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Thread: Disastrous Crush - The Realist, Masta C

  1. September 27th, 2003, 01:58 AM #1
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    Disastrous Crush - The Realist, Masta C

    Be careful who you love... this can happen

    The Realist
    She always has my undivided attention I love her complexion
    At home I get ‘in the zone’ then grasp the situation what a pun
    She got years on me about 8 of them, I'm lucky I don’t get suspend
    Every 8 am I'm put a bag over my append to cover my ascend
    These filthy dreams are seen in taboo magazines that I recommend
    I gained a bigger capacity to work, yet I was drastically a flirt
    Cause in all my fantasy she had to be in one of those skirts
    I once said to her, this class actioned law ‘suit’ doesn’t do you justice
    The reminisce of my mental abyss she replied I know you want this
    The last day of 12th grade she asked me to stay late and I took the bait
    Her topics to dictate were my great change from deadweight to straight A’s
    In her class I make her always feel at ease, shes please to see me get a degree
    Its my sense of humor she adores yet all I see her striptease me like Demi Moore
    Spending days in contemplation of my situation wondering about my occupation
    This time seemed best than any to tell her of my infatuation this is all or none
    I spoke untill I ran out my lungs, she just looked like she swallowed her tongue
    The silence was to deep, I left saying something sweet, yet when I left the suite

    Was that mascara on her cheek?

    Masta C

    In the end, I know some things just weren't meant to be like they happened
    I guess I was just confused, and didn't know how to react, to everyones actions
    Everyone said "no don't do it" but I did it,..cause I felt it was right
    Something I shouldn't have did, but I was just a kid, I remember those nights
    They were great, I thought it was fate, but I guess it wasn't meant-to-be
    I sent you my love, but in return,…nothing from you was sent-to-me
    A crush that shouldn't have happened.., now you got my feeling snapping
    Like a twig you easily broke me in two,… I was down all you did was start laughing
    Everythings crashing, to much action, no time to react cause I have hate with a passion
    My feelings took a bashen, while hate and love went clashen, and my heart took all the slashen
    So I gotta face-facts, and I wish I could take-back, everything I did wrong and said
    It hurt so much, that my hands were in a clutch, over my chest cause my heart bled red
    Now im packing my stuff, and leaving this love, and im making sure it wont happen again
    Cause in the end, I learned it was just pretend, and it was something that shouldnt have been
    Don't act like I didn't know, cause I do I saw his clothes on the floor, one of my close friends
    All this time you was with my boy, you just played me as toy, I guess this is how it ends

    We just pick the wrong ones
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  2. September 27th, 2003, 02:02 AM #2
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    hey, if you check this out leave us some feedback, its much appreciated, thanks.
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  3. September 27th, 2003, 02:07 AM #3
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    This was a decent drop.....stayed on topic.Try some multis/vocab and wordplay....
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  4. September 27th, 2003, 02:08 AM #4
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    That was deep fellas. I liked it. You two are good at telling a story. The shit just clicked. It had a nice flow to it. You guys should collaborate again.
    we are what we are, what we never think we are.
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  5. September 27th, 2003, 02:13 AM #5
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    "These filthy dreams are seen in taboo magazines that I recommend" haha dope
    "I once said to her, this class actioned law ‘suit’ doesn’t do you justice" doin "this" is not necesary
    "Its my sense of humor she adores yet all I see her striptease me like Demi Moore" dope/clever

    nice verse, flow was on point, ur lines
    were a bit too long, but hey u had an
    orginal style/approach to this, liked the
    content, nice, and orignal, like most cats
    usually go for the same bullshit, but u
    kept it nice and orignal, nice flow with the
    multies, really liked that.............................


    "In the end, I know some things just weren't meant to be like they happened
    I guess I was just confused, and didn't know how to react, to everyones actions" dope opner, gripping
    "I sent you my love, but in return,…nothing from you was sent-to-me" bah would sound better if u re worded it, and this-isnt-necesary
    "Everythings crashing, to much action, no time to react cause I have hate with a passion
    My feelings took a bashen, while hate and love went clashen, and my heart took all the slashen" liked the multies
    "All this time you was with my boy, you just played me as toy, I guess this is how it ends" nice ender


    u 2 complimented each other's styles,
    umm Masta C ur flow was dope in some
    points, just keep coming with more multies
    wordplay to make this intersting, liked your
    style, but it woudl be better if u 2 tried to
    match ur styles for this,...........................

    over all

    nice content, nice flow, good concept
    good approach with a lot of originality
    .................................................. ..............

    return the favor pl...
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=81857
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  6. September 27th, 2003, 02:20 AM #6
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    POETIC CONCEPT
    THE WORDPLAY WAS THERE AS THE MEANING AND PROPER DELIVERY.....
    BOTH CAM IN ALOT LIKE DEAD PREZS' MIND SEX UTILIZING SMOOTH WORDS AND DESCRIPTIVE YET TASTEFUL LINES....I WAS IMPRESSED BY THAT A GREAT DEAL!!!!!!!!!!
    YOU GUY CAME REAL GOOD HERE AND UPPIN THIS DONT GET SLEPT ON
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..
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  7. September 27th, 2003, 02:29 AM #7
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    NICE.............................................. ......No Doubt

    I was feelin the concept


    peep mine

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  8. September 27th, 2003, 01:45 PM #8
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    Hey thanks for the feedback, keep it coming, its much appreciated, thanks.
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  9. September 27th, 2003, 11:03 PM #9
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    Good collab here...

    You both complimented each other...

    Imagery was nice...
    Vocab-decent...

    Pretty good flow as well...

    Good drop guys...

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  10. September 27th, 2003, 11:05 PM #10
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    good piece
    pulled it off pretty good
    both worked well together on the topic
    vocab etc was good from both
    flow was choppy in places....about the only complaint
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    it's a bold statement - the new youtube
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  11. September 28th, 2003, 01:13 AM #11
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    the flow by Masta was excellent...some stuff seemed like it didnt need to be in there though..

    They were great, I thought it was fate, but I guess it wasn't meant-to-be
    I sent you my love, but in return,…nothing from you was sent-to-me


    ^a simple yet meaningful line...very nice.


    Realist you came good as well...flow wasnt quite as good but your content exceded his...overall i think that you two make a good team...


    good job.
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  12. September 28th, 2003, 04:18 AM #12
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    Good Stuff, You Both Complimented Eachothers Style Very Well, The Flow Was There Overall A Dope Drop From Both Of You..
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  13. September 28th, 2003, 11:09 AM #13
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    yo thansk for the feed on my thing...an on to yours...you 2 both came with heat..both verses were well writtin and explained i thought..good wordplay an imaginary..i'd give this 8.5/10
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  14. September 28th, 2003, 06:51 PM #14
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    Hey guys thanks for the feedback, keep it coming, much appreciated, thanks.
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  15. September 28th, 2003, 07:08 PM #15
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    I was feelin it.holla


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