Cris Calliba]

eh...nice collabo...good for something written in a short period of time. if it was off the head it was aaight..b e-z...

[Phoeniix]

solid flow and structures.....some good rhymes in there.
it was a really good piece, especially for something thrown together in 20 minutes. so yeah the flow/structure was the most solid part of this verse to me. tahnks for hitting up my shit

[Endeva.]

i thought this was ok...not as good as some ive seen from you's...but still decent...the main thing i gotta say is wheres the vocab?......other than that the flow n structure n shit was good.....jus seemed a bit of a bland read well in my opimion anyways.....but on the whole not bad for a quick drop....pZ...brov's

[Mistral]

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[noncentz]

FOR OFF THE HEAD IT WAS GOOD IF IT WAS PREWRIET IT WASNT VERY GOOD NOT WHAT IS EXPECTED ATLEAST.....LACKS THE GOLDEN TOUCH

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[Mistral]

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[Joker]

good piece... enjoyed reading it both emcees had nice verse, punches was on point, they stayed on topic and made sense,nice shit i rate it at.... 8.5/10


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[Lewd]

i liked it good flow,structure and vocab,overall i thoguth it was a good piece,good job..........

[Lewd]

i liked it good flow,structure and vocab,overall i thoguth it was a good piece,good job............................................... .............