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  1. October 7th, 2003, 05:21 PM #1
    Mistral
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    KeyStyle

    Ill make you nervous…laugh at you like ya was a circus...
    Then get you some medical service..cause I killed you on purpose..
    And we can clash heads like rams...but ya gonna get brain damage..
    You can get your whole fam..but ya all gonna leave in a bandage..
    Causing a murder scene…leaving your body surrounded by chalk..
    You wanted to act mean…but look where you got with all that talk..
    And im not play-n-around..sooner or later..you’ll be lay-n-out..
    Cause ill stitch ya mouth shut like a open wound..what you say-n-now?..
    And you just a dunce…but we can meet anywhere you want..
    Then just once…ya get whats coming to ya, cause its not a good time to front..


    Just something quick, got bored, but leave me some feedback.
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  2. October 7th, 2003, 05:24 PM #2
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    yo it had alrite flow but not as good at the end.....
    quite good for a keystyle....
    thought that this was ok...
    keep droppin....
    peace
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    yo give a fair vote......

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  3. October 7th, 2003, 07:10 PM #3
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    nice piece, wish it was longer though. i could tell you was getting bored toward the end. Keep up the good work, yo!
    i will end up killing you no matter what you do
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  4. October 7th, 2003, 08:11 PM #4
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    yea...that was wiggerty wiggerty wack. wigger. i know you are. a wigger.

    but really...you probably have a career in the rap game...as dre's janitor or something..haha you suck. even for a keystyle that was BAD...my ten year old brother can bust raps better than that and even he has more street cred than you, wigger. you suck, wigger. you suck, go do your homework, whitey. hahahahaha


    peace
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  5. October 7th, 2003, 08:21 PM #5
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    ayo bro stop wit the racism that shits played out homie im not white but thas still wack crackin on his race

    i bet theres a ton of white cats that can tear u to shreds so watch wut u say n if u wanna beef wit me then im beefin witchu

    so watch who u beef wit


    but anyways it didnt have great flow the flow was kinda off but over all it was a straight keystyle keep it up homie
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  6. October 7th, 2003, 08:25 PM #6
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    http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...threadid=84088

    hit that up homie
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  7. October 7th, 2003, 10:30 PM #7
    Mistral
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    Hey guys thanks for the feedback except to that one guy lol, keep it coming, its much appreciated, thanks.
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  8. October 7th, 2003, 11:05 PM #8
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    You this was straight for a keystyle and it flowed real well. It had good conent. Keep them shits coming.
    ~1~
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  9. October 8th, 2003, 04:15 AM #9
    Mistral
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    Hey thanks for the feedback, keep the feedback coming, its much appreciated, thanks.
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  10. October 8th, 2003, 05:02 AM #10
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    yeh this was aight, not bad flow at the beginnin, got a little worse at the end--overall not bad though kind of simple rhymes though i think you needa little more complexity and better concepts--wordplay was good--keep it up dunny----111111
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  11. October 8th, 2003, 11:11 AM #11
    C-TownsFinest5
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    it was aight. jus like erry one else i agree flow got worse but still i liked it but jus keep spittin C.holla


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