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    B.R.E presentz: I Swear

    Lookin at my shorty, and how we talkin dirty
    How she gettin more sexual, while more flirty
    I don't like an aura of violence,so i put away my heat
    and we was talkin so dirty,mud just formed on the sheets
    we was about to kiss when i heard a shot
    we ducked and still came more shots,and then heard the gun cock
    I was still huggin her but her body felt colder
    I was wonderin why,when i saw a hole in the shoulder
    i told her i'd call the ambulance so i put her on the bed
    but she made no sound,thats when i saw the hole in her head
    and then i still called 911 at that time
    got interrogated for hours,like I did the crime...


    Back on the streets,holdin to my heat
    I know the niggas who shot her,said they'd hunt me while i sleep
    they some backstabbin cowards,who i thought were my friends
    But two weeks ago,like a movie,i tied up all loose ends
    They tried to pull some snake shit,and shoot me in the back
    but i took out a knife and i saw red,comin out they black
    I ran away lookin for a place to hide and i found them losin all pride
    they ran by and i let go of my breath i walked home that day to see my shorty
    she said that she got kicked out her moms house,came here,so she won't be lonely
    And that was the last day i seem them fag cats until that one faithful day
    when they came back to shoot her so now im the streetsweeper,and its my time to slay



    I went huntin niggas after i left the precinct
    hit every spot i knew they would be,but they hid,like weak shit
    Revenge is sweet,but now i see who are the pussies
    they tried to shoot at point blank,and niggas missed me
    they hit the wrong target,right now i want to be dead
    because while livin,im still traumatized with my girl on my bed
    And I hate the cats with all the passion,makin the devil glare
    And when i find these cat I know what i will do I Swear:
    I will find these cats and i will fuck them up,like what they did to me
    They mad young so if they pull anything retarted, i'll call a perverted priest
    Hence Forward.. BURR!
    [YOUTUBE]seYxVBIsycE[/YOUTUBE]
    Just watch My Back, I got the front.

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    that was a reallt great drop.....a didnt likethe end line though.i think you could have done alot more with this piece.the end like was like eight mile the movie..didnt really have a satifactory endin........but it was dope anyways

    keep spittin

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    aight thanks yo, still uppin^^
    Hence Forward.. BURR!
    [YOUTUBE]seYxVBIsycE[/YOUTUBE]
    Just watch My Back, I got the front.

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    Hence Forward.. BURR!
    [YOUTUBE]seYxVBIsycE[/YOUTUBE]
    Just watch My Back, I got the front.

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    Ill piece man..........Keep spittin ur fire

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    Hence Forward.. BURR!
    [YOUTUBE]seYxVBIsycE[/YOUTUBE]
    Just watch My Back, I got the front.

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    stop sleepin man

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    was a real peice,i didn tmind it,even thoguh it had th egangsta side to it,i could tolerate it in this peice,flowed nicely,was simple,but to the point,a good combination,vocab tends to hide the point in some cases...this was a good drop,sad story...lmao t th eend like...th epreist part was ma dfunny...nic eending...good drop skiddlez...

    bismillah

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    aight thanks yo, still uppin
    Hence Forward.. BURR!
    [YOUTUBE]seYxVBIsycE[/YOUTUBE]
    Just watch My Back, I got the front.

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    im likin it, i like the storyline style, I need to work on that personally, i only really have experience in battle like rhyming, i love pieces like these keep bringin em!

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    this shit was tight to me it kept me in the story and you told the story well...this was a nice drop

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