u kno the rules.
spit first.
10 lines
no d/r
no feedin
no crew
no hate
no ...nothin wrong lol
ummm just spit u got til 7 eastern time
go...
LyricalJedi
GaZeeBo
u kno the rules.
spit first.
10 lines
no d/r
no feedin
no crew
no hate
no ...nothin wrong lol
ummm just spit u got til 7 eastern time
go...
Aiight Son
1. gazeebo I knock yo ass out like my name was Deebo/ smoking yo ass like a crackhead on primos/ your game is weak like Terry Teagle/ 2. Nigga you get fucked up like sex on a helicopter/ scar yo ass like a propeller cut to your arm/ your whole style I disarm/3. Nigga I'm a one man show like masterbation/ I strike with no hestation/ It's time for lyrical penatration/ 4. Lyrically I'm bending you over like a perdendicular angle/ I slam yo ass like my name was Kurt Angle/ your whole style I dismangle/ hit you from every mothafuckin angle/ 5. Nigga like where you are from you shooting blanks/ Nigga you uptight like Billy Blanks/6. Nigga you worst then Mack 10/ as this rhyme end/ along with your career nigga you sweeter then Britney Spears
aight chekcin in ill spit asap .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ..................................................
your showin symptoms of wackness, the way my scripts gotcha scared/
losin the mic on stage, babblin bullshit ..are you mentally impaired??/
you clame to be good and say your sicker than the flu/
but I control bitches like you,you better speed up im in ur rear view/
an unsolved case... why are you attracted to men and quick to chase??/
Natural Afinity for Sex Adiction's (NASA) makin less progress than programs for space/
you gotta realize defeat, I make memories repeat like two Ctrl+Alt+Delete's/
you wouldnt have a taste for the street even if you chewed on concrete/
broken down, like decayin veggies, these Herbs will Turn-up(turnip) Dead/
no need to bleed...ill leave your texts CAPPED & RED instead/
lets get some votes
and for the nasa line.........the words before it start with the letters N A S A
and a turnip is a vegetable
VOTES******************************************88
ite wack shit but,
gaz gets this with an all rnd betta verse with harder punches work on your personals do man.
nice flow and structure,
lyrical if you structured your verse and hit abit harder you wud be ok.
not bad but vote- gaz
now hit this up now plz http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=102351 ..............thx............pz
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Gaz-good punches,good flow,good vocab,consistant
LJ-ok punches,work on flow,poor structure,inconsistant
Vote:Gazeebo
plz drop an honest vote on dis
^^my bad i accidently hit submit here it is
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=102394
LyricalJedi...you gotta fix your structure...I wasn't feelin that at all...thats mainly what lost you the battle. U have sum iight vocab but ur punches seemed forced at were not hittin at all. Gazeebo took this battle handsdown as he displayed a good structure, flow, and some good hitting punches.
Vote- Gazeebo
Return the favour...both of you...by dropping and honest vote on the battle in my sig and my battle vs J Goodz floating around the 1st page frontliens sumwhere titled "who wanna battle" or sumthin like dat.
cmon man http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=102351 i took the time.......thx..............pz
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GAZEEBO
punches
flow----
jedi had messed up bars...
chumped up.....
harder hitting verse came from.... GAzeebo
vote-GAzeebo
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Well... gazeebo you ain't a newb no more.
Stop taking challenges like these.
GTazeebo totally outclassed his contender with better structure and therefore better flow,enjoyment,sustainment,wordplay,and everything else but the kitchen sink.
Vote on this... I took my time so should you...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=102471
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