10-12 lines
no d/r
no feeding
no crew
check in b4 u spit.. ill drop shortly after you
N.D.eva
melodramah
10-12 lines
no d/r
no feeding
no crew
check in b4 u spit.. ill drop shortly after you
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im checkin..............ill drop within the next 20 minutes, k
good luck dawg...............................Holla!
From Jellystone national, done hibernating in the dark//
Cos ‘Yogi’s’ battlin ‘Boo Boo’ its a picnic in the park //
You couldn’t break a battle, like a constipated fart//
Need some Imodium….. to give yourself a decent start//
Yes now im blockin ya flow, like a beaver dams the river//
Leaving your words beached, unable to deliver//
Horses for courses, ill jump over your head//
Hoof ya with my content and leave you lyrically dead//
‘Tweety pie’ mentioned your name that’s a fact//
Then churped after that… ‘Taw, I taw, a ‘PUSSY’ cat’!…………………….
com on you said ya was gonna drop after me, its been 20 minutes........hurry up......peace!
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my shits nice leavin u left slain , feelin used up like a crack addicts drained, bruised veins
u thinkin this girls insane, these men must be LETTING her hang, or else shes givin em all brains/
no shadiness goin on, i win by pure skill..this weak as battle, id have more a challenge battlin a rappin dr phil/
my 2nd battle against N.D.eva n im determined to succeed,
thinkin hes real clever, usin excuses "i was too busy"...
translation-"pussy" to "english" -means he been steady dodgin shit, tryin to stall my victory/
i hope u pray to God, but even his grace cant make you as ill as me/
Pun in yo sig brings the only respect to your name,
too bad hes dead but even his presence is too small to elevate yo game/
like a rapist i dont care if ur willing or not, im taking my 7th win,
all rules r off, to someoone w/ no conscience theres no such thing as an immortal sin/
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Being as a girl... I don't know why the hell it happened but I had more of a emotion for N.D. It seems pretty authentic, but in a way.. This is why I'm fricken freaked out, is the fact that it was even cute. Besides that he used the words, in the Propper way. I'd still vote for N.D. As short as it may be. If you read my other posts, you'l know that I find words like "U" "Ur" A major turn off to the mind.
Flow: N.D
Authentication: N.D
Vocab:Tie
Length:Melodrama
Favorite use of words: N.D
The punch down: N.D (He used less words, but used them well.)
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THis was a even battle
for da fact that one cat used not so many lines or words but had sum punches
while the otehr had flow an mulites
good battle
i thought N deva won it
Vote- ndeva
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=85808
^^^ hit this up honestly
pc
uppin for some votes...............
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yo i feel this was an ok battle---ndeva ya verse was weird actually, ya had flow but the disses were pretty weak----melo ya flow was ok, stucture was weak, but ya had the betta punches more personals--so vote=melo
peep my battles---2 in the sig---
uppin for votin...........
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Sry 4 the freepost but melodramah why u duckin our battle man??u seen the links and in ur pms wats wrong wit u...............................
hit this with some votes....plz [4]
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