:)(5-1) vs Casualty(1-1)

[Under Dawg]

aiight 12 lines

you got a 20 minute time limit to drop your verse after mines.. if you dont you will be dq'd

also no dickride or hate votes

[Casualty]

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[Under Dawg]

Aiight listen im a show yall really how weak this nigga is.......

dude ill mentally and emotionally murder you and SPIT ROUNDS LACED WITH
enough ammunition to leave this BITCH CLOWNS FACE SPLIT,
your SHIT SOUNDS BASIC ,you woulnt be noticed running through a HICK TOWN PLACE WITH
your damn lyrics attached to the back of a poster of hali berry STRIPPED DOWN NAKED (lol.. damn!)
listen you talk real hard like you carry KNIFE STACKS AH TON
when you've really gotten SLICED, JACKED , TA JUMPED
you damn phony, your only real affiliation with the streets was your LIFE AS A BUM -lol
your the type to get smacked and get your jaw BROKIN IN HALF
your lyrics suck so bad, you wouldnt even make ja rules OPENING ACT
just face it bitch you have no TALENT MAN
your gay ass couldnt "drop bombs" even if your ghostwriter was in the TALIBAN


hahahaha.. ripped!

[Casualty]

Good luck

I said “good luck” cuz I wanna battle, and your askin if I “would fuck”
Leavin your “hood shook” im poppin nines u askin if you “should duck”
Shit, you must be “krazy” to think such a bad emcee could blaze me
Shit son, you don’t even phase me, im prodigy, everyone tries to contemplate me
I love seeing your grifriendf in that blue thong
Cuz you been telling your crew that “getting jiggy wit it” was a new song
I am reppin the frist amendment ratified, you better hide
I leave political matters blind, cuz I got your skills 1000 times magnified
I’m a criminal, cuz my tactics are pivotal
Inner state is subliminal, cuz my mic skills are cynical
Coverin political syllables that make your tongue invert
My Lyrical “sting” hurts, I am beatin you wit “big words”

[Under Dawg]

uppin for votes.. only well explained votes will be tolerated......................................... .................................................. ...............

[Casualty]

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[Under Dawg]

uppin for votes............................................. .................................................. .................

[SaM sKILLeT]

Nice battle...

Feelings after my first read, Smiley-face won. Lemme break it down a little..

dude ill mentally and emotionally murder you and SPIT ROUNDS LACED WITH
enough ammunition to leave this BITCH CLOWNS FACE SPLIT,
your SHIT SOUNDS BASIC ,you woulnt be noticed running through a HICK TOWN PLACE WITH
your damn lyrics attached to the back of a poster of hali berry STRIPPED DOWN NAKED (lol.. damn!)

Hella Multies... lol, nice punch too.... crazy ass comparison, but i like those.

listen you talk real hard like you carry KNIFE STACKS AH TON
when you've really gotten SLICED, JACKED , TA JUMPED
you damn phony, your only real affiliation with the streets was your LIFE AS A BUM -lol

Multies are gettin forced here, but good punch

your the type to get smacked and get your jaw BROKIN IN HALF
your lyrics suck so bad, you wouldnt even make ja rules OPENING ACT
just face it bitch you have no TALENT MAN
your gay ass couldnt "drop bombs" even if your ghostwriter was in the TALIBAN

First punch, decent. Second, very played, but it was iight here.
Overall, pretty good, nice read, good punches and good multies.

Next

I said “good luck” cuz I wanna battle, and your askin if I “would fuck”
Leavin your “hood shook” im poppin nines u askin if you “should duck”

Not hard hittin..... I understand you're callin him gay and dumb, but this shit lacks.

Shit, you must be “krazy” to think such a bad emcee could blaze me
Shit son, you don’t even phase me, im prodigy, everyone tries to contemplate me

Same as above, nothing hard here.

I love seeing your grifriend in that blue thong
Cuz you been telling your crew that “getting jiggy wit it” was a new song

This is just retarded. First line's complete filler, like you thought of the punch and just added the first line cuz blue thong rhymed with newsong.. Which is dumb because the punch isn't good...

I am reppin the frist amendment ratified, you better hide
I leave political matters blind, cuz I got your skills 1000 times magnified

Eh....

I’m a criminal, cuz my tactics are pivotal
Inner state is subliminal, cuz my mic skills are cynical

You're just rhyming without saying anything! No punch. Your mic skills are cynical? meaning they're negative?

Coverin political syllables that make your tongue invert
My Lyrical “sting” hurts, I am beatin you wit “big words”

hm... beating him with big words? nah.....


Overall, : ) Won.. It seemed like both of you were working for multies, and : ) won that battle. : ) had better punches... Didn't see a single personal, which is sad because you both could've worked something easily off the person's names { : ) and Casualty} Casualty, You were going for flow and rhyming, and yours did flow and rhyme well, but rather than worrying about the flow and stuff, you need to come up with some punches instead, because that will win you the battles....

So, Vote: : ) Smiley face
I can't poll vote yet, sorry, I hope you appreciate the feedback, though.


If ya could check out my battle Here it'd be appreciated. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...8&pagenumber=1

[Under Dawg]

uppin .. damn not yet one poll vote.............................................. .................................................. ..........

[El Chapo]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=104792

vote for this please

casualty=his verse was aite no tite shit and same like all newbs say u had no personals and i really didn't feel ya flow

casual=it was better cause he had more vocab no punches and no personals still but ya both need to elevate nice setup but u was more creative with the verse

vote=casual

[Under Dawg]

lol at that fake ass vote.. uppin for some real votes............................................. .................................................. .............................

[Aines]

ayo this battle was ill but took this 1.......both of yall hit wit sum good multis and punches but hit a lot harder......casualty u had the better structure.. u need 2 improve on ur structure as it was hard 2 read at times........as sam skillet sed there were no punches used and it cud of been good if there were some included.....both flows were aight but ma vote goes 2 on this 1 as he had the harder hitting punches and shit and i tink punches win battles

[Mr. Mike Dew]

yea gets this one

casualty kinda lost my attention around the blue thong line or whut ever the fuck it was he said

"you woulnt be noticed running through a HICK TOWN PLACE WITH
your damn lyrics attached to the back of a poster of hali berry STRIPPED DOWN NAKED" (my favorite line cuase got -damnit in swordfish when i saw them titties.........u get the idea)

vote:

[Under Dawg]

damn if yall could vote i would be up 3 to 1.. anyways uppin for votes lets get this shit over with.............................................. .................................................. .......

[nolonger]

ite my vote would ahve to be given to everything was a tie on this aparrt from one thing which was punches and his just hit harder and were spit better rly close shit tho not bad versus........


make sure you hit this with an honest vote now plz

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=105059

......thx............pz