Corrupted Visions: Never Take The Chance (Feat: Mc-Uski)

[Mistral]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...313#post978313
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...7&pagenumber=1
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=97881


Masta C:
Never take the chance cause your just gonna get hurt..
And then they say they love you and that shit works…
You let them in….and then they take all that you got…
Blinded by lies to see the truth, wishing the facts are not-..
True, Cause you love her, but all she wants it to use you..
So you let her confuse you when all she does is abuse you..
She takes your time, takes your mind, takes your dimes..
She hurts you, but you still think “ I gotta make her mine”..
But all this time shes seeing another guy behind your back..
Then you start wishing you could just rewind your tracks..
But you cant, only if you would have seen all of this before..
Now your poor just hurt to the core left with your heart she tore..

You should never…take the chance..
Things arent what ya think at first glance..
She will leave ya heart in the ambulance..
You should never…take the chance..

Mc-Uski:
Never take the chance they'll Hurt Ya In many Ways
Your Other Side has Took Away My Pride 4 Many Days
I hate u thats all she says to me, i guess it must be true
My friends tellin me "just leave its over, trust me dude"
Why Did I Agree, I knew what Shes Like Its Just Not me
But Shes So Pretty, I Just Got Bored Of Being So Lonely
I will never trust her again, All this bitching hurts my brain
Making me mad every single time she has to blurt my name
Why do you make me soo mad, I just dont understand it
I thought i was your man..shit, you just played me..damn it

You should never…take the chance..
Things arent what ya think at first glance..
She will leave ya heart in the ambulance..
You should never…take the chance..

[K.I.D.]

Damn niggas that was some nice shit. the flow was emac and its on a level were niggas can relate to it cause it hits you and its real. Yall niggas keep doing ur thing and stay up.

Holla at em.

[Yaz]

yo i agree wit Da_Killa_Kid , dat waz hella tight...i give it a 8/10. but u guyz always talkin bout a girl in yo life or sumin like dat... nex one tri an make it bout, well nething but a girl, dat be kool to see.

[-uski-]

Lol Aiight Next time wont be about a gurl

Thanks For the Feedback so far Keep it droping In Aiight Peace Yall (v).....

[shay-d]

uski u've elevated alot ...and ya that's some nice shit u guys.. keep it up
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[Mistral]

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Shay-D lose the sig man its too big lol..i'll make you a new one if you want me too...and Yaz we will try to change it up a bit lol

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[Endeva.]

nothing wrong with the piece, masta came good with a nicely structured verse, some little multis thrown in. same with uski, yours was well structured.better than the last read....you both got a bit of meaning in there,,BUT...i gotta be honest ..change the topic....its begininng to bore me ppl.......do one with something different....pZ.....

[Newbie]

Its good, but personally i couldnt bring myself rapping about girls....too much headaches, in my opinion: love dem but cant live wid dem. Da rhymes were slick though (back on topic)

[-uski-]

Thanks For the Feedback so far Keep it droping In.....and Next time we will do something different.......because im getting fucked off with tne Gurl topics to :P

-{/]~{Ú§kÍ}~[\}-

[Mistral]

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[Kastaway]

niice piece ya'll

Masta C feelin this here
"Blinded by lies to see the truth, wishing the facts are not-..
True, Cause you love her, but all she wants it to use you..
So you let her confuse you when all she does is abuse you.."

Mc-Uski
"Why do you make me soo mad, I just dont understand it
I thought i was your man..shit, you just played me..damn it"

niice way to finish that shit off... I was feelin this piece throughout...

[Mistral]

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[Topic]

good peice, nice flow through the whole peice, i do agree about needing a topic change (do a vocab with me and ill show ya lol) but otherwise it was good, vocab was allright and structure was allright

[Mistral]

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[rayman g]

good piece MASTA C , i would give it 10/10