Goosen vs youngblood

[Goosen]

ight
10-15 lines
i spit first
no feeding
no crew
no dr
good luck

[youngblood]

checkin in dog.......................good luck back!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

[Auspicious]

yo hit up my battle wit Born to Kill and i'll return tha favor when
this gets done.. normally i dont freepost but its gettin slept on
thanks.... - O n e

[XL4REAL]

youngblood im down for a battle man!!!!just set it up, check the call out first though ok dawg!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!peace!!

[Goosen]

aight here we go

Your 'elevation', is so slow that your running out of hairs//
I take the escalator, while your taking the stairs//
I could beat you in this battle, with only 'one hand'on the keys//
The only time your 'spitting hard', is when your on your knees//
You say your not looking for a crew, but thats not really true//
You've looked at all the possibles, not even BRE want you//
I've got more 'covers', than the F.H.M magazine//
But your more like Haileys Comet, your hardly ever seen//
Your looking for an 'oasis', but your heading for a fall//
You've been at this for a while, but now you've hit the 'wonder wall'//
All career you've beaten newbies, now your paying for your crimes//
your style is so crooked, you need braces-on-your-rhymes//
Your getting so bad at this, that all you spit is foam//
Hopefully they will have rb on a computer, when you get to the retirement home//

aight your turn, good luck

[youngblood]

Aight...
enough wit tha talkin...

aight look...
this guy's fake-as-fuck, only takes wins by give ups! or faith-and-luck//Keeps
talkin until he gets socked with upper-kuts, makin his face-bend-up//DISCRASED!...get scraped wit words which hurt worse then aches-and-cuts//Yo
you need to wake-on-up...and smelltha rhythm which i let-loose//leaven your
neck-loose, hangin from your shoulders like sex-juice//check-two...
these dope-rhymes, your whole crew wit broke-spines//damaging more
MINDS, then kids who smoke-dimes and snort coke-lines//I provoke-crimes...
with prolific-spit, which quickly-RIP your rhyme-flow//BLAST! lead
through your head, makin your outer mind-show//then kick the center of your
back with force, to make your spine-fold//yo, i block fissions like blind-
folds...and bright-flashes//leaven your back scratch-wit, six hundred and sixty
six mic-slashes//sit back and watch this hype-smash-his...cranium wit sick-tac-
tics//so QUICK!, i'll catch tha cap before tha mothafuckin gat-ticks//smash-his
ribs wit 6 bat-hits, leavin him wit fat-lips//BLACK-hips!, ~and smashed nose, like
his face was a FLAT-TIT!!!!

[Lyricallyinsane]

yo this was a tight battle but goosen edged ya just a little wit punches. i'll poll soon make sure when im in a battle y'all hit my shit up too

[youngblood]

yo see i know that's bullshit, man i just posted my shit and 2 minutes later this fuckin newb gon say goosen edged this shit out, man how the fuck you gon read 2 verses within 2 min homie damn????

[Edicius]

Goosen:

Your 'elevation', is so slow that your running out of hairs//
I take the escalator, while your taking the stairs//

Like this one

Young:

you need to wake-on-up...and smelltha rhythm which i let-loose//l
eaven your
neck-loose, hangin from your shoulders like sex-juice//

This one i liked from your verse

fo real tight battle but youngblood took this on punches, they were some harder than goosen's........liked both verse nice flow but youngblood's punches were harder so he get's my vote

[dean]

don't like da execs but goosen took it wid his punches n flow.....dint respect him at first but his lookin pretty dope,,good job

vote=goosen
flow=goosen
punches=goosen

[Lyricallyinsane]

im a quick reader i aint no dumshit. i scanned and read every line so dont come bullshittin to me. u need ta raise that chin up and take it like a man

[BLuNT]

youngblood gets my vote.... way better multies an' shit.. no real personals, but the flow and imagery was key here... goosen, maybe if you chaned your name you'd be a better rapper... lol, nah, j/p,, but seriously you had an' a'ight verse.. just wasn't feelin' the flow.. you got a simple AB AB rythm, try mixin' it up a bit more... 1

VOTE= youngblood

[dw.]

gud battle but i think young ad beta punches, both ad gud flow but this is a battle n i thought his punches were harder!!!!
vote=young

[Goosen]

but where were youngs personals?
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[Edicius]

Originally posted by Goosen
but where were youngs personals?
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you had a nice verse with nice personals but his verse was in my opinion harder with punches and he had a nice flow to so thats why he got's my vote........but your verse was aight tho only his one hits harder in my opinion