dw vs j-one-twenty

[dw.]

10-15 lines
no crew/hater/d ridin votes

i'll spit first!

[j-one-twenty]

aight just checkin in. spit when u ready.............................
j-one-twenty......................

[dw.]

alrite listen,

Ima pick u up n move u from the present 2 the past,”last” the position u comin dawg, this a play n u didn’t even make the cast/
Ima infest your ears n make a nest, so wen ya rest my style can make ya heart pump through ya vest/
This dajarvu cos this a test u can’t pass like u back at school, but 4 me its like working on a building site n the mics my tool--/
--I rule on the mic, beat it like I’ll beat ya face, so u can av a taste of justice 2 put ya in ya place/
-- i'll erase the memory of this bitch j-one-twenty, in the future nightmares won't be scarce 4 u you'll av plenty/
“mo money mo problems” as biggie sed, well this bitch constantly broke n he spends his time lukin 4 a “bloke who’ll poke”--/
--your GAY n that’s a problem right there, wen gangstas walk past u, u stop n stare, well wen I walk past u bitch don’t even dare/
your rhymes like a heart rate through exercise, way out of control n about 2 die then they’ll need an “exercise”/ (exercist)
nigga wen I see an occasion I rise, whereas u an ya record r lies, ya victim was a pussy nigga “pick on someone ya own size”/
dawg They shud call u canvus mc, cos u always end up on it wen u punch against me/
wen i meet u in a thread i "clean out the closet", av u got life insurance cos i think u beta make a deposit/
cos my rhymes choppin up ya head like a razer--your rhymes more borin than a episode of frasier, dawg r u meant 2 be so high pitched cos i've seen more tone from anistasia/
i know u feelin my heat cos ya startin 2 burn, i'll put on a thermal jacket wen ya post ya return,
u cats shud need a license 2 be in ere, oh yeh n just 2 finish, no i don't know ya bitch hope u hearin me clear!---well not from the front only from the rear!

alrite hit bac n soon as pos dawg!

[j-one-twenty]

alright i been workin on this shit while u been goin too. nice spit dawg.

here it is.

This cat thinks he’s top shit, a ‘Gangster’ in ‘Paradise’/ (Gangster’s Paradise)
Turns out you’re a nothin’, an ‘obie’ without the ‘trice’/
Me on the other hand I’m a lyrical master/
Sculptin’ my rhymes like an artist with plaster//

You talk you’re shit up like you some kinda player/
This cat be ‘Biggie’ and I’m his slayer// (Biggie Smalls aka Notorious B.I.G)
And no, I don’t mean to be dissin the B-I-G/
It’s how I play this game – ‘Notoriously’//

If yall be thinkin’ you can win this game/
You like Cypress Hill - ‘Insane in that Brain’//
I throwin’ punches at you like Frazier to Ali/
The decision at the ‘Garden’ goes to j-twenny*//

Well game over dawg I’m done for a while/
So I hope yall had time to improve ya style//
R Kelly here never turned the ‘Ignition’/
He tried toppin’ this shit - the impossible ‘mission’// (Mission Impossible)

* March 8, 1971, at Madison Square Garden. Joe Frazier knocked Muhammad Ali down with a left hook in the 15th round and won a unanimous decision that made him undisputed champion.

lets get some votes in aight

[Ar][aN]

AIGHT YO RHYMES ARE TIGHT DAWG
WHEN YOU KILLED THIS GUY...
COME AND BATTLE ME...
AIGHT................................
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[dw.]

alrite nice battle! gud verse dawg!

can we get some votes ere
uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Ar][aN]

C'MON LETS BATTLE "DW"
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[dw.]

^^^^^^^who the hell is this cat talkin 2?^^^^^^^^^

-----------------------------uppin-----------------------------------

[dw.]

mah bad didnt c that dawg!^^^

yo battle sum newbs first dawg u can't just jump straight in wiv us! come bac wiv a little experience! STOP FREE-POSTIN!

[Goosen]

mmm this one was tight. im just gonna go with j twenty one. some of dw stuff wasnt original, it had been used before. the MC canvas line and the "didnt make the cast" line have been used by u before. other than that it was close becoz both had equal flow and wordplal.
vote- j twenty one

[dw.]

wtf!!!! luk goosen i haven't used any of that b4 bitch! don't listen 2 him y'all!

uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Goosen]

dawg dont make me go find the battles where u did use those lines. no hate dawg.
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[Frame]

I dont no this wuz a very close one... DW came real hard and so did J-0ne-20. Imma Give it to da vet Dw cuz i think he had a betta style. If ya could hit dis up wit an honest vote http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=59527

[dw.]

uppin this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[dam_fool]

i think j one twentys spit was some quality shit he would of cained dw verbally thats the real shit j one twenty looking forward to some more ryhmes keep it up