he seems to think he can handle Noda. we'll see. loser is banned and off the site under the sn they lose as.
rules:
12 lines max, 10 is preferable.
a set due limit, go over & you lose.
when is this due limit? you decide, but tonight.
Guilty InASense
Noda Ropes
he seems to think he can handle Noda. we'll see. loser is banned and off the site under the sn they lose as.
rules:
12 lines max, 10 is preferable.
a set due limit, go over & you lose.
when is this due limit? you decide, but tonight.
R E N .. Record Equals Nothing !
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This over-hyped faggot is thrown down, im marked a vet
. .you're still on the building blocks, like ancient architects
but when he shows up, obvious the verdicts filthy deemed
when the jury delivers, is the only time that guiltys seen. .
u won't be proven innocent. . im how he derived that dent
i kill in a sense. . think how bad it is when i have 5 of them
while text battling, id quit... ur flow looks bored to me. .
cuz guilty. . the only sense you have is of false security....
im whoring g's. . you aint good, im prone to diss ya. .
when i lock in & blow up on this kid like homing missiles. .
R E N .. Record Equals Nothing !
Like "shooting pictures"... I'll put a few bullets to your "frame".
Cause you have no meaning to me... sorta like your username.
The concepts you use are all played... exept for a select few.
So if "Aw shucks, you suck" is true, and im winning... what does that say for you?
"Reverse" my lines like a game of chess... I got this rook cornered.
Cause you have more empty space for skills then your profile does "For-words".
You made the first win I got a Pinkslip Win... well thank you.
But the only "rope" that can touch me is the one I use to hang you.
Now your claiming you ill has gotten old, atleast now you'll be hot though.
Cause this kid left it up to Santa to tell him if he was nice...
.... And he got coal!
You've been beat.
lol Guilty killed this kid...his first 4 bars were better than Noda Ropes whole verse....
they both had tite rhyming skills....but Guilty had MUCH better punchlines and wordplay....Noda Ropes had a better flow and line structure but that doesn't win battles...
vote- Guilty InASense
peace
I.J.L.
Thanks... can you poll? Ahh.... Mods poll his vote please...
Uppin... Don't sleep on this... This is a life and death situation.
Upping... Someone please vote on the battle. I'll give you an honest one on yours and get a mod to poll it. Thanks.
Noda Ropes-
Came to original...Good Structure.. Flow was pretty good
Punches were decent, coulda hit harder...
Ya lacked personals... should did them...
Overall...verse was ok... 12/20
Guilty InASense-
Dome verse.....good structure...perfect flow
Punches were hard hitting...dope personals
Verse was well developed.....PROPS...
OVerall......15/20
Vote-GuiltyInASense
He simply came harder in punches
and thats what won this for him
Noda Ropes needs to elevate some
But Dope shit.. Keep it up
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guilty shook this bitch like as if it was going out of style NODA YOU SUCK I repeat Noda you suck i would breakthis down catagory by catagory but guilty clearly won
my vote=guilty
hit this up with a honest vote pleeeze:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=103977
Explain your future votes further.
-Axe
Last edited by Axe; January 7th, 2004 at 01:44 PM
First let me say that it's gonna be a shame when one of you lose your screen name, because both of them are hot to me. But Anywayz... here goes.
Noda Ropes: I was feeling your joint (especially the ancient building blocks joint)... but you didn't rhyme on two separate parts of your verse (dent & them)? and (diss ya & missiles)? I felt like you were reaching a little... but nothing too drastic... just keep elevating.
Guilty In A Sense:
Dope verse... Nice structure, Great flow, Decent Personals (but they could've been more "personal"), Good Punches. Nice Job Altogether Though. Keep Elevatin' Yo.
Vote: Guilty In A Sense
Harder Punches, Weak Personals (but at least he had them) and better flow and structure line for line. Both of y'all need to elevate some, but I was pleasantly surprised by the battle overall.
Can't Poll Vote Anyways... So Y'all Probably Don't Care What I Think.
Well I'm not to sure what you mean by my personals not being "personal" enough. But thanks for your word anyway.
Noda Ropes-
Came to original...Good Structure.. Flow was pretty good
Punches were decent, coulda hit harder...
Ya lacked personals... should did them...
Overall...verse was ok... 12/20
Guilty InASense-
Dome verse.....good structure...perfect flow
Punches were hard hitting...dope personals
Verse was well developed.....PROPS...
OVerall......15/20
Vote-GuiltyInASense
He simply came harder in punches
and thats what won this for him
Noda Ropes needs to elevate some
But Dope shit.. Keep it up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=104049
PEEP even doper battle
good from both......
overall i would have to go wit guilty tho...........your wordplay was killer....the rook thing was great.....punches and everything else was pretty close....but edged in a sense by guilty.....bith came very nice tho.....
vote- guilty.....
hit this witta honest vote
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=104049
Explain your future votes better.
-Axe
Last edited by Axe; January 7th, 2004 at 01:46 PM
Shit this was a good battle.
Ok the brakedown:
Noda- You had a oright flow, oright punches and good structure. Some oright shit in there
Guilty- Better punches , good flow and sturcture- so you take this just
Vote - Guilty
Explain your future votes better.
-Axe
Last edited by Axe; January 7th, 2004 at 01:45 PM
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