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    NUCLEAR CONCEPTS: The Rebelion-Fancy c.'s Laws.

    REPLIED TO:
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    THIS IS SOME BACKROUND ON FANCY C. HES THE REASON THE REBELION STARTED, THIS IS WHY.



    Intercepted transmission..............2 minutes ETA..............*Loading*.........Source: Unknown..........*Loading*........*Rerouting
    Digital Coverters*.....Destination: www.Flow.com....*Buffering*.........*Uplink <http://www.Flow.com....*Buffering*.........*Uplink> Established*.........


    *1st voice-Unknown*
    This is.....Robe....t Me.....ing for WTGI News Rad..o....reporting,
    for those of you on the West Co....st, good evening, and those here in New York, Good Morning,
    *Buffering*........
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    Right here, in New York City, people are lining up, to be a part of history,
    witnesses to the to the continuing memorial to honor all those defeated by our lord, FancyC,
    height easily, exceeds, that of a 100,000 ft., defying gravity,
    names ingraved in the massive stone from top to bottom, from A to Z,
    elevators run from the base to it's peak, complete,
    with food courts, serving everything from steak, to blended treats,
    so the families of the dying and deceased, can grieve in peace, and eat,
    and at that very peak, construction's backed up for weeks, and weeks,
    workers furiously trying to keep up with the sudden increase of the MC's that our lord defeats,
    at the entrance, you pay a small fee, but don't fret, it dosen't all go to C,
    a portion of tha proceeds are donated to a local charity,
    and there's a museum, inside, houses old school relics and artifacts,
    like the first mic that FancyC rocked, and the notebook with was is believed to contain his highness' first rap,
    life-sized busts, of some his more, notable opponents,
    all who possess skill, but, and I quote, "All lack certain admirable components,"
    they could'nt stop my inevitable victory, futile attempts to post-pone it,
    they lack the blood-thirsty ability to kill a foe, given the right moment,"
    Fancy also states that you might recognize a few,
    like Remix, and Havoc911, before he and Fancy rematched in 2022,
    HVS, and Kuroi Kaze too, when in 2060, they led that lyrical coup,
    there were others, like Spike, and Abasi, and their respective crews,
    he says, "that all of them had to get taken to school,"
    and he, "made a throne out of the remains of them fools,"
    when i asked, what they had in common, he said, "they didn't have the drive to take the leader position,
    some of them didn't even have enough might to put another MC into submission,"
    "like in 2057, when Havoc threatened Abasi's wife and children,
    Abasi surrendered, and made efforts to forgive him?"
    "Havoc killed them psionically anyway, but that just proves my arguement, "says the Deity, "if an MC trangresses against you, forgive, but never forget,"
    he went on to say, "you gotta be cold-hearted, with complete disregard for anything that draws breath,
    be it man or beast, strip yourself of all weaknesses, until there's nothing but power, and might left,
    do anything that you gotta do, anything to make the killing,
    diss a muthaphucka with your all, do whatever he can't do, or isn't willing,
    everything is fair game, like I said before, even women, and children,
    TAKE an opportunity, from someone, when it isn't openly given,"
    and he's right, that's the society that we live in, ever since the Freestyle Act of 2006,
    no one can bust on someone without a permit, or in an sanctioned event,
    or be included in a natinally televised cipher tournament,
    any unauthorized verses can result in a severe punishment,
    remixing is outlawed, biting, grants a penalty of death,
    many a cat has gone to the chair, for claimin lyrics written by someon else,
    no more battlin on the net, freedom of speech has been aboilished,
    any literature, building, or statue that defies the will of Fancy has been burned, and demolished,
    only the illest got to lyrical college, and even so you need to shell out tha big bucks,
    be lucky to get a scholarship in metaphors, but if not, life is rough,
    that's right! that son-of-a-bitch Fancy controls, 98 percent of all actions on the globe,
    he rewrote the history books, so when he came into power, nobody knows,
    the dollar is now the only currency, he said it's the only one that makes sense,
    he banned all other languages, English is the only one to exist,
    futile attempts, have been made to try to negotiate or persuade, for Fancy to end his reign,
    but it seems his lordship ENJOYS causing misery and pain,
    he's a being of pure hatred, only lives to DESTROY and ENSLAVE,
    my grandfather, before he died, told me once, of a land of the free, and a home of the brave,
    after meeting him, I conclude that he is INSANE!! PEOPLE!! WE NEED TO TAKE OUR LIVES BACK!
    DOWN WTTH FANCYC!! DOWN WITH HIS UNSPEAKABLE ACTS!!

    *2nd voice-Unknown*
    HEY!! YOU IN THERE!! BY THE WILL OF HIS HIGHNESS FANCYC! CEASE AND DESIST!!

    *1st voice*
    DON'T BE AFRAID!! WE CAN WIN!! RESIST!!
    He can't silence us all?!? UNITED! WE CAN STAND AS ONE!

    *2nd voice*
    THAT'S IT!! BLOW THA DOOR!!

    *1st voice*
    THE REVOLUTION'S BEGUN!!


    *Deafening explosion*


    ....................................*Silence*..... ................................Silence........... ...
    *Unknown voice*
    Dow......n....with........*static*...F....cy....C. .....
    ..............*Silence*............End Transmission........

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    that was on point i like and fits well in coherence withthe previous installment.....all and all you only feed a great rep t the fam twin
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    THX FOR THE PROPS WORD.
    PART TWO WILL BE OUT SOON.

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    i gotta agree man this was nice....the way it was portrayed was coo...some good shit man...reppin well......this crew is goin places man...keep up!!!!...pZ
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    you elavaten hoe...lol....good work man, your structure was good your flow was on point very lon but well worth the read you had a lot of good lines our elavetin quick good ta see, if you'd be so king...drop an honest vote on my battle against JK when ye get 100 posts thanks man pz
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    THX FOR THE FEEDBACK GUYS, I APPRECEHATE IT.
    AND RULE ILL DEFF HIT UP YOUR BATTLE WHEN I GET 100 POSTS.
    PEACE.

    QUIT SLEEPING PEOPLE.

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    uppin^^^^

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    This was a good concept.. Very tight indeed.. But the rhyme scheme was to be questioned.. The occasional multis hlped the flow alot..There was no exploding lines.. I can see that Word Perfect has helped you a bit.. If not.. It is similar.. Good rep for N/C

    Go return the favour..
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    THX FOR THE FEED BACK POTENT, AND NAW WORD DIDNT HELP ME ON THIS THIS IS NY STORY.
    PEACE.

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    This was pretty good i thought....i liked it....flow in this seemed to be on point through out it i thought, flow stayed on in this....Your vocab in this was pretty good i thought as well...liked the concept you used in this...overall a nice piece....keep at it.

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    THX FOR THEW FEEDBACK C. PEACE.

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