The Arrival

[ScarNflictR]

Aight yo, well this is my first post here, I wrote this at work while I was on break in about 10 mins. I hope to post more rhymes I make in the future and if any Crews need someone, holla at me. Peace

My lyrical weapon of choice // is my voice // i use it to boist
about my new style of speech // aimed at the world // trying to teach
gettin my message across // killin these MC's // crucifying em' on a cross
no ressurection occuring // you're in the wrong direction // start turning
my flow equipted with venom // sinking through your pours // peircing the denim
i send chills down your spine // with each verse of this rhyme
shout out for a hersche // this is the scene of a murder crime
im like a bomb ticking // ready to set off at any time
my words are stimulatin' // have bitches anticipatin'
the arrival of your rival's survival // hold you bible
and start to pray // beg God not to get slayed // by this blade's spade
portrayed by those who are afriad // patch yourself up with a band-aid
and try again
or end your prayer now // say Amen

Any feedback will be appriciated

[FaceFuckaMidget.]

nice. thats all i can say imma put in a good word for u at dynasty soldiers

[lyrical_killer]

that was good but yo homes try to work on yo structure and then this would be fuckin ausome ........... keep at it ............. fo real

[ScarNflictR]

thanks guys, yea its a lil sloppy but i flowed it nice in my head, i was trying to put it to flow with a beat and i have a few that would work nice but im busy doing some homework n shit so ill touch it up later / make a new flow at a later time, jus laying down some rhymes to see what you guys think of it, keep the comments coming yo, peace

[ScarNflictR]

uppin'
any other feedback before i let this one die?