10 Lines
No Bullshit
No d/r n all tht shit
Spits Due..wheneva..just not to long
Checkin then spit
Aragorn
-Origin-
10 Lines
No Bullshit
No d/r n all tht shit
Spits Due..wheneva..just not to long
Checkin then spit
CHeckin in
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
(Araogrn bows respectfully, then draws arms)
Check
*piss's on aragorns shoes*
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Your Origin is in the balls of an ex convict/
You landed in someone's ass, that's why you spit hot shit/
Oh! sorry that's right you came from Osiris' iris/
I guess pops pulled out, yanked it, aimed it and FIRED IT/ (came in his eye)
Hmm...Origin, you couldn't be the root word of original/
Every one of your lines comprised of bitten lines that you listen to/
Your a squirrel, you read a post, stuff a line in your cheeks/
Then stuff your mouth with pillow filler for the lines in between/
Your suspect, and in my court your guilty til proven innocent/
Hire a hung jury... your only chances of winning this.
Asshole slayin no deamons..but call him the Lord Of The Ring
Ya Feelin sick like ya Sea-man from all the shit you pushed in
Call me a black-smith..this fresh prince got ya arms on the floor
wack bitch aint battlin goblins so its back to the Drawing Board
Personally..i aint gettin even..like B.I.G its ya record tht pays (itl b 3-3)
My treason got ya hangin so call me a rope how ya lifes in the fray (Sig)
De-equipitin ya sword..i kit kats bars out of they rappin
I leave ya all over this board..in my sigs how its hapnin (my record..he prob playes dungeons n dragons)
Please dont call me ya dogg..i just enjoy pissin on newbs (my checkin)
Hole punchin this bitch..hard backed..its ya paper thats through (l.o.t.r book)
Just for you dumbass's aragorn is a lord of the rings character (l.o.t.r)
*farts*
umm i think origin took this because he had more similes and put things to gether good,.....nice creativity, he just had a way better post
please hit up my batttle with ALT, sorry i cant vote just thought ide give feed
Fuck Thorn
I new brother was born
Wow. Much harder punches and way better verse by Origin. Extremely elementary and child-like verse from Aragorn. Some of his lines didn't even rhyme. His best line was the squirrel one and even that needed alot of work. Better punches, wordplay, and personals by Origin win this. Return the favor. Thanks. Vote here!
Yo! My Fucking brother posted this verse when i was in the kitchen! I didn't spit that shit! WTF! I DEMAND A REMATCH!
This isn't fair. I swear to god someone else was on my computer.
haha i dont belive you atall...
but wateva..after this ill gladly rematch you
thanks for votin Tobias
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yo should I vote on this or not??
yall drop a vote here
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=90294
and let me know, I'll be back to vote if yall agree to this thread, there seems to be a disagreement here.....
openerrigin
closer
wordplay
punches
structure:tie
overall
aragon came weak, weak enough to lose this battle
would you plz vote honestly on the battle in my sig
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leave feed and a link i'll return it
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i will go ahead and vote...and if there is a rematch or something...they can just remove my poll....but i think Origin did take this easily...with better punches, wordplay, vocabulary and structure....here's a breakdown for u two....
BREAKDOWN
Punches - Origin
Flow - Aragorn
Wordplay - Origin
Vocab - Origin
Personals - Origin
Structure - Origin
Overall - Origin takes this in pretty much a landslide...no hate to either of though...nice read....just a vote....
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SmokaJoka666 vs. Tonya~Montana
peace
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aiight thanks for votin...but whys the poll 1-1?..lol its 3-0
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Fuck it. Go ahead and have this shit. I'll see you again Origin.
For all that read this thread though, this is some weak ass bullshit. But fuck it, it proves that this cat can beat my brother. I'm moving on. Origin, if your man enough..........
<<<polled for u...checked the polls before i voted...i guess the kat above me accidentally picked aragorn....check my shit though...gettin sleepy...lmao
peace
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