10 lines
15 minutes
rule
Go_Todd_Go
10 lines
15 minutes
There ye go...alright drop ye verse...i drop 15 minutes after you g'luck man
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Yo Yo, only thing you rule is yourself
been in the bathroom since you was just twelve
Your crazy for thinking you could beat my flow
i got one peace of advice... Go Rule Go!
Go back to the home page, and check your PM's
all the hate mail, its too easy to condemn
when you come around here with the wackest of all rhymes
You must be stuck in a box, cause your rhymes are as good as a mimes
learn the rules of the rhyme and play da game right
every word you say is slime. and your rhyme is trite
Sorry bout this one, but my sister is being a fuckin bitch.
Okie...He Called Me Out Lets Get Some Votes.
Fuck'a Newb I'm Paralizen This Fuck An Text Again.
Shaken Ya Head...
Realisen You Should'a Not Pm'd Or Bailed Instead.
Why Waiste A Good Punchline On A Minuture Cell
Yet To Evolve Into Something..Who Has Now Met Hell
Take The Jay Z Album And Go With Its Actual Meaning
Your Confused..
You Being Dope On Rb Is A Fantasy A Todler Day Dreaming.
I Don't Have Any flow Sructure Personals Or Vocab..
No Sence Of Direction..Your Ass Should Go To A Writters Lab
Learn To Write With Style This Is My Last Line.
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A Keyed Verse Leaves The Word 'Herb' Defined.
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uppen for somw votes
#1
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uppen for some votes fuck
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uPPEN FOR SOME VOTES...i WANT THIS BATTLE DONE AND OVER WITH
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Uppen number four...lets get some fucken votes in....peace
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Go Todd Go- Not much I can say, no wordplay, no good punches, a rather weak verse...
Rule- nothing really caught my eye, but you hit a bit harder than Go Todd Go...
not a very good battle, nothing great from rule, and nothing from Go Todd Go....
Vote=rule
peep my battle w/ Echo....
.::[oNe]::.
aiight the battle was mediocore but I will have to score it like this
Open: rule even though they both sucked
Punches: Rule even though this battle was a big shit fest hey I think Rule took it easy on him
Metaphors: WHAT METAPHORS
Close: Rule
Winner Rule
Uppen to finish this battle
1-0...been here 2 days or something...
Uppen
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Wasn't much from either, didn't seem like you guys spent enough time on it, but
Punches: Rule
Wordplay: Neither
Metas: Neither
Flow: Tie
Personals: Neither
Multis: Neither
Vote - Rule
Took this with a bare punch
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A Keyed Verse Leaves The Word 'Herb' Defined.
Please vote on my battle, in my sig
Look at em cheer - the crowd, I've been tame as I spit it to you
Everything from here till now has been strained and then given to you
- Brethren
yeh - basicly everyone else said the same ass shit
str8 battle - dudes came aight - nothin spectacular -
go todd had punches but they werent funny or witty
rule had all that other stuff 0
vote rule
hit up this battle
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=104202
thanks last uppen
2-0
3 more votes
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not a great battle...
Learn To Write With Style This Is My Last Line.
In 5 Minutes...
A Keyed Verse Leaves The Word 'Herb' Defined.
best line from rule in this battle...go to go...sukt basically
thats about it really...rule didnt have great punches but they were better and just seemed to have effort
v/rule
if u got time
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=104467
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