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  1. October 1st, 2003, 04:50 PM #1
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    textstyle check it....

    I'll overload ya pain 'threshold'..
    Lock u in a freezer just to keep ya 'flesh-cold'.../

    I'm cold but u'll be 'colder' afta i split ya skull wit diss 'boulder'..
    Leavin bits stuck to ya face like an explosion of 'solder'.../

    I overdosed on coke an it rushed straight to ma 'brain'..
    I went 'insaine' when shit slowed down like 'max payne'...
    Then i stuck my head out the window to feel the 'acid rain'....
    As this 'pain' shot down a 'main vain' i screamed 'i just dont give a fuck' as i crashed in the 'fast lane'...../

    Yo dawg ur not a 'hypercondriac' ur just 'accident prone'..
    Your dick rydas'll be like 'where ma dawg at' when i short circuit this 'microphone'...
    It'll seem like u've 'smoked too much crack' when i burn ya face wit my 'acid tone'.../

    My power of 'telekenisis' 'releases' clinical 'obeseness'..
    Sending emcees mind-states back to a 'foetus' if they 'beef-this'...
    Nigga you can't 'beat-this' or 'be-shit', 'bite-this' an u'll lose ya life without a 'fight-bitch'..../

    An the whole world will 'diss-you'..
    If ya turn ma 'facial-tissue' into a 'racial-issue'.../

    So wat im white, dawg ur a wack 'liar'..
    DAMN!!!, all your whitey jokes just 'backfired'.../

    I'll slit you in so many 'places'..
    You'll be too embarassed to look at others 'faces'.../

    Man your not a 'casanova', your an 'overdoser'..
    Your days just loop 'over-an-over' like a 'rollercoaster'.../

    My skills of 'naration' are elevating beyond 'examination'..
    So hit the 'snare-an-bass-an' pass me the mic so i can brainwash this 'racist-nation'...//

    yo uppin fo comments.....
    go easy i've only been rapping for about a month or so.....
    WORD UP...
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    <center>So hit the 'snare-an-bass-an' pass me the mic to brainwash this 'racist nation'.../<--me</center>
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    yo give a fair vote......

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  2. October 1st, 2003, 05:11 PM #2
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    yo com on some one plz comment..........

    peace........
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    yo give a fair vote......

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  3. October 2nd, 2003, 03:05 AM #3
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    not too bad of a drop, pretty good read i thought, your multies were pretty good, it flowed pretty well i thought, your content was good too, overall a pretty good piece.

    and if you could return some feedback...
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=83050
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  4. October 2nd, 2003, 12:15 PM #4
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    yo thanx dawg....
    i aven't been rappin too long...a month or so.....


    yo uppin fo comments
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    yo give a fair vote......

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  5. October 2nd, 2003, 01:18 PM #5
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    what the hell was the point of this?
    gay . gay. gay.


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  6. October 2nd, 2003, 01:36 PM #6
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    ha ha wat u chatin bout dawg....look at urs....
    only 4 lines that weren't even that tight for someone wit3224 post an 20-10 battle record...
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  7. October 2nd, 2003, 01:37 PM #7
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    hey yo im uppin fo comments an critique... dont just freepost sumin wit no reasons for it or just a diss...
    peace...
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    yo give a fair vote......

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  8. October 2nd, 2003, 01:37 PM #8
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    werd that
    it was ok but i mean there was no actual point in u writing this.....had no meaning in it
    which doesnt interest me
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    it's a bold statement - the new youtube
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  9. October 2nd, 2003, 01:42 PM #9
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    yo it was just a keystyle.....i just wrote what came to my head while i was typin man....
    peace...
    uppin fo more comments....
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  10. October 2nd, 2003, 01:57 PM #10
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    ok to be honest i think others are right about the title etc not reallt suming up tha topic,but i do feel u had some good use of vocab and afew nice punches here,flow was also alright so jus keep droppin.

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  11. October 2nd, 2003, 03:11 PM #11
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    Koo for sumone das only been spitten for a matter of months!
    goood lookin out on cratique'n my shyt too dawg.
    its wun!!!!!!!!!
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  12. October 2nd, 2003, 05:31 PM #12
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    thought ya had some good vocab, but wot was the topic, it was un-original and lacked feeling, although you had the flow gion in places.............................Holla
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  13. October 5th, 2003, 12:31 PM #13
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    tnx fo the feed bk.. n.d.eva the topic was.....eh.....umm....dunno....wat ever was goin on in my hed at the time....really just dissin wat ever however....
    peace....
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