Aragorn vs Warren Piece

[Quelude]

12 lines
30 min
you first
No b/s

Aragorn wins by DQ. Warren Piece banned for biting this line:

Berate this cat quick...and before he gets over it,
He'll break down in saabs like poor Swedish motorists

from http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=615435

-Cprogress

[MC Ray Sersharpe]

12 line eh?

fuck you, stupid bitch...i get gully when recitin these curses,
i think youre a faggot...but frodo's gayer for writin ya verses,
Aragorn I am the paragon of blazin' raps, my blade'll hack bits,
Of ya mug cause my aim is ta rearrange the face of wackness,
Berate this cat quick...and before he gets over it,
He'll break down in saabs like poor Swedish motorists,
You in poverty yo--you ain't a menacin' thug, ya saggin,
A pair of Lees...old as the original Double Dragons,
But, you're a star waiting to happen as well as a brilliant genius,
That needs to cut his demo... into a-fuckin million pieces,
I guess your nervous battling me.. ya sig spoke your death,
You can make a million mardi gras necklaces with your beads of sweat.



Thank you for participating.

[MC Ray Sersharpe]

oh and if it'll make you feel better,















check'd in.





Happy?





You can't warrant Warren with Piece


^you'll probably use that in your verse and do it all wrong. Pop guns in your verse too. Make sure you do that and add something gay like my custom text or something similar. Don't forget to make up atleast 3 personals on me. I'm fat, uh ugly and errr I was lookin in Elite to find out how you spit. Yea that's good. Have fun homo.

[dizzy hommel]

Damn Wp dat shit was nice but ino u hav got alot beta than that.unless d otha dude is awesome u win!!!!!

Drop ur votes on this aswell please http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=101986

[dw.]

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[Quelude]

Nice drop.

You wanted a fresh start, but you rhymes boring still..
No wonder you tarnished your record... back when you was OriginIll (his old squad, under his alias)
A nice disguise... you NEED disguise for your rhymes
Dress up those played lines... Hide your old record.. 0-9
Looking at you roam these forums posing as a newb...
Makes me sicker..quicker than watching Davinity pose in the nude!
You couldn't throw a punch with rocket launchers for shoulders
You could show me how to stunt...If the topic was "Pussy Soldiers"
Your an herbish vet.. can't find yourself or your purpose yet
A change of name.. not intellect.. that's why you rhymes is simple yet..
Talking shit to K... but never been in war in elevate kid (Elevated Bitch Slapped...)
Stupid bitch with rowboat ass and battleship lips

[Quelude]

Last line clarification
A battleship mouth and a rowboat ass= talks big but don't back it up................................................ .................................................. .

[Brendan]

I'll break this one down:

fuck you, stupid bitch...i get gully when recitin these curses,
i think youre a faggot...but frodo's gayer for writin ya verses,
nah
Aragorn I am the paragon of blazin' raps, my blade'll hack bits,
Of ya mug cause my aim is ta rearrange the face of wackness,
ok
Berate this cat quick...and before he gets over it,
He'll break down in saabs like poor Swedish motorists,
ha, nice wordplay, good stuff
You in poverty yo--you ain't a menacin' thug, ya saggin,
A pair of Lees...old as the original Double Dragons,
nice, double dragon!
But, you're a star waiting to happen as well as a brilliant genius,
That needs to cut his demo... into a-fuckin million pieces,
wasn't really feeling it
I guess your nervous battling me.. ya sig spoke your death,
You can make a million mardi gras necklaces with your beads of sweat.
tight closer



You wanted a fresh start, but you rhymes boring still..
No wonder you tarnished your record... back when you was OriginIll (his old squad, under his alias)
ok, good to start w/ a person
A nice disguise... you NEED disguise for your rhymes
Dress up those played lines... Hide your old record.. 0-9
good personal again
Looking at you roam these forums posing as a newb...
Makes me sicker..quicker than watching Davinity pose in the nude!
nah
You couldn't throw a punch with rocket launchers for shoulders
You could show me how to stunt...If the topic was "Pussy Soldiers"
uh... ok I guess
Your an herbish vet.. can't find yourself or your purpose yet
A change of name.. not intellect.. that's why you rhymes is simple yet..
ok
Talking shit to K... but never been in war in elevate kid (Elevated Bitch Slapped...)
Stupid bitch with rowboat ass and battleship lips
weak closer... didn't feel it

Overall Warren Peace had it. Aragon had too many weak or questionable punches.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=103093

[GaZeeBo]

nice battle

lets break this down

Warren

fuck you, stupid bitch...i get gully when recitin these curses,
i think youre a faggot...but frodo's gayer for writin ya verses,

[Quelude]

^^^^^Herb.





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[MC Ray Sersharpe]

LMFAO. I was never in Original Ill. You are sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooo fuckin far off with that one.

boy are you a fuckin idiot.

[Quelude]

Quit swaying.....



......................................Don't make me prove.................................

[GaZeeBo]

my bad on that i hit enter by accident

breakdown

warren

fuck you, stupid bitch...i get gully when recitin these curses,
i think youre a faggot...but frodo's gayer for writin ya verses,
7/10

Aragorn I am the paragon of blazin' raps, my blade'll hack bits,
Of ya mug cause my aim is ta rearrange the face of wackness,
8/10

Berate this cat quick...and before he gets over it,
He'll break down in saabs like poor Swedish motorists
5/10

You in poverty yo--you ain't a menacin' thug, ya saggin,
A pair of Lees...old as the original Double Dragons,
8/10

But, you're a star waiting to happen as well as a brilliant genius,
That needs to cut his demo... into a-fuckin million pieces,
8/10

I guess your nervous battling me.. ya sig spoke your death,
You can make a million mardi gras necklaces with your beads of sweat.
8/10

overall- 44/60

aragorn

You wanted a fresh start, but you rhymes boring still..
No wonder you tarnished your record... back when you was OriginIll (his old squad, under his alias)
8/10

A nice disguise... you NEED disguise for your rhymes
Dress up those played lines... Hide your old record.. 0-9
hahaha 9/10

Looking at you roam these forums posing as a newb...
Makes me sicker..quicker than watching Davinity pose in the nude!
7/10

You couldn't throw a punch with rocket launchers for shoulders
You could show me how to stunt...If the topic was "Pussy Soldiers
7/10

Your an herbish vet.. can't find yourself or your purpose yet
A change of name.. not intellect.. that's why you rhymes is simple yet..
8/10

Talking shit to K... but never been in war in elevate kid (Elevated Bitch Slapped...)
Stupid bitch with rowboat ass and battleship lips
hahaha 9/10

overall- 48/60

aragorn wins it because of better personals and punches in my opinion

and i think aragorn was sayin that brendan was a herb lol

yo hit this up with an honest vote
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=103305

i took the time on this so please return the favor on mine

[Cryptic Thoughts]

OK.
This wasnt even close.

Warren killed it with some nice witty punches.
Arragorn had more personals.
However, those personals were mostly made up.
Warren isnt Cam by the way.

As I said, Warren came much better with witty, hard hitting punches and a consistent flow.
Arragorn came decent but he did just as Warren predicted and did not come very well with wittiness in the punches.

Vote- Warren

[Quelude]

Thanx Chrit^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^



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