5-8barz
no hate
no crew
no dr
no herb votes
no prewrittin
no recycling
checking in
*Copy~Righted*
Kclipz 4 Murkin
5-8barz
no hate
no crew
no dr
no herb votes
no prewrittin
no recycling
checking in
Although Pure In Heart, The Violence Never Ends.
aight man.....as i said,I'll spit about 15 mins after u....Good luck Cus u gonna need it....Bring ur ''a'' game....Dont look at my record or my number of posts....1
Ima have to spit right now Cus i gotta b out in 5 mins...
Picks up Mic....*yawns*....Lectures Kclipz 4 murkin...
This verse gon invade your mind and hold down your self-esteem just so you wont get your 'hopes-up'........
So like midgets playing ball against Shaq you shouldn't even bother to 'post-up'...... ( post his verse....get it?)
Like scared and small mice..you cant fuck wit this 'Cat'.....
Cuz my skills Undominable and Persuading even 'Smokey-Bear' will light a 'Match'......
'Time' for this 'Dry-to-Die', all i do is spit the truth, while your afraid to pronounce a 'Lie'......
You know 'Why?', fuck it just call a Autopsy Surgeon the way i rip Kclipz out from the 'In-side'.......
Cut your receedings like murder 'Stylists' so 'Why Risk?'.......
Only time youd be "Rich-In-Metaphors" is if you were in Notre Dame 'Fighting-the-Irish'.........
my malicious-scriptures will viciously-rip-ya....cuzz now tha tables been 'turned'......
its best you admire-thys-stryfe cuzz i'll set fire to-ya-"life" like ya "diary key" been 'burned'.......
Inventing shit that's as proved as existence in other planets in all your 'fights' .....
You're like Mike Tyson , when you try to throw punches you can only pull 'bites'........
I just cleared the 'Clouds',now this man is only seeing 'Stars'.....(KO)
L-O-S-E-R..there, i just stretched the truth, more than he stretches his 'Barz'......
'Light-Up' your rapsheet your rhymes still wouldnt be 'Hotter'.....
Matterfact you couldnt 'Cum-Nice' jacking off next to 'Mr. Rogers'...(rip)
GhosT
Dont take forever......Post by today.....I did 8 Bars....Dont go over 8 bars......Ima B out....Hope when i come baCC later on,u have Posted.....1
Wats that say location hidden? no shit cuz obviouslly your parents are ashamed of yo ass
diddnt want to have recognized by any theme that you have so they jus threw you into the lower class//2
Test less? no you tesstical~less but diddnt wanna admit it so you put it in the form test~less
herb tried to take on a "higher" level but couldnt even if he was in a airplane and spitted gainst the greatest//4
Intrests:none? is that you have no intrest in anything or is it cuz noone wants to take intrest in you
like the wackness you are put yourself in the stock exchange noone will invest in you//6
unlike your other latest battle this isnt gonna be unlimited bitch
jus think if it was itd be sum of the worlds limited hits//8
8 barz like that man g'luck may tha best emcee win
Although Pure In Heart, The Violence Never Ends.
u spit 8barz it dont seem it man but wateva oh well lets let tha votes commence now good luck man and that is over 8barz
Although Pure In Heart, The Violence Never Ends.
Not bad
Flow: TIE
Opener: Kclipz
Closer:Copy
Personals: Kclipz (Copy ahd more but clipz hit harder)
Winner: Kclipz
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Klipz got this one....
Better wordplay, structure, floh and overall better verse....
copy was aight, but no good enough.....
VoteL Kclipz
can ya'll vote at my battles in my sig, thay have been there forever and being slept on badly, i winnin 3-0..... polls are appriciated..... Peace vote fairly
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Although Pure In Heart, The Violence Never Ends.
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Ok, the breakdown:
Copy~Righted: Ur punches had potential, but either u took too long to say them, or they just died out in the end. Some of them hit pretty hard, the "stretches his barz" line was ill, nice multi and personal. Flow was ok, but sometimes, the first line had 9 syllables, then the next had 16, or somethin like that. If the flow was a little better, the punches would stand out more. Your opener was decent, your closer was solid. Pretty good drop.
Kclipz 4 Murkin: Work on your structure. The punches were there, but it was all stretched out, so some of them appeared to be hidden. Nice wordplay on the "tesstical~less", one of your best lines. Opener was kind of weak, took to long before throwin the punch. Mainly consistant with your lines, the flow was ok, off at times but there. When punches were recognized, they hit. Good drop.
My vote goes to "Kclipz 4 Murkin", both had punches but Kclipz was more consistant w/ them. Good battle. Hit the link up please, it's gettin maddd slept on. Much appreciated pz.
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Kilpz had a much cleaner rhymestyle................everybody had some dumb ass metas......forced ass hell.................straight battle but Klipsz is gettin my vote due to flow, better metas and wordplay............copy righted, that notre dame line was wack...
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