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Thread: realest word p collab

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    NONCENTZ AKA WORD~PERFECT noncentz's Avatar
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    realest word p collab

    *Hook*
    If this song had a mulit view, with 2 odd crews
    Were not shrewd just honest, this is all about you
    Lyrical promise laced with plenty of satirical prowess
    RB sacred ground so walk away, don’t stay around this

    The Realists wordplay fast and to the point
    Fast like past Detroit not fat like Pastor Troy
    Was the play on words too advanced for boys
    Even if we are jokers you aren’t playing with us
    Even when you rap mad what you say aint serious
    You got ripped and died and just kept on braggin
    No wonder I see you dick riding on the banned wagon
    Pants sagging, you spit freestyles after days of planning
    If your so fire why am I frost bit, is my watch that frosted
    Call me a liar but I gave you a bass line, you crossed it
    Is this collab an Omen or some kind of Insane Joke
    I heard you words choke when I broke the first note
    I don’t spend yet I'm broke, hell even if I don’t get paid g’s
    In the end I intend to drop more collabs than JD
    Messages conveyed: deep, positions played: steep
    I dream of you in audio, no wait I fell asleep

    *Hook*
    If this song had a mulit view, with 2 odd crews
    Were not shrewd just honest, this is all about you
    Lyrical promise laced with plenty of satirical prowess
    RB sacred ground so walk away, don’t stay around this

    *NONCENTZ#
    A lot of you have no idea how easy it is to looks stupid so I guess im a have to help you out.

    As far as bars….you w~rap as much as open packages-
    I manage with my lyrical advantages-
    To Define verbs to names actions…then combine
    them with a punchline to cause physical damages.
    You cant spit 3 lines,fuck it you cant spit 2-
    TOO SHORT would son you.
    so how you think you can beat one of my hiku’s-
    With your lack ofmaterial sub~stince.
    Murder you with a stanza and call that poetic justice.
    your shit is just hints- of project ignorance-
    plus you couldn’t migrate to the ghetto as imagrints.
    A lot of you think rap is aboute GANG BANGS-
    CLOTHES, CURSING, where you HANG, SLANG-and weak freestyles
    If it is….. your out~ fashioned, lynched,fucked, with no style.
    It MAKES KNOW CENTZ and who?-
    We 2 of the REALIST you fools have no clues.
    How we misuse verbal format for combat.
    GLUE your brain to a PUNCHLINES with tacks-
    then leave you STUCK-After the HOOK ~STRUCK.
    You couldn’t spit or bust hot if you suck the devils nut-and choked up.
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    upping this collab
    p.s. my names spelled wrong

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    MY BUST TWIN
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    This was a pretty good peice i thought, good read also, The wordplay was good, the wording i thought was god too, you both had good flow, and there was good multies, Overall this was a good peice to read i thought.

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    Returning the favour.

    aight,
    The Realest, you verse was dopeness defined, you had mad vocab and flow. Especially your flow was dope, you made good use of your knowledge of internals, and multi's which spiced it up.

    Is this collab an Omen or some kind of Insane Joke
    I heard you words choke when I broke the first note


    wow. that shit especially the 2nd line was tight...whoa!!

    Overall, a very round verse, flowed nicely and your wordplay and vocab were dope.

    Word~Perfect: you spit fire as usual, i think one of the best abilities you have is your flow, which here was immense. You played words nicely, resulting in overall a dope use of wordplay:

    You cant spit 3 lines,fuck it you cant spit 2-
    TOO SHORT would son you.


    Very well played out,...

    Overall: it was a mos def 4/5 collab, the hook was a nice addition and relationally it was good...mos def a dope partnership!
    Open Mic's


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    this piece was ill, good vocab, good wordplay, good structure, good imagery,all in all good drop from both of you.~!~

    keep droppin tha hotness.

    my fav line---
    your shit is just hints- of project ignorance-
    plus you couldn’t migrate to the ghetto as imagrints.
    A lot of you think rap is aboute GANG BANGS-
    CLOTHES, CURSING, where you HANG, SLANG-and weak freestyles


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    THNKS RHYTHMIC AND EVERYONE ESPECIELLY REAL FOR BEING PATIENT WITH ME ON THIS COLLAB
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    damn...this collab was on point...both of y'all spit that crack...fo' real...nahmean...I think the only thing this piece was missing was...me

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    YO CLEAN YOUR MAIL BOX I GOT A COLLAB FOR YOU
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    I only got like 5 messagez in my mailbox now...

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    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    The structure is solid. From beginning to end it was solid. Good punches, good wordplay, metis and multies. All in all it was a good drop.

    "No wonder I see you dick riding on the banned wagon" lol I liked that line the best.
    we are what we are, what we never think we are.

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    This was str8 F I R E

    from bothsides No doubt Homeys

    Ya'll did the damn thang......................ILL piece

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    THNKS
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    Tight shit here, short and sweet, everything flowed really well, both ya'll keep this shit up, i enjoy reading both of your stuff.

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