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    memory

    memory
    she's sheltered in my mind like a fetus in the womb,
    residing in my brain,but she will meet us in the tomb
    if she stays where she is, I won't remember her face,
    getting rid of biased opinions, so I bring no disgrace
    she is the reminder of that loveliness that can never be,
    putting on my running shoes so I can jog my memory
    weeping my energy away so that I cry in kilojoules,
    she sleeps in my mind no matter how I break the rules
    and I constantly write so that I may force her to leave,
    through the pen onto the page,transfusion of memory
    if she emerged from the perpetuality of my thoughts,
    perhaps the light would be too bright, metally she rots
    and uncontrollably she shivers and threatens to die,
    depiction of life itself when she lets loose, and I cry
    but the minute she lets me see a fraction of the past,
    I get bombarded by a headache like a nuclear blast,
    sometimes I think that I don't deserve to remeber her,
    she'll rest, as I stare blankly trying to dismember her.....

    whats present is past, and past eventually leads to future,
    can't remember what happened if you let yourself abuse her
    a vacant mind of occupation full of things you can't possess,
    a basketcase of unwanted feelings, your mind is on recess
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    I dunno...I just kinda wrote on this one because I've been trying to remember stuff and I can't. Now I don't even remember what it is I was trying to remember.
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    YO TWIN THATS WHAT'S UP I LOVED THIS DROP STARTED OFF CLIMATTIC AND NEVER DULLED P[EEP MINES OUT
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    thanks wp
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    deep .. deep.. but i was feelin it

    keep spittin

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    man dawg dis piece was dope i mean it,, it had somin of everthin na mean ill dawg

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    thanks for the replies. this was just a quick one.
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    SICKNESS Shown In here deffinitly Dawg Nice drop but i think i liked yo last open mic piece better na'mean but nice drop


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    up again
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    this was descent i liked it
    jus to much people rap and sing or write songs about girls for that matter

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    Horus Sky
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    nice...

    one of the more creative scripts I've read so far...nice imagery and word usage

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    Originally posted by GrYm StYlE
    this was descent i liked it
    jus to much people rap and sing or write songs about girls for that matter
    this was about memory, not a girl. I just used she to describe it.
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    props
    The greatest rap artist you will ever see

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    ^^^brutal reply
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