you know the rules...
10-12 lines
crew votes cool
no d/r or hate votes
no feeding/recycling
30 min. to drop or dq
good luck
CarsonJetX2
Diverse
you know the rules...
10-12 lines
crew votes cool
no d/r or hate votes
no feeding/recycling
30 min. to drop or dq
good luck
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checkin in and droppin, try to drop by tonight homie
I'll leave this kid feelin sluggish like a severe case of jet lag
have you thinkin he's homeless cuz he ain't got any room to brag
Same crew, similar record but opposite directions of elevation
As he drops way below C level while i rise up to the occasion
Carsonjet considers himself to be a so-called supreme emcee
But my words shoot down his hopes like anti-aircraft artillery
Twice in a row you got KO'd, by members of our same crew
Now i'm up, the third to go, so i guess it's another L for you
Emerge laughed in ya face when you challenged him to slips
This crew should have you replaced like old people with fake hips
Found the situation whimsical cuz he knew you weren't kidding
You would be to easy to murk so he sent me to do his bidding
just waitin on ya verse homie, let's get this shit poppin....and if you don't understand the punches and shit then don't vote...plain and simple...
explanations i guess...
line 5: check his avi it says supreme emcee
line 7: he's already lost to two people in our crew
line 9: he challenged emerge to slips
that should be it
diverse....
11-4? wit what? newbies?...only 4 vets have battled u
it's true...add another merk in crew just like eyeque
Noabuse? he's 2-12 I hope u coulda merk'd that kid...
face the facts.wit out ya gramps emerge..u have no wins
Forget clappin..I could end this thread wit blanks-n-flares..
I even star' his avi^^look...Im right on top this panda bear
It's simply clear..I was better than u even before i was x2
Thought u knew.u couldn't carey a win on me i ya name was drew
I could set the standard grass..Diverse still can't wip my ass
Leave diverse half-massed...please...drop another personal about my past
yo im sayin carson got this battle easy....he had better personals......dtruc was even.....meats a liked carsons better.....
punches was even both had nice concetps....overall i think caron won he hit harder wit personals
Forget clappin..I could end this thread wit blanks-n-flares..
I even star' his avi^^look...Im right on top this panda bear
^^ best lines
clean battle...11-4 kid not bad..feelin yastructure a bit choppy at sum points but nice punches an personals
Carson..like ya structure short worded an strate to the punch
feelin it
liked that line i quoted...
prett even battle u both are pretty damn good
an are past the basic writing skillz......
V-carson..very close..sum mite differ...
Pc
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flow-diverse
persosonals-carson
wordplay-diverse
punches-carson
consistancy-carson
vote-carson, he came a little harder.. carey line was kool.. both had some alright lines nothing spectacular.. diverse had a slightly better flow but carson had slightly better disses so he edged out the win, return the favor hit this battle up
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...hreadid=102893
Good Luck. You're Gonna Need It.
pretty good battle.
both had good punches, but i think diverse had better wordplay, a few more clever rhymes.
vote: diverse
vote doesnt count, you are warned for the crappy voting. -feeble
Last edited by Richard Parker; January 3rd, 2004 at 04:43 PM
oh ya, and i spend time on your battles, spend time on mine.
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...hreadid=102139
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...hreadid=101943
nice spit carson, this is a good battle homie.....but for the record, i got dq'ed against No Abuse, that's why i lost, but good researching for the battle and shit.......get at me online..............
Vote on this honestly please!http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...adid=101986...
neway my vote is for CarsonJetX2 he had beta personals and a beta flow!
warned for the crappy vote. read the rules. -feeble
Last edited by Richard Parker; January 4th, 2004 at 08:33 PM
Diverse:
I'll leave this kid feelin sluggish like a severe case of jet lag
have you thinkin he's homeless cuz he ain't got any room to brag
^ok opener, personal & meta: 6/10
Same crew, similar record but opposite directions of elevation
As he drops way below C level while i rise up to the occasion
^NICE wordplay: 9/10
Carsonjet considers himself to be a so-called supreme emcee
But my words shoot down his hopes like anti-aircraft artillery
^lil' filler, but good punch: 7/10
Twice in a row you got KO'd, by members of our same crew
Now i'm up, the third to go, so i guess it's another L for you
^ok line, good personal: 6/10
Emerge laughed in ya face when you challenged him to slips
This crew should have you replaced like old people with fake hips
^LMAO, tough personal and punch: 9/10
Found the situation whimsical cuz he knew you weren't kidding
You would be to easy to murk so he sent me to do his bidding
^ehh, not a strong close, but another personal: 6/10
Carson:
11-4? wit what? newbies?...only 4 vets have battled u
it's true...add another merk in crew just like eyeque
^nice open. Personal: 8/10
Noabuse? he's 2-12 I hope u coulda merk'd that kid...
face the facts.wit out ya gramps emerge..u have no wins
^More personals, good flow: 8/10
Forget clappin..I could end this thread wit blanks-n-flares..
I even star' his avi^^look...Im right on top this panda bear
^lMAO: 10/10
It's simply clear..I was better than u even before i was x2
Thought u knew.u couldn't carey a win on me i ya name was drew
^^ok line, could be a lot cleaner: 6/10
I could set the standard grass..Diverse still can't wip my ass
Leave diverse half-massed...please...drop another personal
about my past
^Nice tie in wit ya other lines in the verse: 9/10
BOTH +5 for illness.....
This was a sick battle.
Diverse: 48/60 = 80% ill
Carson: 46/50 = 92% ill
Carson took this.
Hit my link in my sig.
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