10 lines
no hater/dr votes
5 votes all that shit
lets start spittin NOW!
Confusion
ScottyC
10 lines
no hater/dr votes
5 votes all that shit
lets start spittin NOW!
no no no no nono no u see ........................no pussy shit
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"Gin n' Juice"
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I juss take my own mind punches and stick em' to you
your naggin braggin and swingin at da wrong cat
while i'll come out swingin wit tha heaviest bat!
to leave you on the ground traced out with chalk
Anotha dead victim who didnt think before he talks
I leave u in the heep like spider webs trappin
leavin u wit a rhyme to fill my satisfaction
bette invest in a bullet proof vest
u got no respect in da hood nuthin but disrespect
straight from the west i'll pop u Narrow Spaces into the chest!
pains inside crack 6 ribs and give u bone marrow
i knoe I aint cupid but ill still shoot yo ass wit my bow n arrow
smoke you!! till im high enough to spit cyphers at twenty
this joker, wuz spittin rhymes so he can earn himself a fukkin penny...............
comeo n step of to the fuckin plate
ur guna wish u neva met me, this is an unfortunate blind date
I aint gota be thug, I dont need a gun
My words are enough
they the dirt and shovel dat burried Biggy Pac and Pun!
"Gin n' Juice"
Confusion? the only thing that confuses me is the effort of your work//
cryin about the line rule, i could drop seven lines and you would get merked//
you should think before you battle me, he's reppin detriot but not showin the D//
tell all your relatives to join RB, so that i can rip through you entire family tree//
and believe me G, this battle is not fun, tryna be a thug, and you do need a gun//
cuz when i come terrorising your block the only other option would be to run//
i'm packing you off to meet a nun, cuz you a virgin and youll fit right in there son//
its ok to cry, you should be affraid, you should be scared of my verbal renagade//
i'm hot so stand in the shade, theres enough heat cummin from me no more need to be made//
after this you go need a name change, cuz im rippin up your battle record//
heres an idea you can change it to the gordon, but for short we will call you gord//
my shot will confuse you, so you bow down to me thinking i'm yo lord//
i should end the battle here and use the rest of the space uppin for a vote//
but i wanna express how i can throw you of a fishing boat to see if you can float//
hey dawg im gonna say bad some thing you should make a note,//
i dont like new emcees so i'm gonna slice out a piece of your thoat//
and put on a rain coat, cuz the blood will be spilling every where//
this was just a warning battle so for next time !!!BEWARE!!!//
uppin............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ..
prety sikk considerin im a newbe
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"Gin n' Juice"
yo good battle tho rite? uppin votes .................................................. ........................................
Fuck this was an iite battle ................nice flow and punches to both of ya'll .........but i thought the pac/pun line at confusion's end was played and wack............thats used like a thousend times........very nice battle to both of you , but vote=Confusion no hate pr somthing just feld his a bit more.........
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- Artificial Intelligence
This was an OK battle both verses where pretty simple!
I thought confusions verse was kinda played a little with the Cat & Bat rhymes, they are just to easy to do, you should try to rhyme longer and harder words, try doin words that you cant spell, and you'll start pickin up speed pretty fast!!!
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Scotty's verse was again simple with one syllable rhyming words ..
There is ALOT more room for multis in your verse, you could have dropped the same verse but with more attitude and alot more multis, but overall you came harder, and your flow was more on point than confusions!!!
POLL VOTE = ScottyC
thanx mann uppin on the poll votes dont slep on this jus vote plz, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...917#post600917
Give an honest vote there and I'll return the favor.
aight dog
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"Gin n' Juice"
if i could vote id give a vote to scotty but confusion u did good
ay can both yall peep dis tho
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