User Tag List

Showing results 1 to 15 of 15

Thread: Think For Yourself

  1. January 11th, 2004, 01:37 PM #1
    Chrit.
    Chrit. is offline
    ... Chrit.'s Avatar
    Join Date
    Jan 2000
    Location
    904
    Age
    41
    Posts
    36,635
    Battle Record
    41-13
    Awards Cypher Winner - Award Request Accepted LLL HOF OM HOF SS HW Champion LLL Champion 1-2 Season Champion 1-2 Punch HW Champion FL Champion 100+ Wins ABL Champion

    Think For Yourself

    Was bored... so keyed this up....
    Kinda short...
    May add another verse or two if the response is good

    Its time to wake up and see the signs of the times
    Time to rewind... Then fast forward to V.2 of mankind
    Then society will find that its in need of some help...
    So just do us all a favor... Start to think for yourself

    Programmed into roles... indifferent to if we lead or follow
    Full of sorrow for the fact it seems even our time is borrowed..
    Morals swallowed... Eithics erased... Everything still set on race...
    Expressionless faces... increase of idiocy and trying to keep pace..
    Is this how we rate? An imperialistic... power driven state?
    One run by a man with a reading level of barely 8th grade...
    Yet we tolerate... Back a bufoon... Hate who we're told to hate...
    Declining mental states ignorant to how our ethics dissipate...
    So set a date... the day when you will finally open ya eyes...
    Grow to dispise... How everyone but us controls our lives

    Its time to wake up and see the signs of the times
    Time to rewind... Then fast forward to V.2 of mankind
    Then society will find that its in need of some help...
    So just do us all a favor... Start to think for yourself
    AI
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote
  2. January 11th, 2004, 01:41 PM #2
    Thrust
    Thrust is offline
    this buds for you Thrust's Avatar
    Join Date
    Sep 2003
    Posts
    1,980
    Battle Record
    5-17
    nice short piece

    flow was on piont... content was decent...
    all n all this was a pretty stronjg piece

    a good message being said here.. u should add more onto this
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote
  3. January 11th, 2004, 01:43 PM #3
    Methane
    Methane is offline
    and the tai kwon monks ! Methane's Avatar
    Join Date
    Mar 2003
    Location
    shaolin
    Age
    39
    Posts
    4,122
    Battle Record
    3-0
    All in all good read. . I like the message being portrayed and you display it very well. .

    So set a date... the day when you will finally open ya eyes...
    Grow to dispise... How everyone but us controls our lives
    Mad number of Multies here. . I'm not sure if it's a good thing but, in some aspects, it does concrete the meaning of this piece. . F'n Government

    Nice drop dude. .
    raiders of the lost art ©
    W o r d P e r f e c t



    To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.


    the pound is stronger than the dollar, HOLLA !
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote
  4. January 11th, 2004, 01:45 PM #4
    Chrit.
    Chrit. is offline
    ... Chrit.'s Avatar
    Join Date
    Jan 2000
    Location
    904
    Age
    41
    Posts
    36,635
    Battle Record
    41-13
    Awards Cypher Winner - Award Request Accepted LLL HOF OM HOF SS HW Champion LLL Champion 1-2 Season Champion 1-2 Punch HW Champion FL Champion 100+ Wins ABL Champion
    Thanks... I suppose I'll throw another verse or two together when I get some time = )
    AI
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote
  5. January 11th, 2004, 01:59 PM #5
    Vis
    Vis is offline
    Banned
    Join Date
    Dec 2003
    Location
    Chicago
    Posts
    5,158
    Battle Record
    1-4
    This was a great short piece.. the hook had a lot of meaning
    So did the actual verse.. my favorite line was:
    Yet we tolerate... Back a bufoon... Hate who we're told to hate...
    Declining mental states ignorant to how our ethics dissipate...

