10-15 lines
u drop first
lets go!
.:FreemaN:.
J Goodz
10-15 lines
u drop first
lets go!
yo im here are u gonna come b?
wuts really good....were the fuck are you b************************************************* ************************************************** ************************************************** ******
soz man...
a was writin the longest ever vote on another battle lol
checkin in....
ima start keyin when you check in................................................ .
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ite, im nearly done..... jus 2 more lines.........
uve gota check in man.... or im not droppin....
if you no show me, im gona try n get u banned
now come on.....
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yo, man..... check in for god sake
then i'll drop
COME ON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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my fault b....i had to bounce out the apt. for a minute...go ahead now tho..********************************************* **********************************************
no probs man.................
alright, that was ur checkin then.......
ima drop my verse now......
u shud have urz ready now aswell, youve had all night man.....
good luck
here it comes.................
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Its jus like ur avvy says, a game of cat and mouse
u cudnt step to me if u were ladders to a tree house
youve only been here for 3days, and youve already lost 2
maybe the reason is becuz in ur raps u only talk about u
now you make everyone go first, youve got all the signs of a biter
maybe if u hadnt been dropped as a baby, u mite have been brighter
ima leav you with a saying for you, 'they say three's a charm'
a third loss is enough to break youand send u bk to the funny farm
its bout time u left rap, ur more suited to punk rock
or go bk to ur real occupation, 'Pitchin Rocks on the Block'
shud of finished there, but im waitin for you to-check-in
after this verse... J Goodz R.I.P, notify the next-of-kin
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it was cute be...nice..it was nice..
yo...
You were curious were I was...Because I never checked Back..?
Well its only right that you die..Cause curiousity killed the catt..!
Im real,you act...And Goodz see that your Gurly.......And if I die right now...It's ok....cause they say the GooD die early....
And so your knickname FREEman..?and you coach Karate..?well I got a kong foo gun,..That FREE bullets and Smoke your Body..!
The Flow is nauhty..And leave you 1 with the Alli...And I bet you get SONNED more than a shore in Cali...Hey!..Ima Rock-This-Fella...Now he in a Jay fit...FREE look at so much porn...He sucked in...And now he in the Matrix...Dont say shit.. gay bitch..cause you won't ever make it..your not creative..and Your flow too naked..!
And what you posted..That shit Dirt..!So I'm R.I.P now?..Shut up Trick!... you just got merked!...and none of your rapz had punches...Not even if you rapped about koolaid the whole verse..Chump you need church....Game done
it was cute be...nice..it was nice..
yo...
You were curious were I was...Because I never checked Back..?
Well its only right that you die..Cause curiousity killed the catt..!
Im real,you act...And Goodz see that your Gurly.......And if I die right now...It's ok....cause they say the GooD die early....
And so your knickname FREEman..?and you coach Karate..?well I got a kong foo gun,..That FREE bullets and Smoke your Body..!
The Flow is nauhty..And leave you 1 with the Alli...And I bet you get SONNED more than a shore in Cali...Hey!..Ima Rock-This-Fella...Now he in a Jay fit...FREE look at so much porn...He sucked in...And now he in the Matrix...Dont say shit.. gay bitch..cause you won't ever make it..your not creative..and Your flow too naked..!
And what you posted..That -shit -Dirt..!So I'm R.I.P now?..Shut up Trick!... you just got merked!...and none of your rapz had punches...Not even if you rapped about koolaid the whole verse..Chump you need church....Matterfact you just hurt!............Game done
votes peeps...holla back....thanx for battling Freeman...one luv...*****************Uppin uppin*****************
vote vote vote vote
votes peeps...holla back....thanx for battling Freeman...one luv...*****************Uppin uppin*****************
vote vote vote vote***
THE SECOND ONE I DID WAS JUST A CORRECTION.....
votes peeps...holla back....thanx for battling Freeman...one luv...*****************Uppin uppin*****************
vote vote vote vote
*************VOTE YA**************
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*************VOTE YA**************
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Freeman - The whole verse was week, and most punches had hardly any effect. You tried to be creative, but it didnt really flash. The structure was aight, a couple stretched lines. Need to work on a new rhyme scheme, that one is getting old. But there is one thing I liked about your verse. I thought the closer was pretty good. I dont think you put full potential in this...
J Goodz - Verse was week, and it was pretty wack as well. The punches wernt hard hitting. You need to fix that structure up hommie. You did have a better rhyme scheme than him, I liked that part. But it was to week, and work on your creativity. Keep elevating....
Vote - Freeman
Conclusion - Both verses were just weak, but he had the better of the two. He had a nice closer on that. So he gets my vote. Dont take anything I say personal, just elevate, thats what were all here for... aight hommies...
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