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  1. June 29th, 2003, 09:05 PM #1
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    B.R.E. Presents: "100 Proof"

    [Sight]

    Not a bottle, a devil spawn, that is what i see//
    I see not daring to disagree for the fear of being beat//
    I see him not listening to the pleas and crippling with his knee//
    And taking a stick to my face until my nose would bleed//
    Laughing as I would cry and beg for mercy at his feet//
    I see the after affects of liquor, my living room in debris//

    [Sound]
    I lay in bed at night and listen to my mother beg//
    For him not to be mad that she had forgo to buy bread//
    He would not let it go, she should have thought ahead//
    "I make the money, you should do you part" he said//
    I Hear my mothers screams as he raised to bat above his head//
    And brought it down on her skull, my mom falling to the ground dead//

    [Taste]
    I taste the blood from the blows landed by my dad//
    Taking out his anger on me for the things he never had//
    Finding his happiness in liquor, always drinking to be glad//
    But it always went to other way and went to bed mad//
    The constant beating for reasons untold besides "being bad"//
    I taste the anger at seeing my father coming in flanel clad//

    [Touch]
    I feel the belt hit me with a crack and it bite into my skin//
    I feel the feel on my naked back of his flanel soaked in gin//
    I feel the anger of my adulterous father but accusing me of the sin//
    I feel the anger deep inside me start to brew within//
    I feel the fire he held me over scald my flesh like Satan's Twin//
    I feel the anger, rage and hate start to deep inside begin//

    Smell
    I smell the booze of the nights drinking wafting from his clothes//
    The smell of blood from the table and the belt as he reaches new lows//
    I smell the peroxide from my mother so the markings will never show//
    The cheap perfume of my mother turning tricks, living a life she never chose//
    The fresh cast of the doctor and he sets the new cast upon her swollen nose//
    I smell the blood of my father on my hands, now underground, never to be exposed//





    input would be nice....thanks a lot
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  2. June 29th, 2003, 09:19 PM #2
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    nice song but it sounded alot like what emimen life expriences

    it was good it had a kick ass flow

    keep up the killa song and battles
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  3. June 29th, 2003, 10:55 PM #3
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    this was amazing A2Z
    the topic is a little played out, but for all I know it was a true story.
    The sensory perception, which was the structure of the whole piece added a great seperation, still showing the emotions through the sub titles.
    My favourite one was the "I feel" section, because th consistancy made it stand out.
    This was a really dope, and deep piece. I'm feelin you on this one dude.
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  4. June 30th, 2003, 12:30 AM #4
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    ^^thanx a lot playa uppin
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  5. June 30th, 2003, 07:41 AM #5
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    Capital Shit Dawg, The Topic Was Dope! I Did Sorta Get The Impression Of Em, BUt That Went As Quickly As It Came After I REad The 'Taste' verse...

    You Had Smooth Flow, Good Wordplay...Overall: A Tight Verse, 8/10!
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  6. July 1st, 2003, 11:03 AM #6
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  7. July 1st, 2003, 11:56 AM #7
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    a2z ima have to say this is one of the best peices i have seen so far today. I really really REALLY enjoyed reading this. Everything was GREAT on it. 10/10.......Nice shit man



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  8. July 1st, 2003, 04:01 PM #8
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    the concept was original, the wordplay was threadbare, the vocab was a little basic in places but the structive and style switching of the piece gave it a standout appeal. worth the read.

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  9. July 2nd, 2003, 12:49 AM #9
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    DAMN! Good shi'! I agree that it does sound soemthin' like Eminem's life, but wow! Could ya'll check out my song plz?

    It's called: "Real Life"

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  10. July 3rd, 2003, 05:43 PM #10
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  12. July 6th, 2003, 07:50 PM #12
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    I would have to disagree with everyone,saying this sounds like Eminem. Eminem would have himself beating his own mother.Eminem dont put shit out like this...this was a good drop...one of the best I heard from B.R.E.I like the way you described it,but I would have put more detail in though,since I had a cousin who father beat his mother.You should have named it something different like the Senses of Anger,or Senses of Ligour,or something like that....Real emotional,this was truly a B.R.E. classic....



    this doesn't compare to PT Got though.The cow go moo.lol
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  13. July 7th, 2003, 12:58 AM #13
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    HOTTTT SHITTTT!!!!!!! Yo man i was really feelin this piece right here. Gotta give nuff respect for writtin somethin like this very deep and emotional. Despite that the wordpplay and vocab were a bit basic i think it added that extra bit a realty to the piece.(or it could just be me) BUt all in all man that was some dope shit. PEACE

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