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  1. December 6th, 2003, 01:34 PM #1
    isane lyricist
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    Talking keying nonsense

    i've stepped out of my shadow, proclaim im ILL when i battle
    isane lyricist leave your emcees shaking like baby rattles
    called me ILLness ways i spit nonsense and you feel this
    put up a fight with me,so i put my fist right were ur face is
    snipe ya chest from a distance and rip your vest
    go ahead spit ur best,i'll punch u so hard that ur soul will jump out of ya flesh
    clash you threw the ground like my fist weighted 1,000 pounds
    rock a krown ,ill snatch it and make you eat dirt out of the ground
    i'll rip threw ur corpses,well im creative called me methaphorses
    i key this nonsense that take over your mind by unknown forces



    blah 2 min key



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    Last edited by isane lyricist; December 6th, 2003 at 01:41 PM
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  2. December 6th, 2003, 01:35 PM #2
    isane lyricist
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    uppin for some feed back
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  3. December 6th, 2003, 01:37 PM #3
    E-Lude
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    i thought it was ok mang. desent flow and vocab. it painted a good picture.keep it up
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  4. December 6th, 2003, 01:41 PM #4
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    good shit for 2 min

    good punches

    not too many metas

    good vocab keep that shit up.

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  5. December 6th, 2003, 01:51 PM #5
    isane lyricist
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    ight thanks for the feed back uppin
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  6. December 6th, 2003, 02:14 PM #6
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    Yeah this was alright i thought.....you had some good metas in here i thought, pretty decent....structure was alright could have been a bit better but still good.....flow was good i thought, stayed on mostly, fell off a bit but nothing big...but overall this was alright keep at it.
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  7. December 6th, 2003, 03:18 PM #7
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    Originally posted by Masta C
    Yeah this was alright i thought.....you had some good metas in here i thought, pretty decent....structure was alright could have been a bit better but still good.....flow was good i thought, stayed on mostly, fell off a bit but nothing big...but overall this was alright keep at it.

    yup it was ok
    decent flow
    decent vocab
    decent overal

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  8. December 6th, 2003, 05:12 PM #8
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    ight thanks for all the feed back uppin once again
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  9. December 6th, 2003, 06:23 PM #9
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    Yea, it was straight. Topic kinda used up, but played well.
    Nice meta's and a decent flow hommie, should have made it longer, I like those type of reads. But nice drop overall hommie.

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  10. December 6th, 2003, 06:44 PM #10
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    ight thanks alot high class uppin for more feed back
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  11. December 6th, 2003, 06:47 PM #11
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    yo for two minutes that was a real nice verse right when i started reading it i felt it you know but that was real nice for two minutes can u hit my verse up called "underpriveledged"thanks man keep it up
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  12. December 7th, 2003, 01:16 PM #12
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    uppin
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