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  1. November 29th, 2003, 05:05 PM #1
    Spike Sanders
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    Hot Shit- Peep Thi Niggas

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    rule
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    lyrical mob
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...402#post946402

    Notice the overabundance of explosives here/
    Bitch i'll blow up ya chest like your name was Britney Spears/
    That's right I'm obsessed with weapons/
    makin rappers fall apart like P. Diddy after J.Lo left him/
    Say whatever I want, I'm a lyrical villian/
    When I rap, cats get excited like Micheal Jackson in a room full of children/
    Everybody love my flow/
    Even got white folks watchin me like a reality show/
    The day I fall off the throne/
    Will be the exact same day Ashanti learns to hit a high note/
    I'm P.S.L.'s Big L, but I'm still alive/
    Plus I grab attention like Serena Williams' theighs/
    Shavin my nuts bi-weekly, yeah it's all in the Rogaine/
    Arsonist, I'm like Hank Hill, cause I always use Propane/
    and propane accessories, I'm corrupt with complexity/
    My rhymes deserve mentioning, my style is deafening/
    I'll battle a Banks,Budden,Jones,Carter, or Marshal/
    confidence overwhelming, IQ is partial/
    Don't wanna start no/
    beef; write an article/
    bout this unsigned hype, the unbreakable monacle/
    My word! I say that SPIKE is bloody good!/
    Websta is my rap name, is that understood?/
    Let it be known that I'm climbin the ranks/
    So fuck wit me an ill leave ya body floatin on the banks/
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  2. November 29th, 2003, 05:52 PM #2
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    GOT DAMN!

    Yo Dunny i don't know why people are sleepin dis...

    HOTTNESS!!!!!

    Lyric's was solid... Lmfao...Flow was no point... concepts where there...

    You came off hott with opener...closer??? dunno bout dat but..

    "Notice the overabundance of explosives here/
    Bitch i'll blow up ya chest like your name was Britney Spears/
    That's right I'm obsessed with weapons/
    makin rappers fall apart like P. Diddy after J.Lo left him/
    Say whatever I want, I'm a lyrical villian/
    When I rap, cats get excited like Micheal Jackson in a room full of children/"

    You Killed it there son fa sho... 9/10... good spit...

    keep ya game up, an never stop elevatin... On3
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  3. November 29th, 2003, 06:01 PM #3
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    THX FOR THE ROPS MD.

    now quit fuckin sleepin on this people, damn.
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  4. November 29th, 2003, 07:35 PM #4
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    HOLY SHIT THE SLEEPERS HERE ARE UN BALIEVIBLE.
    QUIT SLEEPIN ON THIS MUTHA FUCKAS.
    UPPIN^
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  5. November 29th, 2003, 07:36 PM #5
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  6. November 29th, 2003, 07:55 PM #6
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    Yeah this was pretty good....I liked the britney line, made me laugh....but your structure could be a bit better though, you should try to make your lines around the same length....vocab in this was pretty good....overall this was a good piece...keep at it.
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  7. November 29th, 2003, 07:56 PM #7
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    I don't think this was at hot as MD let to believe. . but it was cool none-the-less. .

    The concepts were there, although some of them very played.. JLo/Pdiddy, Britney Spears, etc.

    The flow was good in this, though, and was very easy to pick up on. .

    Overall a decent piece, not eye popping or anything, but solid.
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  8. November 29th, 2003, 07:59 PM #8
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    YO THANKS FOR THE FEED BACK MAST C & KREDIT.

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  9. November 29th, 2003, 08:04 PM #9
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    yo son this was raw i dont know why cat thinks its a fucking posturpedic bed yo i got a crew out we trying to do our thingyou welcome in if you want
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..
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  10. November 29th, 2003, 08:18 PM #10
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    YO THX FOR THE PROPS WORD, AND ABOUT THE CREW THATS A DEFF. YESS ABOUT JOINING. ILL PM YOU BOUT IT
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  11. November 29th, 2003, 08:25 PM #11
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    you wuddup this was a pretty good drop...there were a few lines that had me laughing...flow was good but short lines in some spots were difficult to fallow...a few stand out lines were:

    Notice the overabundance of explosives here/
    Bitch i'll blow up ya chest like your name was Britney Spears/
    That's right I'm obsessed with weapons/
    makin rappers fall apart like P. Diddy after J.Lo left him/
    Say whatever I want, I'm a lyrical villian/
    When I rap, cats get excited like Micheal Jackson in a room full of children/
    yo by P.S.L do you mean port st. lucie in florida???

    holla
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    but I hate this shit Im sick of songs about surround sound systems
    I have to see these bitches with bling the size of midgets


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  12. November 29th, 2003, 08:29 PM #12
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    THX FOR THE PROPS REHAB, ABOUTH THE PSL ILL PM YOU
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  13. November 29th, 2003, 09:08 PM #13
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    pretty good drop your flow was alright had some great metas and multies nice vocab keep doin ye thing hot drop pz...an yo cud you hit my battl wit an honest vote thanks man
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  14. November 29th, 2003, 09:11 PM #14
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    wait nevermind you only got 57 posts
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  15. November 29th, 2003, 09:14 PM #15
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    THX FOR THE FEED BACK RULE SRY BOUT NOT BEIN ABLE TO VOTE PZ.
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