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    ClaustrophobicS Present: On The Boat Deck (Alternate Ending)

    On The Boat Deck

    .. The Life ..

    Splender By Day.. Glory By Night..
    Remember To Stay.. Story Of My Life..
    Its Been Three Years.. Still Together..
    Times Of Near Tears.. Happiness Forever..
    Cant See Me Without Her.. Plainly Pronounced..
    Know Everything About Her.. Mainly Announced..
    I Bought Two Tickets.. Known To Bring Her..
    Something Else In It.. Goes On Her Finger..
    Carribean Tropics.. Where It Was Destined..
    Listen To Pockets.. To Pop The Question..
    She Accepted.. We Started Laughing..
    Never Neglected.. She Started Packing..

    .. Cruise ..

    Skies Never Gray.. Water Crystal..
    This Was The Day.. Stalled Her Whistle..
    Held Her Tight.. Kissed Her Neck..
    Once Felt Right.. Missed Neglect..
    Club Of Galour.. Drank Expensive Wine..
    Love Of Valour.. Thanked Extensive Time..
    Wore A Suit.. Her Gown That Gleamed..
    Fore The Cruise.. Out Of Dreams..
    Perfection Of Passion.. That We Shared..
    Resentment Out-Lasted.. Not That Cared..
    Food Delicates.. Heard His Fate..
    Rude Delegates.. Turned Their Hate..
    State Rooms In Comfort.. Bed They Slept..
    Late Noon In Summer.. When They Went..
    Sheets A Mess.. Named More Than Sex..
    Fleece Un-dressed.. What Was Next..
    Boat Shuttered.. They Stopped..
    Slow Mutters.. Problem Or Not?..
    Looked Out His View.. Just To Peek..
    Shook His Feet.. For What He Seen..

    .. Lost Anticipation ..

    Gunshots Heard.. His Gurl Awoke..
    Sum Shots Burned.. His World Explode..
    Hijacked Ship.. Passengers Lay Down..
    Times That Hit.. Passed For Now..
    Men Breaking In.. A Few Rooms Away..
    Wouldn't Be Taken In.. Not Today..
    In Panic.. Knew Not What To Do..
    Extatic.. Would He Go Out His Room?..
    Cared Less For Himself.. Than For His Baby..
    Wished For Her Help.. What Would Today Be..
    Two Rooms Further.. Theirs Was Next..
    Knew No Murder.. But Cared For Less..
    Hid His Woman.. Planned To Take Action..
    Knew He Shouldn't.. For What Had Happened..
    They Burst In.. Guns In Place..
    It Worsened.. When His Gurl Took Place..
    He Jumped In Front.. For the Love He Had..
    He Pumped His Gun.. For What Was So Fast..
    Shot, But Not Dead.. They Took Her Hair..
    Not In His Head.. But Had To Be There..
    She Pleaded For Life.. Hope In The Barrel..
    She Needed her Might.. Choked In Apparel..

    .. A Love Not Broken ..

    He Grabbed The Ring.. He Could Not Fathom..
    Backed To Bring.. Threw It At Him..
    Amazement He Sat.. Watched It Go..
    Placement In Back.. Of The Barrel Hole..
    Back Fired The Shot.. Burned His Hand..
    Attacked His Spot.. Hurt The Man..
    Arm Bruised In Red.. He Threw His Fists..
    Harm Due To Him.. He Knew No Miss..
    Attacked Til Death.. Life He Kept..
    Backed The Mess.. No Regrets..
    Boat Deck Stained.. Blood Of Men..
    Hope In Pain.. Cuts That Went..
    No One To Save.. For Lifes Hope..
    Families In Graves.. To The Life Boat..
    Got Away; Un-Harmed.. Watched The Vessel..
    Not Today; Alarmed.. Left Un-Settled..
    Looked At The Sea.. Nothing Left To Do..
    Then He Seen.. The Ring In The Cut Of His Shoe..
    Kissed His Gurl.. Held Her Tight
    "You Are My World.. Will You Be My Wife?''
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    Yo!!
    dat shit is hott fam for real
    i like how u freaked it changed up da endin an shit
    wordplay is serious iight
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    thanks man
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    Agree with what was said above..that was hot fo sure..keep it up

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