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    Taking It To Heart...

    Many Things Can Be Taken To Heart,

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    ..::Love::..

    [color=light black]Love can Start Off Lonely and Deathly Afraid, But There Is Many Ways
    Under-privelleged and Over Played. All These Feelings To Evade
    The "First Time' he is excited , but she is scared and Shaded
    They Talk it Over her Thoughts Are Raided but after all she is Persuaded
    Three Weeks Later She Takes The Test Cuz Her Cycle Has Not Come
    She Watches The Dot Change Colours and Fear Begins to Make her Numb
    The Man and Father Had Bolted After that magical OnE Night Stand
    She Found him and He Said " The Condom Broke, This Was Not Planned"
    This Woman I Speak Of In This Rhyme Is Still Strong and Very Brave
    But The Man Who Got Her Pregnant Lie Very still in His Grave
    So Next Time If Give Your Girl A Rose, Make Sure Theres No Thorn
    Cuz If You Cross Her, You'll Feel Her Wrath and Deadly Scorn
    That Very First Time A Girlz Legs Start To Open and Soon Depart
    You Better Call The Day After , Cuz She'll Take It To Heart[/color]


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    ...::Friendship::...

    [color=light black]As You Hear The Cries After A Beloved One Dies
    The One That Would Advise Without Needing a Disguise
    Your Brain Starts to Clutter and Your Heart Starts To Flutter
    You Try To Speak But All You Can Do Is Gasp and Stutter
    So many Things Overlooked and Not Noticed Or Mentioned
    You Have No Comprehension of the Dimension of Tension
    The Love Of Two People , Had Been Child Hood Friends
    One Transcends Over The Other and They Never Made Amends
    One Wants To Restart the Friendship And Is Very Ambitious
    The Other is Propitious, But Towards the Friend Is Malicious
    He's Talkin Shit ,He Dont Know When To Finish or Start
    So The "Friend" Kept Talkin Until It Was His Time To Depart
    So He Put The gun To His Chest ... He Couldn't Restart
    Through His Tear Stained Eyes, I Watched His Life Fall Apart
    As He Keeled Over... The Bitch Had Took It To Heart[/color]

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    Last edited by Sureal; May 25th, 2003 at 10:54 PM
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    PleDge
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    Three Weeks Later She Takes The Test Cuz Her Cycle Has Not Come
    She Watches The Dot Change Colours and Fear Begins to Make her Numb
    The Man and Father Had Bolted After that magical OnE Night Stand
    She Found him and He Said " The Condom Broke, This Was Not Planned"
    This Woman I Speak Of In This Rhyme Is Still Strong and Very Brave
    But The Man Who Got Her Pregnant Lie Very still in His Grave

    a love those lines a lot really good wordplay in them great twist at the end..so true lol

    So many Things Overlooked and Not Noticed Or Mentioned
    You Have No Comprehension of the Dimension of Tension
    The Love Of Two People , Had Been Child Hood Friends
    One Transcends Over The Other and They Never Made Amends

    and that was heat felt....a think anyways maybe am readin too much into it

    overall really ill drop a think n e ways..hope ya win in yo battle

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    holy shit man, thats fucking great, i'm speechless, never seen shit thats as pro as that

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    ^^lol , thats my dawg in real life .... he just signed up so he could view that.... he dont get out much ... but yea thank for the comment bro
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    uppin for some comments on this open mic
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    I would think with as many open mics you post that the level would just fall off...

    enjoyed this... consistently good open mics....

    I know this isnt the place to do this but peep me vs 2 tyma in frontlines
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    werd homie that was tyte ..........PROPZ...........

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