Redragon vs **~SynText~**

[redragon]

Rules:
1.No crew votes
2.No hate votes
3.No d/r votes
4.5-7 bars
5.dont matter who goes first
6.1 round
7.Explain votes
8.No fresh newbie votes
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[redragon]

Don't feed.......
Picks up mic
Your gonna get shot;kid your gonna get tossed//
I'll put your eyes in the back of ur head so you can't look FORWARD to this loss/~1~(oh)
You must be a geoligist cos you touching me like feeling da equator//
He's a chronic masterbater...but the only one you make 'breath hard' is Darth Vador/~2~(oh)
Like Hookers not getting paid kid i don't give a fuck//
You winning??But you addmitted you sucked!!!/~3~
Any style like bruce lee;face it b;i'll str8 rip ne mc//
Battling me is like 'not shaving' you won't bare face me/~4~
crack-and-speak get ready for-this-defeet(defeat)//
Kid you must be Sun sensitive cos you cant handel this heat!!/~5~
I “Spit Flames” at “High Temps” Scorch da Brow's and Bars off ya Man,
Cremate u with Hot Line's then take ya Ashes and "Charge ya Fam"/~6~(God)
"Clinical" the way i "Operate" on "Open Hearts" and such,
when ma Biblical Scripture leave ya’ll playin "[b]Harps" at Dusk![b]..../~7~(damn)
Drops mic
Uppin for you
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[-SIN-]

its over this kid salivates more wackness then porno girls after a hot date....
Final play like shakespear seeing his last theater when Playing Russian Ruollete~/~
Syn gotta be sickness cause this kids lamer then yahoo kids trying to BEAT the Net.....
Desease ya PET syn intellect is spitting on statues like Steven Kawkins Vet~/~
You gotta be kidden to spit writtens its ok cause after the first line they oppose you....
Your scripts ROTTEN on desktop and after 2 months you spit
DEcOMPOSING shIT FOOL~/~
your a true sick kid with sickly split skin from trying to battle syllables with SYN....
hahahahahah you wacker then frate party with no girl with you like (time for masterbation~/~
i leave a battle i get ooohhhhhhh and awwwwwwww crowd in a aAPPLAUSE.....
you leave this batlle real equiped pussy strapped up with TAPE and GAWWWWWSSS


theres ya ten with no fancy shit to try to sway votes hahahahahahahahahahaha
uppin

[-SIN-]

1-0 me uppin............................................. .................................................. .................................................

[redragon]

Alright 0-2 text votes 0-1 poll votes....plz look at the punches i had more and i thought punches won battles.Whatever uppin
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[Aisle Phive]

"I'll put your eyes in the back of ur head so you can't look FORWARD to this loss/~1~(oh)"

that was bitten.. not exactly the same line but the same exact concept.

[Judge Judy]

aight this is how i see it...................i see a lot of peeps working on thier verses making sure its good to tha eye(dragon)...........theres no need jus gotta have the hardest punches.....(syntex).....also a flow......(both)

so ma vote goes to=syntex.......punches always gets it for me

hit this up..............cheers its a shit battle tho

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=81869

[MyNd. FuLL]

good battle heres my breakdown

wordplay=tie,both had good wordplay, keep it up
vocab=syn, win this one, but both had good vocab, syn just had better usage
creativity=syn,he didn't use played lines, red your shit was tight but some of your lines i have seen before, you flipped'em nice but lost points for not being creative enuff, my opinion
punches=syn=agree with lyrical on this one punches win battles, no need to do anything fancy, that is for newbs, both had nice punches but i think syntex edged you out n punches in this one
flow=syn,again cuz red your lines weren't even and kinda choppy ya know, syn had a basic flow and a good ryhme scheme throughout his entire verse
multis=neither, had multi's its cool though, both kept a safe flow and focused more on punches

favorite line=syn
your a true sick kid with sickly split skin from trying to battle syllables with SYN....
hahahahahah you wacker then frate party with no girl with you like (time for masterbation~/

was really feelin his line, nice punch,not too fancy but got the job done
personals=neither, no personals in this one, both needs to work on personals, they win battles and shows its not prewritten

vote=[b]syntex[b/], nice battle but syn gets my vote, red got skillz just needs to fix a couple of little things to get better
honest vote guys please respect it and dont bitch about it
good luck to both
holla

[BROOKLYN]

redragon wrote on 09-26-03 08:32 PM:
Can you vote on my battle?I'm getting herb votes against me,and i only need one more vote to win.Thanks for your time
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=81757
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SINCE YOU PM'D THIS NO ONE IS ALLOWED TO VOTE FOR REDRAGON WHO ALREADY VOTED WHO INCLUDES:
Tonya~Montana
Auspicious
C_Drama

ALSO MASTA C & AB0MINATION GAVE VERY CRAPPY VOTES SO POLL WILL BE 2-0 IN SYNTEXT'S FAVOR

IM RESETTING REDRAGON'S POLL VOTES & CLEARING ALL FREEPOST

-BROOKLYN

[redragon]

uppin............................................. ................................................

[BROOKLYN]

New Important Rule. .Everyone READ!

[Auspicious]

Brooklyn.. Calm Your Shit Down.. Have Sumone
Check My God Damn Pms... Dragon Never Pmed Me..
I've Been Peeping This Kids Shit Since He Started..
Hes Just Underatted And I Haven't Seen Him Battle
In A Long WHile.. So Put My Vote Back In There Damnit

[redragon]

^^^Word...he's just getting votes cause he's mod...and thugwhyte speaks the truth...let the poll back to what it was,i dident know any of those guys that voted for me accept him^^and i diden't Pm him or anything..If you want to leave it that way then do it.If he gets the win outta this,kid you diden't really beat me,cos you got newbie votes

[Thrust]

this is how i see it...styles were kinda whack
i don't like the quotes dragon
n i don't like the stretched lines either

dragon's verse tho was ight... kinda personal n hit well
syn here... started off really strong... hittin hard like whoa...kinda
then like afta line 5 or so... it became really whack... like whoa
that aaaaaaawwwwww shit n so on didn't float...
well it was close... but ya i think dragon has got it...
both could improve some n all.

[redragon]

^^Thanks kid,i wasen't trying he isn't on my level....But anyway upping the hell out of this shit 3-2 him.....
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