    If you could return the favor on my open mic
    "When my eyes are closed" would be appreciated.
    Again great piece, stay up
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote
  6. January 11th, 2004, 02:05 PM #6
    Lord Sarcasm
    Lord Sarcasm is offline
    I'm Roman Catholic Lord Sarcasm's Avatar
    Join Date
    Apr 2003
    Age
    36
    Posts
    2,918
    Battle Record
    13-3
    Yepp...alot of multis are in this...
    Had a good ol' flow...
    Was on point with the subject content...
    no much else to say...
    PROP-ortions...Is what my open mic is about...
    please peep...with feedback
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=105870
    WordPerfect
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote
  7. January 11th, 2004, 02:43 PM #7
    Chrit.
    Chrit. is offline
    ... Chrit.'s Avatar
    Join Date
    Jan 2000
    Location
    904
    Age
    41
    Posts
    36,635
    Battle Record
    41-13
    Awards Cypher Winner - Award Request Accepted LLL HOF OM HOF SS HW Champion LLL Champion 1-2 Season Champion 1-2 Punch HW Champion FL Champion 100+ Wins ABL Champion
    Thanks = )
    AI
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote
  8. January 11th, 2004, 05:01 PM #8
    Chrit.
    Chrit. is offline
    ... Chrit.'s Avatar
    Join Date
    Jan 2000
    Location
    904
    Age
    41
    Posts
    36,635
    Battle Record
    41-13
    Awards Cypher Winner - Award Request Accepted LLL HOF OM HOF SS HW Champion LLL Champion 1-2 Season Champion 1-2 Punch HW Champion FL Champion 100+ Wins ABL Champion
    Up?
    AI
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote
  9. January 11th, 2004, 11:28 PM #9
    The Realist
    The Realist is offline
    The R in RB.Com
    Join Date
    Jul 2003
    Age
    42
    Posts
    3,785
    Battle Record
    5-1
    Its good that this was kept short and sweet....cause once you get the point across no need beating people over the head with it.. the flow was good yet bad...it had an audio-esque flow to it... so thats good since your doing audio...but comes out kinda bad on text...

    Your point was not too direct, but even if it was who cares? If your writing to get a point across do you want to be vague about it?

    To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote
  10. January 12th, 2004, 11:01 AM #10
    Chrit.
    Chrit. is offline
    ... Chrit.'s Avatar
    Join Date
    Jan 2000
    Location
    904
    Age
    41
    Posts
    36,635
    Battle Record
    41-13
    Awards Cypher Winner - Award Request Accepted LLL HOF OM HOF SS HW Champion LLL Champion 1-2 Season Champion 1-2 Punch HW Champion FL Champion 100+ Wins ABL Champion
    Good points
    Thanks
    AI
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote
  11. January 12th, 2004, 12:11 PM #11
    Born To Kill
    Born To Kill is offline
    Veteran Born To Kill's Avatar
    Join Date
    May 2003
    Location
    Houston, Texas
    Age
    55
    Posts
    20,733
    Battle Record
    212-103
    Awards LLL Season Champion LLL HOF 200+ Wins
    Nice shit, good message...

    Kinda a played one (we all know the world sucks), but ya made it yours nicely.

    Hook was really tight.

    Vocab, flow, wordplay...

    This had everything, cept was too short.

    Add the rest of it and let er rip.

    7.5/10
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote
  12. March 26th, 2004, 02:09 PM #12
    Chrit.
    Chrit. is offline
    ... Chrit.'s Avatar
    Join Date
    Jan 2000
    Location
    904
    Age
    41
    Posts
    36,635
    Battle Record
    41-13
    Awards Cypher Winner - Award Request Accepted LLL HOF OM HOF SS HW Champion LLL Champion 1-2 Season Champion 1-2 Punch HW Champion FL Champion 100+ Wins ABL Champion
    Up

    lol
    AI
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote
  13. March 26th, 2004, 02:17 PM #13
    VennyRhymes
    Guest
    Nice Piece. Enjoyed reading it. Would be better as an audio. My fav Line
    So set a date... the day when you will finally open ya eyes...
    Grow to dispise... How everyone but us controls our lives
    Quality
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote
  14. March 26th, 2004, 03:10 PM #14
    Emerge
    Emerge is offline
    Super Spic, w00t! Emerge's Avatar
    Join Date
    Sep 2003
    Location
    Sacramento
    Posts
    15,665
    Battle Record
    37-1
    You fag lol write something new

    To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

    To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

    To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.


    New Writejist Song - Tito Ortiz

    To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote
  15. March 26th, 2004, 03:14 PM #15
    Chrit.
    Chrit. is offline
    ... Chrit.'s Avatar
    Join Date
    Jan 2000
    Location
    904
    Age
    41
    Posts
    36,635
    Battle Record
    41-13
    Awards Cypher Winner - Award Request Accepted LLL HOF OM HOF SS HW Champion LLL Champion 1-2 Season Champion 1-2 Punch HW Champion FL Champion 100+ Wins ABL Champion
    ^^^

    I did, its in Poetry
    AI
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote
« Previous Thread | Next Thread »

Posting Rules

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •  

Forum Rules