10 lines
ya spit first
usual vote rules... NO DICKRIDE!
dont take forever... i want a quick win Ferro...
aight... holla...
InsaneWhiteBoy
~Young P~
10 lines
ya spit first
usual vote rules... NO DICKRIDE!
dont take forever... i want a quick win Ferro...
aight... holla...
checkin in white boi...
ya betta be ready homie...
u bout ta get merked...
What?
(yea i used chrits steze too...)
uppin for dis whitey ta spit...
holla soon homie....
waitin....
100 characters....
wack rule^^......
ima merk dis boul if he eva spit...
he lieks da prewritttin though....
i'll wait.....
waiting..........
still waiting....
hahaha my bad p hey u kno i dun prewrite but ima drop now sry for makin ya wait.............................................. ........................................
~young p only like 12 years old//
~im only done 2 lines and u already knocked out cold//
~after u hear dis u can say u heard the word of the old//
~im a battlin mastermind, and im the lastg of my kind//
~this is like a race but u to slow being left behind//
~my flo so insane tear up ya brain leave ya demented u stuk in my grasp like ya legs been cemented//
~u as real as silicone when u hittin the microphone//
~my lyrics got ya in da zone, u shoulda listened when i said back off and leave me alone//
~u cant even be my boy, cuz little boyz, ru pussy wipped toyz//
uppin for da spit.............................................. ..........................................
Dawg, i aint an emcee, more like a lyrical mind demon//
Battle me? Ya fucked yaself and I leave ya lyin in ya own pile of seimen//
I'm like Hannibal Lector cuz i eat apart ya brains and face//
But i spit ya out cuz ya aint got no style or taste//
It's like a race da way I even got dis white boys sentences runnin//
Copy and Paste his lines but dey got no effect like a dumb blonde usin sun in//
Middle Weight's gettin drained of all pounds when u around//
Are ya gonna suck dis gangsta's penis? or just re-route to a new-town//
easy merk
this batle was too newbish
check it...
insane white boy - you dind't have any multis, metas, punches, but you did have a similie or two, your flow was herbish, but your rhymescheme bounced, creativity lacked, but you came all together staying on point...
young p - your spit was lacking everything man... your punches, metas, multis, similies, creativity and your topic bounced man... you didn't have anything to point out man, you really need to work on this...
both of you need to elevate alot, there wasn't even vocab usage here... coulda used alot of work ya'll... work on this... but if i had to give it to someone, it would be insanewhiteboy
vote - insane
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Punches: Young
Flow: Young
Multi: Young
Vocab: Young
Structure: Young
Overal: Young
Man insane I got no idea how you got those wins. You must have a bigger d/r rind then X-Ecution, which is pretty hard. Anyway this was a strait up merk man.
Hit this up Young:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=80975
i have to give this to P
insane verse came out soft, alot
P hit harder (not the illest verse) but it was better than insane's
Vote = Young P
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=81251
lol.... first of all i liked da first voter... he wuz a funny one...
2nd voter... lol at him too... DAT WUZ A minute keystyle... LOL!!!
u really dont think i battle every kid liek dat do u??
y waste lines on a scrub like dat....
3rd kid... liked him a lil bit betta ... lol dis is so funny
herbish newbish battle...................HAHAHAHAH!!!!!!!!
Man, what the hell you talking about, you got my thoughts all mixed up and shit, damn man, Recognize my battle though dude.
Young p got it wit wordplay and punches
Insane came out too basic work on elevatin and usin more metas and multis
Newbie battle though
vote-Young P
INSANEWHITEBOY-Your shit wasnt creative and it didnt flow much...you need ta elavate before battlein someone whos ridin chrits steze like a donkey...cuz when somebody is ridin chrits steze like a donkey...that usually means the're good.
~Young P~-Your shit flowed more and your lines made me laugh. I've seen better from you...but you obviously didnt try against this herb...you got my vote...
my vote- ~Young P~
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