Detrimental
El Veterano
ok. well drop at the same time, to avoid no shows.
10-16 lines
no crew/hate/DR votes
any unexplained voted dont count
and no explaining lines after the battle.
im here just waiting for you to check in when you see this, so we could both drop at the same time.
for him to see it see it.
this doesnt count as one of my 5 ups cause we havent drop our verses yet.
yeah ill key something up right now
if you've got ur verse ready drop it
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what the fuck kid, you went offline
you better not fuckin no show on me
or pre-write............
If you don't understand a punch, don't vote
no dickriding, hate, or swaying please
AND YO EL VET, drop 10 lines dawg thats fair
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U thought u were a 'gifted' rapper, but ur text? Looks like u left-it-in-wrappers..
I mean damn, "El Veterano"... Who the fuck has heard of a mexican-rapper?...
The pic in ya avatar is jus who you wannabe, and sadly never gonna be..
And now i'ma refer to you as 'Anterior' the way you always seem to 'front on me'...
I thought u were different, but then i realised when it comes to wack theres only one-sort..
Heres one-thought..... like cicumcision ima leave this fuckin dick cut-short...
Cos you're not an emcee, so don't be suprised if your side of the poll don't see-votes..
I mean you've got 300 posts and 2 battles, all you seem to do is fuckin free-post...
Fake veteran, i didnt wanna break it to ya but truthfully we all think ur quite-gay..
And i know ure not a phat(fat) rapper cos ur classed as a god damn light-weight...
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Good lucc
i been waiting for you all day. its about time
you came to rapbattles running your mouth but got no respect
cause your like a vollyball ref, you only talk loud over the net
forget your songs they get no replys... unless your crew did it
hes like a fag on dildos hes always upping his own shit
get it? ...detrimentals like a stillborn baby dieing a early death
sorry 'dog' newbie crews cant save your life cause they aint 'vets' yet
wait,..you clame you do text and audio, you say you do it all
damn...if your skills are universal its a small world after all
your downfalls 1000 pounds of presure right in your face
when my punch conects your face caves in, like saddams hiding place
U thought u were a 'gifted' rapper, but ur text? Looks like u left-it-in-wrappers..
I mean damn, "El Veterano"... Who the fuck has heard of a mexican-rapper?...
decent attempt at a lil personal could've been better tho
The pic in ya avatar is jus who you wannabe, and sadly never gonna be..
And now i'ma refer to you as 'Anterior' the way you always seem to 'front on me'...
wording a lil off it seems weird but decent attempt coo bar
I thought u were different, but then i realised when it comes to wack theres only one-sort..
Heres one-thought..... like cicumcision ima leave this fuckin dick cut-short...
played
Cos you're not an emcee, so don't be suprised if your side of the poll don't see-votes..
I mean you've got 300 posts and 2 battles, all you seem to do is fuckin free-post...
nice personal
Fake veteran, i didnt wanna break it to ya but truthfully we all think ur quite-gay..
And i know ure not a phat(fat) rapper cos ur classed as a god damn light-weight...
nice lil personal and wordplay
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you came to rapbattles running your mouth but got no respect
cause your like a vollyball ref, you only talk loud over the net
played concept volleyball/net
forget your songs they get no replys... unless your crew did it
hes like a fag on dildos hes always upping his own shit
flows off but the punch is nice
get it? ...detrimentals like a stillborn baby dieing a early death
sorry 'dog' newbie crews cant save your life cause they aint 'vets' yet
played concept vets/dogs
wait,..you clame you do text and audio, you say you do it all
damn...if your skills are universal its a small world after all
lol i like this line
your downfalls 1000 pounds of presure right in your face
when my punch conects your face caves in, like saddams hiding place
not really feeling this bin laden would have been a better choice
overall det had the better personals, multis, and punches and every other category el didnt do bad tho
my vote
detrimental
vote= El Veterano
cuz his punches hit harder and his were funnier: ex
wait,..you clame you do text and audio, you say you do it all
damn...if your skills are universal its a small world after all
very good punch i like it and punches win battles not multis n shit
Pz
<center>REPRESENTING OZ HIP HOP</center>
Breakdown:
Punches-EV
Personals-D
Flow-D
Metas-EV
Wordplay-EV
Structure-D
Enjoyment-EV
Vote-EV
His Shit Wuz Just Better Overall And His Punches Werent Played Like The Herb Above Me Sed And Detrimental You R Just Whack Dont Do Text At All Give It Up Man
Peace
El Veterano takes this...
Some witty punches outshined the simplistic nature of Detrimental's verse....
The first bar from Det was just horrible with the most simple scheme I've seen...
Veterano came consistent with nice punches
Vote- El Veterano
Peep me vs whoever...
I'm sure to have an open battle
AI
Like chrit said it was more complex and harder punches and flow was smooth too ,his punches kept me intrested and shit
vote: Veterano
VOTE ON THIS PLZ
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=101455
Vote - El Vet
flow was about the same for both but the punches easily went to El Vet...the volleyball line was better than the rest of your verse
not that you did bad, el vet came better
detriment, dont explain your punches...if people dont catch it then they should learn to read
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who the fuck explained punches you dumb fuck
man this shit is wack as hell LMFAO!!!!!!!!!!!
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stop bitching and just accept it like a man.
one more vote to close this.
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i need one more vote to close this....come on guys, this isnt as wack as most the battles in front lines, lets get 1 more vote so we could close this.
uppin this
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that cat that voted for me didnt poll his vote lmfao
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